100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGlFOWROTse
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以怪物為主題：148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhmJ7vIcRff
創挑還沒有結果啊！148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFy2wNCbSxb
有了嗎？148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVGi8mPLsTj
還沒啊……148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHQ2W4tpHFj
怎麼還沒呢？148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPscIO2AXu6
怎麼呢……148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA19okM3HJu
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9eGJG4E4i2
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOcwvmF8Uha
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyo4OsCawLB
今天會把報告交上來吧？148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtp0VVIYaaZ
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgMjTVfW6TN
啊！有怪獸！148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡavULIBez3T
哪裡？那裡？148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCgwFYMD6At
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDgkpJtP6Dn
就在你你我的時間裡！148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGZaH8QTLO4
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbudPADAjEe
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmdpV6JJBSq
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