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筆流暢舒服,看上去與故事匹配,讀得非常舒服。在這個故事塑造這個氛圍裏面,其實都沒有什麼好挑剔的了。549Please respect copyright.PENANAWK2hzJlXjC
唯獨有點附加意見就是,既然作者已經非常擅於掌握節奏同寫到好溫馨細膩的感情,建議日後寫愛情小說時,在劇情或者世界觀裏面下點功夫,讓故事看上去「特別」一點。549Please respect copyright.PENANAzB45zu9nye
畢竟如今現實純愛的故事已經有點不待見,所以要吸引讀者 / 編輯眼球的話,就可能要在其他方面花點功夫哦。加油!8964 copyright protection545PENANAim0c8LdqRK 維尼
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單就此篇而言已是無甚可再挑剔之處。8964 copyright protection545PENANAdyIpL3pHJY 維尼
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唯一可以挑刺就是對於「十年」這點算是較為牽強。如果寫長少少的話,可以是作者想17歲出書但失敗,然後再用十年參賽、投稿,成為一個知名作家,這樣就會扣題扣得好很多了。549Please respect copyright.PENANAuHGMrWMVWO
其實這一篇也可以寫長,變成一部5、6萬的中短篇小說,我覺得也挺有潛質的。8964 copyright protection545PENANAqBQ9hyxQzQ 維尼
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當初文楓你們也這麼說……549Please respect copyright.PENANASRkMv4CzvV
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一起來迎接最後一位參賽者~549Please respect copyright.PENANAOPiXgjgeBc
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很不錯的玄幻作品。其實這種參賽作品,更是限制了一萬字內的比賽,要撰寫玄幻或異世界類的作品是困難的。549Please respect copyright.PENANAqsOLAKrk9O
首先很聰明先用現代及香港作背景,同時以茅山道法這香港人較熟悉的元素,變相不需要花費太多筆墨就能夠寫出玄幻元素。549Please respect copyright.PENANAuqNVgVy8Cn
整體從文筆、劇情、橋段等等實屬不俗。549Please respect copyright.PENANAKY94g6nDwp
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為了楓成而入寫作坑的人……莫名熱血啊!549Please respect copyright.PENANARkxfn68qdt
以有限的字數建構完整的世界觀不容易,我認為作者在這方面是成功的。549Please respect copyright.PENANAAoQql39iiA
不過可以再留意內容的剪裁,精減一些與主線無關的敍述,如三位後人的感情線,可使情節更為緊湊。8964 copyright protection545PENANAnjfsY2pkqn 維尼
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優點是世界觀與故事完成度高,打鬥戲精彩。549Please respect copyright.PENANAblWFsg6PUp
缺點是劇情枝節太多,只是整體瑕不掩瑜,算是海選中其中一篇精品。8964 copyright protection545PENANAET19bSeOBy 維尼
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1. 此等短篇字數有限,切忌得隴望蜀。不要野心太大創造過多角色,在一萬以內的短文之中,人多反而容易手腳亂。549Please respect copyright.PENANAuKnvH7Gmfp
2. 對於傳統茅山道術知識的引用需要注意一下,適量拋出會顯得淵博,但過多則會適得其反,有賣弄之感。549Please respect copyright.PENANA5h5r6T7TFj
3. 如第一點所言,三名小主角其實性格同存在感都不算突出,比較流於表面,尤其感情戲其實頗嫌累贅。下次設計劇情時要注意一下。8964 copyright protection545PENANALSPjFQ4UHA 維尼
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嗯549Please respect copyright.PENANABWSHNHTImR
這個作者是我認識的人呢549Please respect copyright.PENANAagKlCO8hHQ
見證到他的成長也挺欣慰的8964 copyright protection545PENANAYbKRPAENv1 維尼
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東南老人家模式啟動了8964 copyright protection545PENANAd87fx7UQBH 維尼
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東叔,一起來玩⭕️❌吧8964 copyright protection545PENANARXdiIhebaU 維尼
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郁郁如煙消於天549Please respect copyright.PENANAZVDQQaWPTz
涼靜融549Please respect copyright.PENANACQiFVc6eBd
Blackative549Please respect copyright.PENANAvVGzOSp2C1
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文楓8964 copyright protection545PENANAn1uYYxwYV2 維尼
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接下來請三位退場549Please respect copyright.PENANAFiaxpz1UEA
到自己的休息室給8位候選區的參賽者排邀請順序哦!8964 copyright protection545PENANAkOwEfAk1IJ 維尼
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我覺得下一站天后是很可惜的8964 copyright protection545PENANAMQXS8q8pDJ 維尼
