讀完了VIA所撰寫的《斷劍之王與預歌聖女》。617Please respect copyright.PENANA7J5mL9McT3
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這邊簡單講一下感想。617Please respect copyright.PENANADtaMrTdvEv
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本作行文流暢,能很輕鬆的閱讀,整體的節奏感比起蒼劍開場所呈現出的緊湊風格,我更喜歡這樣的步調。
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一切都十分自然、合理,且饒富趣味。角色方面,也都演出得十分可愛。617Please respect copyright.PENANAKq2F6XdNFZ
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劇情而言,本作埋藏不少伏筆,而且這樣的轉折都不禁讓人眼睛為之一亮。我個人非常喜歡。617Please respect copyright.PENANA7nQdJdH1mL
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要說有所遺憾的話,個人認為斷劍場面,男主角演說是勾起熱血的橋段,但感覺這樣的情緒到下一章,輪到女主表達自己想法時,有點被斷掉。617Please respect copyright.PENANAMtON8qFwQo
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或許可以男女主兩邊的演說交換一下順序,男主先受到質疑,眾人用異樣眼光看他,男主正要開口,女主卻先表達自己的想法(有可能依然受到質疑),最後再換男主宣達自己的想法,洗清眾人的疑惑,並且讓這一幕在熱血中結束。617Please respect copyright.PENANAgJet6lqn47
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我個人是比較偏好這樣的安排,當然也尊重作者的想法。617Please respect copyright.PENANALWoNyeEGw1
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另外,在三人的帳篷橋段,我自已的話是比較喜歡再塞點福利,不過這是我個人的願望就是了XD617Please respect copyright.PENANA3WuTwIsGVu
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至於戰爭場面,本作有逐步炒熱氣氛,並帶出轉折,我蠻喜歡的。617Please respect copyright.PENANAD5ybl9l2Mn
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以結尾來說,女主有種沒有發揮作用的感覺,或者是說戲份有點少,雖然知道她中間有發揮自己的能力,但或許可以再強化女僕跟女主之間的不同。617Please respect copyright.PENANA9CztzAtKEw
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一位按照指示承受不安卻依然打算靜靜等待男主回來,一位卻是感知到危險想要去救他,兩者之間的理念衝突。但最後因為女主的堅持,所以兩人做出行動,進而讓男主得救之類的。算是再增加一點他們的戲份和補足他們心中的想法吧。617Please respect copyright.PENANAWGugwrhKfF
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而原本我是想說女主會再用另一種方式,發展出新的能力,並對預歌的意義有新的詮釋,不過從終章顯示出的主旨來說,算是有解釋不走這樣劇情的原因,也能理解作者的設計,算是能夠接受的。617Please respect copyright.PENANA1rOKIbHhsd
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總結來說,這是一部相當好看的作品。要是搭配插畫,付梓成書,並告訴我這是已經上市的作品,我也會相信,並且乖乖掏錢。617Please respect copyright.PENANAXn71se85SG
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而放眼整個蕉園,這目前是我最喜歡的一部作品。617Please respect copyright.PENANAu01zc1HkpK
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希望作者能繼續寫下去。617Please respect copyright.PENANAO36MjaG73t
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大概是這樣。617Please respect copyright.PENANAJMxourwsPK
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有興趣的朋友,歡迎閱讀看看。617Please respect copyright.PENANAs5sXaKWeOd
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