Thank you so much for first place! This contest was very fun to do! Also I just realized my mistake with the reflection thing but I was thinking that maybe because of all the glowing stuff the reflection would be visible. But again, ur point counts.
And the other once about being concerned to go home... Yeaaa I should've added something to that. I mean, she might not even want to go home so there's that... Well, my mistake, thank you for pointing it out!
Oh I wouldn't call her lack of concern to go home a mistake. I interpreted 'herbs for mother' to mean mother was sick, so I wondered where was her concern.
And the other once about being concerned to go home... Yeaaa I should've added something to that. I mean, she might not even want to go home so there's that... Well, my mistake, thank you for pointing it out!
Aaand thank you for the compliments! :)
Oh I wouldn't call her lack of concern to go home a mistake. I interpreted 'herbs for mother' to mean mother was sick, so I wondered where was her concern.