100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvJzmWx7MRc
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以怪物為主題：356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9PC7XRCD3j
創挑還沒有結果啊！356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR0cZdVQtvN
有了嗎？356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPKg5mfvNKB
還沒啊……356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM0LvS5CZmF
怎麼還沒呢？356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOUGX6pS472
怎麼呢……356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlJ6q7jtXAS
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB8AV1VAsYO
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR1qtSnlcbS
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMDZzw9NdXA
今天會把報告交上來吧？356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6gh7yuQPSt
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1HuZpdmQUi
啊！有怪獸！356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPbdtA5ds3E
哪裡？那裡？356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqXrLuGwcMY
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡclBQvMBI5B
就在你你我的時間裡！356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡou364dB8vO
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn9ktoL0GDa
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～356Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX6MMrTuIl7
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