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嗯,就是子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億。8964 copyright protection545PENANAoCzRmlg6TU 維尼
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你也是打滿高分的。8964 copyright protection545PENANAvHYbwr5J7o 維尼
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嗯8964 copyright protection545PENANAM5w6xIdRNK 維尼
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如果當初沒有用到✊✊的機會549Please respect copyright.PENANABq9V2dC6M9
你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection545PENANAwzND5akMX7 維尼
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應該也不會。因為拳拳是直接順序第一名的選項549Please respect copyright.PENANA8STnqBCA6n
我覺得作者如果入選的話是紀言會比較符合他/她的風格549Please respect copyright.PENANAmWb6XX13Y5
我雖然能給到意見,但要入隊的話我還是想選一些我自覺能幫助更多的同學8964 copyright protection545PENANAIT0Dhoqmyy 維尼
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你有甚麼想跟選你的參賽者說的嗎?8964 copyright protection545PENANAhvkUx3KkO1 維尼
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多謝選擇我。549Please respect copyright.PENANAVXyMx5FAA8
希望我作為導師不會讓你們失望。8964 copyright protection545PENANAuOtKPZ1mGt 維尼
我能否一個個說?8964 copyright protection545PENANAwEwfSLP4ag 維尼
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可以的8964 copyright protection545PENANAc1vFfw0jPr 維尼
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首先跟日匀 說吧。8964 copyright protection545PENANAuTDpXKnJr9 維尼
其實見到你的文章,我感覺見到一個強化版的「當年自己」。549Please respect copyright.PENANAB3X4Lnj7Fl
你的文字功力甚至比我當年紮實。劇情弱項也跟我當年類同。549Please respect copyright.PENANAv5ABEOANHg
所以我很希望能幫助你寫武俠,加油!8964 copyright protection545PENANAfyFgdAo1m1 維尼
然後到過海巴士的洛羊。549Please respect copyright.PENANALgepbPnWvY
很驚訝你那麼高水準的會選擇我,希望我不會讓你失望!8964 copyright protection545PENANACpAgz5GySh 維尼
最後到逆時。549Please respect copyright.PENANA3H7dgbQ1yU
嗯 ..... 你的文很對我腦波,所以。。。。多謝!!8964 copyright protection545PENANA2bhWhCxquY 維尼
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你會先選那些首選你的參賽者嗎?8964 copyright protection545PENANASVr5UqNJm7 維尼
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其實不會的549Please respect copyright.PENANAZHmF0zza7y
但碰巧這次三個都極中我8964 copyright protection545PENANASsNl5ctcJM 維尼
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明白。549Please respect copyright.PENANAhNJ7zVcsVS
那你邀請順序已經想好了嗎?549Please respect copyright.PENANAjgpatXMHly
有讓你猶豫的部分?8964 copyright protection545PENANAVbRAeA1wdK 維尼
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想好了8964 copyright protection545PENANAcPLaBjQZN4 維尼
1. #19 過海巴士 儀洛羊549Please respect copyright.PENANA5OAxtc1P5p
2. #20 他的故事 日勻8964 copyright protection545PENANAgg01oN2xup 維尼
其他全棄權讓給另外兩位吧www8964 copyright protection545PENANAKeJWF4qRi9 維尼
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竟然這樣!549Please respect copyright.PENANA3crjuvdz4X
你就不怕另外兩位跟你搶嗎?549Please respect copyright.PENANAdvdA1fGr55
這樣你最糟可能只有一人進隊哦!8964 copyright protection545PENANA11V3N0j6m7 維尼
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我覺得他們一定不會搶日匀的。549Please respect copyright.PENANArtMU3NEMn7
另外洛羊他們雖給到很高分,但我覺得他們有另外適合他們的549Please respect copyright.PENANArevMnRDfGk
應該不會跟我搶的wwwww8964 copyright protection545PENANAMOSMll5OWU 維尼
