這次跟大家分享五月天《我不願讓你一個人》的歌詞翻譯練習。
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網上大多版本用的是I don't want to let you be alone,這裡我用了在英語世界裡更自然、而且語氣更難捨難離的I don't want to leave you alone。翻譯感情細膩的文字時,除了客觀技巧以外,更需要和原文以及原作者共情,才能譯出同樣感染人心的文字。
作詞:阿信250Please respect copyright.PENANAEqkoUInbT5
作曲:阿信 冠佑250Please respect copyright.PENANAKpyCU2yEIJ
翻譯:弄墨
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你說呢,明知你不在還是會問
“What would you say?” I ask, even though you aren't there250Please respect copyright.PENANA5vSqB1upuP
空氣,卻不能代替你出聲
The air cannot speak on your behalf250Please respect copyright.PENANAmWCUvCTPE2
習慣,像永不癒合的固執傷痕
Habits are stubborn wounds that never heal250Please respect copyright.PENANAc7o55RmWCT
一思念就撕裂靈魂
tearing my soul apart whenever I start missing you
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把相片讓你能保存多洗一本
I get an extra album for you to keep 250Please respect copyright.PENANAK5pfXbJo5H
毛衣,也為你準備多一層250Please respect copyright.PENANAbasKdOz2T5
and an extra sweater for you to keep warm250Please respect copyright.PENANAat7NUw8Pjx
但是你孤單時刻安慰的體溫
Yet, when you’re lonely and need comforting warmth250Please respect copyright.PENANAtjG2ku7EgI
怎麼為你多留一份
how do I reserve it for you?
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我不願讓你一個人,一個人在人海浮沉
I don’t want to leave you alone drifting in the sea of people250Please respect copyright.PENANA2B6PJHddC2
我不願你獨自走過風雨的時分
I don’t want to leave you alone walking through the storms250Please respect copyright.PENANAo9CKvFS4vH
我不願讓你一個人,承受這世界的殘忍
I don’t want to leave you alone suffering in this cruel world250Please respect copyright.PENANAVhQ7q7Kei1
我不願眼淚陪你到永恆
I don’t want tears going along with you till eternity
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你走後,愛情的遺跡像是空城
When you're gone, the remains of our love a forsaken town250Please respect copyright.PENANAl9JbjHxomA
遺落,你杯子手套和笑聲
where your cup, gloves and laughter reside250Please respect copyright.PENANAG6PPVcbakb
最後,你只帶走你脆弱和單純
In the end, you brought your delicacy and innocence with you250Please respect copyright.PENANAzSz1gFGDKL
和我最放不下的人
together with the person I can't let go of
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也許未來,你會找到懂你疼你更好的人
Perhaps someday you’ll find a better one who knows you and loves you250Please respect copyright.PENANAx1GiSp59KM
下段旅程,你一定要更幸福豐盛
Your next journey must be richer and more blissful
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我不願讓你一個人,一個人在人海浮沉
I don’t want to leave you alone drifting in the sea of people
我不願你獨自走過風雨的時分
I don’t want to leave you alone walking through the storms
我不願讓你一個人,承受這世界的殘忍
I don’t want to leave you alone suffering in this cruel world
我不願眼淚陪你到永恆
I don’t want tears going along with you till eternity
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你說呢,明知你不在還是會問
“What would you say?” I ask, even though you aren't there
只因,習慣你滿足的眼神
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只是,我最後一個奢求的可能,只求你有快樂人生
My last, perhaps extravagant wish, is for you to live a happy life250Please respect copyright.PENANAfOIRbxUhEd
只求命運帶你去一段全新的旅程
All I wish is that you are taken on a whole new journey250Please respect copyright.PENANAutMvLFGRTI
往幸福的天涯飛奔
Speeding towards a world of happiness250Please respect copyright.PENANAO4af0umN3m
別回頭就往前飛奔250Please respect copyright.PENANAT62OJclkYt
Please don’t look back, just go forward250Please respect copyright.PENANAQM0czy6khp
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請忘了我還一個人
Please forget that I'm still alone