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虛言
ISSUE #106
Author: 虛冲
虛言
Author: 虛冲
ISSUE #106
【七律】春花落
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春花落處連山嶺　續念青衣昔日家

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[1] 押廣東話 /aa/ 韻。504Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3L4rrw036M
[2] 春花落：青衣島之古稱，現為島上東南部的一個地方，亦為本人以往住處窗外之風景。504Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH8fYYuuS5Y
[3] 青衣：青衣島，在香港的葵青區，為本人成長的地區。504Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBuevoiQ7wq
[4] 原創作挑戰在此。

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虛言
Poetry
Last updated: Jul 15, 2026
Total word count: 21,757
Total reading time: 73 Minutes
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虛冲
香港作者 香港 詩詞 詩 香港人 詞 宋詞 虛冲 格律詩 虛言 七絶 五絶 七律 五律
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