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RachaelMole on Being An Online Writer
Hey! Welcome to the dark side :P Follow me @Rachaelmole ... I will point you towards some awesome… more
RachaelMole on The Hunters (The Hunters Trilogy: Book1)
Hey, I understand why you would like to have a glossary with this information in it and it is really… more
RachaelMole on The Family Disappointments
@shnuffeluv, so much better, the last line is now really punchy. I love this blurb :)
RachaelMole on Method and Madness
You should delete the words that aren't necessary to the sentence, they just alter the flow of the… more
RachaelMole on New Born
The first paragraph is really confusing, what is he trying to open? Why won't his eyes open? In the… more
RachaelMole on New Born
I would definitely consider adding some more information to this- Is the war between… more
RachaelMole on The Family Disappointments
I think you should delete the 'Because' at the beginning of the last sentence, it makes more of an… more
RachaelMole on The Dreamcatchers
Really good, you have a talent for ending chapters leaving people wanting more!
RachaelMole on The Dreamcatchers
Lovely end to the chapter, just enough mystery to hook me into the next chapter without making the… more
RachaelMole on The Dreamcatchers
Your writing style to so lovely, the flow is just spot on. I love reading about stories that include… more
RachaelMole on The Dreamcatchers
I'm hooked! Great introduction :)
RachaelMole on Penana's top warriors of a story
Thank you for the lovely review! I'm so glad that you think the imagery is good and the writing… more
RachaelMole on Wicked Intentions
Great premise for a story, but the introduction is pretty long! I can help you shorten it if you… more
RachaelMole on Glory
@Alef Magnus, - an original combination that has made for a truly original story.
RachaelMole on Glory
@Alef Magnus, You set it up all so well, just the right amount of clues and information. Really well… more
RachaelMole on Glory
@Alef Magnus, You write so well, at the end of every chapter I had to keep going to see what was… more
RachaelMole on Glory
@Alef Magnus, - haha, the best plot twists are the ones the author never saw coming either...
RachaelMole on Glory
@Alef Magnus, haha, I did!! Its so good! Good to hear you have plans for Jagger :P
RachaelMole on Glory
Where has Jagger disappeared off to?! Can't wait for the next instalment!
RachaelMole on Glory
PLOT TWIST!