100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCxBMsmjBue
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以怪物為主題：27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK24FisPURU
創挑還沒有結果啊！27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbO5vbeodsX
有了嗎？27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmdJDahfbFy
還沒啊……27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyva3uZsjQY
怎麼還沒呢？27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJnT79rOCS1
怎麼呢……27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKPmJOViUea
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnnqeDLuhrA
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRNgghux7zH
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYHt9ElzmRg
今天會把報告交上來吧？27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3mfTAwvWEi
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡelwLcM9Yak
啊！有怪獸！27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHNOmwzk4Lp
哪裡？那裡？27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeMHLztmKcc
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡagc0pUyqNr
就在你你我的時間裡！27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXDhvDg1bMD
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKJhabZ25Z7
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～27Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGPeu48rZOr
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