As I told you before, this story looks like it'll be good. As @RachaelMole mentioned, some of it is a little confusing (and there is a considerable amount of grammatical errors), but overall I really like the prose. The story is really interesting, too. I like that you have robots and humans more or less coexisting, though maybe not so much coexisting because there seems to be a war and whatnot, haha. I also really like the cover art. :)
The first paragraph is really confusing, what is he trying to open? Why won't his eyes open? In the second paragraph, at the beginning of the first sentence, what is 'it'? Apart from that, your descriptions are really good, as is your use of imagery!