100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeadpnJebNa
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以怪物為主題：400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlr8PK2pJre
創挑還沒有結果啊！400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf3emyIm65E
有了嗎？400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkxDN7ehyLX
還沒啊……400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG1YOXNH42Z
怎麼還沒呢？400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7TNAXx8rk9
怎麼呢……400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlPzvXT2T6g
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiuC6ooNkcQ
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ86WbSZR3Gm
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIxtR0uLFgZ
今天會把報告交上來吧？400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiqLtCnR3AG
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWp8Oeou3or
啊！有怪獸！400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡarT9a5ZcOC
哪裡？那裡？400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKeq1WyXZIi
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTVEostGked
就在你你我的時間裡！400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhbbrv3eg9W
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYBQ1L5EkqZ
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～400Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVegTezo1sg
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