譯外之音．Read between the lines．行間を読む - 永恆的詩歌、夏天與你

如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDYpRHRoWqS

一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC3lRW5VqDl

分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?

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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.

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Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,

狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX7m1M1vwhV
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And summer's lease hath all too short a date.

夏日的時光稍縱即逝。521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLloeSFL8j1
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Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,

烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjylSW4neEF
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And often is his gold complexion dimmed,

金色面容轉眼黯然失色，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMUjN9pUjjy
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And every fair from fair sometime declines,

一切美麗終不免凋敝，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH1FM9j76tI
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By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;

不論天意無常或有常。521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡidUpj45qJK
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But thy eternal summer shall not fade

但你的長夏永不褪色，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4ivLqL7lMz
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Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,

你的美麗也永不消失，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIDyh09RIDX
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Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,

死亡陰影不能困住你，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwTjMVmfxjR
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When in eternal lines to time thou growest.

你與永恆的詩句同壽。521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2NOnakyoWg
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So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,

世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，521Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgpLGXLW09i
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So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.

此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。

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