我覺得少年好卑微啊，我不該讓人理我這句挺傷感。可是原因不夠強烈，少年以前的狂妄沒有表現出來，所以感受不到那個轉折與變化。人物顯得單一，但是卑微的刻畫是有的，尤其最後的那句「我不該讓人理我」。413Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7q0Z9aDibw
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