100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3HN3I7nvA1
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以怪物為主題：80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1AayMc7uvo
創挑還沒有結果啊！80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2STDwmgR5A
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怎麼呢……80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEdgO1FiCq9
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCYcmEiuiF0
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOcbCHo0UBP
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdGMC0HN20m
今天會把報告交上來吧？80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7TI3xhxDHX
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啊！有怪獸！80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKgtox8Xd4H
哪裡？那裡？80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV617VzR1Cl
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生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLGbZENf0UL
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～80Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc2dB1V6s2h
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