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[1] 押廣東話 /eoi/ 韻。178Please respect copyright.PENANA6ARjRPLwIu
[2] 習習籠中鳥:引自左思《詠史八首.其八》:「習習籠中鳥,舉翮觸四隅。」178Please respect copyright.PENANApVjevhbIN8
[3] 第廿五次德尼思化創作會嘅主題係「衰果」。178Please respect copyright.PENANAeefjPGBu7c