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好的,一起來看看 東南的Flag……549Please respect copyright.PENANA1A1Ppk4mIc
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求不要搶549Please respect copyright.PENANAhUB57wxP0w
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【楓成預備室】8964 copyright protection545PENANA4ALCOegPpa 維尼
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剛才完成了選擇門的部分8964 copyright protection545PENANAya5F2bkvxr 維尼
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是的549Please respect copyright.PENANAhobOEIvIJK
真是艱難的一部份(汗8964 copyright protection545PENANAMTsJZZE6Ma 維尼
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你有感覺哪位參賽者進不了候選區549Please respect copyright.PENANAf5QrwcPZKf
很可惜的嗎?8964 copyright protection545PENANAszmOQSCnU1 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection545PENANAAqDZiYbJ79 維尼
嗯…549Please respect copyright.PENANATBs2b0PGFn
真要說的話549Please respect copyright.PENANAJqZhRzVELj
子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億是不錯的作品549Please respect copyright.PENANAt0T8CheU9F
只可惜名額有限8964 copyright protection545PENANANFgz5pTGbU 維尼
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那如果✊✊現在還可以用,你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection545PENANAhh6wVkdbWv 維尼
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也不會,哈哈549Please respect copyright.PENANA1OPhxjmYPg
因為入選剩下來的選手也很出色8964 copyright protection545PENANAEJtCq8uHuu 維尼
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是的。549Please respect copyright.PENANASJ3fFVyeWH
想問一下549Please respect copyright.PENANAKdzM8wsOIf
日勻的作品——他的故事8964 copyright protection545PENANASUZCfkP0LA 維尼
你好像是給他打滿高分的,549Please respect copyright.PENANA0tD3mCyR2D
但你好似沒有給他舉圈的吧?8964 copyright protection545PENANAKt2aoZvCtG 維尼
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是的哈哈,大概是圓圈太有限了(眼神死8964 copyright protection545PENANA8nijfxqjUE 維尼
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如果好像文楓落得三叉的下場,你會像紀言那樣出拳嗎?8964 copyright protection545PENANAmyDxfHQVLZ 維尼
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這個,大概南師父不會給叉哈哈,所以我很放心549Please respect copyright.PENANA1eOEOGa06S
所以應該也不會8964 copyright protection545PENANAISFFX6AqGo 維尼
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你就算好了他們想法是不是ww8964 copyright protection545PENANABO7ZxfSvtp 維尼
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沒錯!549Please respect copyright.PENANApwPMeQCR7e
你看洗版南師父就知道549Please respect copyright.PENANAvctoKdJRv1
古風武俠,他不會放過!8964 copyright protection545PENANAnAQ2cRjblu 維尼
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那說回來,8位候選區的選手們,你是會怎麼給他們排邀請優先序呢?549Please respect copyright.PENANAoUkbWHF85L
因為你不像另外兩位,已經定了第一名邀請的參賽者549Please respect copyright.PENANApZdVx98fiH
你覺得是比較好、自在?549Please respect copyright.PENANATRa84P4Ull
還是比較擔心被搶人呢?8964 copyright protection545PENANA2QJzIeMmKJ 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection545PENANAcG3s7aSmGO 維尼
也不會特別怕啦哈哈8964 copyright protection545PENANATXlQlHdTuT 維尼
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【紀言預備室】8964 copyright protection545PENANAoAsCOc5wyh 維尼
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剛完成了選擇門的部分549Please respect copyright.PENANAuToeM90IY4
