我花了幾天的時間讀完了蜂蜜兔的《我喜歡上沒有心跳的她》。
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接下來分享一下心得。
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先從封面來說吧,我覺得圖真的超酷的,切西亞真的很像beatless 的女主蕾西亞,個人也挺喜歡那張圖的。342Please respect copyright.PENANA7dswddmlCa
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(順帶一提,我超愛 ClariS 的 primalove 這首歌──出自beatless 動畫ED)342Please respect copyright.PENANAwZYbBDjtWz
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另外,關於每章的名字,我幾乎都知道是neta哪部作品,感覺很有創意。342Please respect copyright.PENANAkzjZxxBV3J
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接著,是關於故事內容的個人意見。如果有我看漏或是說錯的、或者您不這麼認為的還請見諒。342Please respect copyright.PENANAKUpDMvl1FT
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首先是一開始的展開,雖然有點老套,但相信許多人就是愛這味,我還蠻喜歡的。342Please respect copyright.PENANAfskJyFXA54
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在角色刻畫上,確實如蜂蜜兔所說,女主切西亞的刻畫太少,打從歌會之後就更有種趕火車的感覺,或許起碼能在後面的約會劇情中,加重刻劃這位重要角色。342Please respect copyright.PENANAf7NsUsZ1sQ
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男主方面,是常見的濫好人主人翁。不只收留切西亞,還打從心裡接納她,讓人很有好感。342Please respect copyright.PENANAiMKC7C3390
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有點遺憾的是,故事中似乎沒有提到他是在何種機緣下去做駭客、或者為什麼擁有高超的實力,也有可能是我漏讀了也不一定。342Please respect copyright.PENANA8lNGHC0eCn
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在主要女角色上,Eris是我蠻喜歡的角色。這裡就不劇透其他讀者她的本名了。十分可惜的是,故事中好像沒說明到為何她取名為Eris,以及唱歌對她來說是有著什麼樣的意義。我想這應該是部分讀者會好奇的地方,或許可以再多加著墨。342Please respect copyright.PENANA3CmBvkm34M
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至於金毛學妹,確實在她的性癖上有許多刻劃,我覺得蠻特別的。而男主的死黨,那個消波塊和海景前排我每看一次就笑一次,那邊的對話很有趣。342Please respect copyright.PENANA7baYA51bsG
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個人最喜歡的段落是天才王子,咳咳,我是說歌會的段落,我覺得在歌詞中間,插入回憶段和獨白,給人的感覺很棒,而且也十分有節奏感。不知不覺間會感動起來。342Please respect copyright.PENANABi4NsIIRMs
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至於在結尾部分則顯得稍微平淡,或許可以再用多一點點的篇幅,描述和刻劃兩人最終的那一幕。342Please respect copyright.PENANAf94G4ewzXr
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總結來說,我很喜歡這個故事。342Please respect copyright.PENANAf96bJEffjs
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各位有興趣的話,歡迎參考看看。342Please respect copyright.PENANAg7XkxwRP1e
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