最後一句，「少了它我好不舒服」挺可愛的，不知為什麼會令人會心一笑，明明是悲傷的小說。但是還不到很悲，感覺有兩段「繞過視角」是第一段，然後「不要我了」是第二段。但是你用了自卑的愛情，可我感受不到主角的自卑，就覺得只是錯過，之前不喜歡或看不到這個人，現在喜歡了，人家卻不喜歡主角了。361Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOlIhMLB8zS
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