有甚麼感想的嗎?8964 copyright protection545PENANA13pDyxkjUd 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection545PENANAh7BEc3ao86 維尼
真的讓人緊張呢549Please respect copyright.PENANAmnII08xDur
其實很多參賽者的實力相差真的不遠549Please respect copyright.PENANARxwbyDvTAT
在抉擇時真的讓人加倍為難8964 copyright protection545PENANAIVzJWosYtW 維尼
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有沒有覺得可惜的參賽者?竟然進不了候選區這樣?8964 copyright protection545PENANAqh15m7eJ05 維尼
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其實此去拾年我覺得是寫得不錯的549Please respect copyright.PENANAUZDLNV9ABn
可是類似的作品有點多549Please respect copyright.PENANACOfAJ74sqM
真的很可惜8964 copyright protection545PENANA2OVDRR4kiL 維尼
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這是你當時沒有給出✊的原因嗎?8964 copyright protection545PENANA3v16KYQT0S 維尼
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此去拾年和十年陽光、董小姐都被我歸到同一類中549Please respect copyright.PENANAg17z87bQNC
嘛,他也寫得很好,但另外兩篇真的是更好8964 copyright protection545PENANAZJIIMaxW5s 維尼
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明白。549Please respect copyright.PENANA7Bl6H1Cw4f
那現在進入了給候選區參賽者排邀請順序的環節549Please respect copyright.PENANAEfTZILEoeB
你有甚麼想法嗎?8964 copyright protection545PENANAl326VZ3xF6 維尼
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說實在的549Please respect copyright.PENANAUrMtgvTX5o
我超級糾結549Please respect copyright.PENANAd1VQvScCDl
尤其是(竟然)有那麼多參賽者選我,壓力倍增呢8964 copyright protection545PENANAtyn3vtSzKQ 維尼
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有想好要根據甚麼去排的?8964 copyright protection545PENANAySZbgKi5zL 維尼
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本來是要跟分數排的,可是後來考慮到題材的問題,又再排了一次549Please respect copyright.PENANAe8grI8HvNS
如上所說,十年陽光和董小姐是在最高分之列549Please respect copyright.PENANAHuq0rz13dO
可是他們的題材有點類近549Please respect copyright.PENANArUhV7myzPV
我想讓我的學員們能接觸多一點不同的類型,這樣聊起來才更有趣549Please respect copyright.PENANAQDohS01nJK
所以嘛,即使二人都是最高分,我還是只會選一個8964 copyright protection545PENANAY2pIEvgjrH 維尼
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說回來,你是參賽者們的最搶手首選導師,就最多人選你8964 copyright protection545PENANAH0ydZSpaYJ 維尼
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當初沒想過這麼多人選我的哈哈549Please respect copyright.PENANAm1SqQr0NmA
畢竟楓成是penana人氣王549Please respect copyright.PENANAuVlzBoUa4B
東南也筆耕了十多年549Please respect copyright.PENANARIqtCnkDwI
說到資歷和寫作的字數,可能我是最少的呢哈哈549Please respect copyright.PENANAXoGJrKysPf
不過也感謝大家的愛戴8964 copyright protection545PENANAx9HFsPyc7L 維尼
我先說我的首選好了549Please respect copyright.PENANAwcG2xSBPwP
(是甚麼呢???????)(自帶效果!)8964 copyright protection545PENANAnmfAsIdyA6 維尼
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不是你說要早點睡的嗎!www8964 copyright protection545PENANAwjjEuKLH4w 維尼
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好了喇549Please respect copyright.PENANAspI84Vftl1
第一位是十年陽光喇549Please respect copyright.PENANA9Dqh8qh4Nc
我要分享一下我的心路歷程XPXP8964 copyright protection545PENANAie03qOYos7 維尼
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可以的~8964 copyright protection545PENANAa1DzDUg8wR 維尼
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第二位就是成功獲得我一拳的獵巫!549Please respect copyright.PENANATU2KcWge9d
第三位其實糾結了超~~~~~~~~~~~久549Please respect copyright.PENANAezDjLyvKj4
是在輪候者和天使的惡作劇之間掙扎了好久8964 copyright protection545PENANAs80YRxvzoB 維尼
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但輪候者的Blackative 很厲害,寫了兩篇不一樣的作品~8964 copyright protection545PENANAxYrguQOTra 維尼
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輪候者是非常成熟的作品,風格也已經定形了549Please respect copyright.PENANAzQ9TqjmFad
時限內能寫兩篇也真的很厲害549Please respect copyright.PENANACUlnrXhKY8
不過時間小偷的話我就稍嫌有點負面了549Please respect copyright.PENANAUclWxrcJBy
寫作作為興趣,應該是先令自己開心,然後再看看其他的可能的549Please respect copyright.PENANAsUmoInJv0x
至於天使的惡作劇,雖然分數上不及輪候者,但是他的文風很對我的腦波,我也覺得他有潛力549Please respect copyright.PENANAi4lGFMeFdt
所以第三位一直在他們之間糾結8964 copyright protection545PENANAUFLqvmNUvI 維尼
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最後,你的選擇是……8964 copyright protection545PENANAze1ld7vSzI 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection545PENANAMcEAat1CJz 維尼
就是⋯⋯549Please respect copyright.PENANA40637QwwEa
天使的惡作劇!549Please respect copyright.PENANAl9HGUplGKd
我希望Blackative能被其他導師收入戰隊549Please respect copyright.PENANAnj8POCAx0N
他的實力是值得的549Please respect copyright.PENANAToFvQRi5WD
奈何只有三個位置549Please respect copyright.PENANAlS0h6d9PdS
(嘛,規則也是我們三人定的,也沒辦法喇)8964 copyright protection545PENANAgEhkQpZGKy 維尼
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好了……我們就先聽紀言的頭三順序,不然要天亮了8964 copyright protection545PENANADB5y0On50K 維尼
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嘮嘮叨叨了一大堆呢哈哈8964 copyright protection545PENANAW6UG83nbOs 維尼
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謝謝紀言😂8964 copyright protection545PENANAXOEvbaFJK1 維尼
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(邀請順序收集中……)8964 copyright protection545PENANApY7YHM1ZPh 維尼
(節目組整理中……)8964 copyright protection545PENANAft0PDZTJYb 維尼
開始送出組隊邀請!8964 copyright protection545PENANA5AHfcDkKoZ 維尼
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【參賽者預備室】8964 copyright protection545PENANAVUPmp3uSXm 維尼
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有些參賽者和導師們是兩情相悅的,549Please respect copyright.PENANARnnraPaX0i
最終修成正果,可喜可賀!8964 copyright protection545PENANAHMRgefZgnZ 維尼
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恭喜你,成功加入東南/ 紀言 / 楓成戰隊!8964 copyright protection545PENANASyVt7cGpS8 維尼
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:O 我以為係21號先有結果😂 btw thx8964 copyright protection545PENANAyI5jNoQxiB 維尼
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哇!真架?🥰8964 copyright protection545PENANAL24QppT7ba 維尼
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收到了,感謝你這麼晚了還要通知我們這群選手8964 copyright protection545PENANAgbNCQJUg2p 維尼
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感激涕零!🥺🥺8964 copyright protection545PENANA3tMdBzvykm 維尼
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我入圍了?8964 copyright protection545PENANA5utfYO9vMn 維尼
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多謝你8964 copyright protection545PENANAQNZh5vXcX5 維尼
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終於等到消息😭😭8964 copyright protection545PENANA3fjlzcgg7s 維尼
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而有些參賽者就要陷入天人交戰的選擇!549Please respect copyright.PENANAGSJIPnUiOE
面對非首選導師的邀請,是要接受,還是……8964 copyright protection545PENANAnbJubVVkwn 維尼
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導師A誠邀你進入他的戰隊,請問你願意接受嗎?549Please respect copyright.PENANArzN1UhpV7E
提提你,你首選係導師B8964 copyright protection545PENANAKGxriCxolQ 維尼
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雖然冇被導師B選中有啲可惜,但我其實唔介意被分到邊一隊(搔頭8964 copyright protection545PENANAn5QyNS2YPf 維尼
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但導師B有冇講咩?8964 copyright protection545PENANAuLnavuDYv9 維尼
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或者我解釋下先,個情況係:549Please respect copyright.PENANAZKUZ9nJOPl
導師A對你嘅邀請順序高過導師B。549Please respect copyright.PENANAn2YKR5KZkG
如果你拒絕咗,有可能會收到導師B嘅邀請,549Please respect copyright.PENANAXNsGcocjIU
但前提係:當時導師B戰隊未滿人。549Please respect copyright.PENANAIAzTRj4u4s
如果導師B戰隊已經滿人,但你又拒絕咗導師A,549Please respect copyright.PENANArT8oAoNcMy
你就只可以參與復活賽,睇下仲有冇機會入導師B戰隊。8964 copyright protection545PENANAkjMF8hGqZF 維尼
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咁複雜既ODO?!549Please respect copyright.PENANAczH5AhbBTx
喊出嚟,都好賭博喎(つД`)8964 copyright protection545PENANA36gbPogNp4 維尼
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依個我最遲可以幾時答你?8964 copyright protection545PENANAs4lILpfBiW 維尼
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可能……盡快?8964 copyright protection545PENANAqorGFCJ7NN 維尼
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我今晚墊高枕頭諗諗,聽日覆你唔好意思(つД`)8964 copyright protection545PENANAlysv7G0fYz 維尼
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咁就加入導師A嘅戰隊549Please respect copyright.PENANAHwVr1urIp5
我估,咁姐係佢幾欣賞我549Please respect copyright.PENANAZTOIzBgiVh
掛8964 copyright protection545PENANAAnStekjkIE 維尼
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我決定好了(超快549Please respect copyright.PENANAmgyB7408K0
我都係入導師A隊549Please respect copyright.PENANAiU5cypNGXk
唔太敢賭(つД`)8964 copyright protection545PENANAtEXeoRqBZ0 維尼
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【鏡頭關上後】8964 copyright protection545PENANAWVmUXNWRUt 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection545PENANA1mnhqIDM6P 維尼
我有少少寄語卑Blackative,我不如Pm你?8964 copyright protection545PENANA9jcfoYCfzL 維尼
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好8964 copyright protection545PENANAApLXR6THcc 維尼
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首先要講一句好遺憾你入唔到戰隊賽。549Please respect copyright.PENANA56NXocCcjO
你兩篇文喺我眼中都係本次比賽裏面的精品,但我選擇戰隊成員時,實力雖然係其中一個考慮因素,但另外更多係會考慮成員風格同自己夾唔夾,同埋每位成員的潛力等等因素。549Please respect copyright.PENANAMjudEweZgd
你卑我感覺係一個已經相當成熟,好有自己一套嘅作者,無論係時間小偷定係豬果篇我覺得都發揮得唔錯,我讀時都頗有眼前一亮的感覺。549Please respect copyright.PENANA81b3M3enNt
但奈何戰隊賽名額有限,我揀的三位亦係我認為最適合我戰隊的成員,所以就只能忍痛無向你拋出橄欖枝,我相信其餘兩位導師應該都同我一樣,對你落選係感到遺憾的。549Please respect copyright.PENANA7tKLSdtdek
我希望你唔好因為呢個結果就感到氣餒,希望你能夠堅持同繼續寫落去。如果你參加復活賽的話,我亦會非常期待你復活賽的表現,加油!8964 copyright protection545PENANA3kDFgBpkNV 維尼
【海選選秀環節】完!8964 copyright protection545PENANALUMz1EzpYf 維尼
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【第二階段:戰隊/復活賽】「太歲兵團 X 萌動學生小說集2021」寫作營8964 copyright protection545PENANAk38HO2qm1H 維尼
之後還會有很多寫作分享跟幕後花絮讓你看,不要錯過囉!8964 copyright protection545PENANAKZbqzD069x 維尼
參賽者們,8964 copyright protection545PENANArEabaTJV77 維尼
第二階段還有三十二天就要結束了!8964 copyright protection545PENANA48UFlOvwlF 維尼
注意時間哦!8964 copyright protection545PENANA4bNwQ2ch29 維尼
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