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筆流暢舒服,看上去與故事匹配,讀得非常舒服。在這個故事塑造這個氛圍裏面,其實都沒有什麼好挑剔的了。577Please respect copyright.PENANACJxgMrujHG
唯獨有點附加意見就是,既然作者已經非常擅於掌握節奏同寫到好溫馨細膩的感情,建議日後寫愛情小說時,在劇情或者世界觀裏面下點功夫,讓故事看上去「特別」一點。577Please respect copyright.PENANAEGwyn7ZSGH
畢竟如今現實純愛的故事已經有點不待見,所以要吸引讀者 / 編輯眼球的話,就可能要在其他方面花點功夫哦。加油!8964 copyright protection573PENANAgEcXW5WEn0 維尼
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單就此篇而言已是無甚可再挑剔之處。8964 copyright protection573PENANAxigN7IWVv8 維尼
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唯一可以挑刺就是對於「十年」這點算是較為牽強。如果寫長少少的話,可以是作者想17歲出書但失敗,然後再用十年參賽、投稿,成為一個知名作家,這樣就會扣題扣得好很多了。577Please respect copyright.PENANAzksX0DwIIf
其實這一篇也可以寫長,變成一部5、6萬的中短篇小說,我覺得也挺有潛質的。8964 copyright protection573PENANAgLXIoNkrx0 維尼
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很不錯的玄幻作品。其實這種參賽作品,更是限制了一萬字內的比賽,要撰寫玄幻或異世界類的作品是困難的。577Please respect copyright.PENANA2q8tJw9AIO
首先很聰明先用現代及香港作背景,同時以茅山道法這香港人較熟悉的元素,變相不需要花費太多筆墨就能夠寫出玄幻元素。577Please respect copyright.PENANABDdelnNeOf
整體從文筆、劇情、橋段等等實屬不俗。577Please respect copyright.PENANAUCv4kcVcpR
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為了楓成而入寫作坑的人……莫名熱血啊!577Please respect copyright.PENANAX01YPRb0o4
以有限的字數建構完整的世界觀不容易,我認為作者在這方面是成功的。577Please respect copyright.PENANASudb119pmu
不過可以再留意內容的剪裁,精減一些與主線無關的敍述,如三位後人的感情線,可使情節更為緊湊。8964 copyright protection573PENANApDS29dQOxS 維尼
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缺點是劇情枝節太多,只是整體瑕不掩瑜,算是海選中其中一篇精品。8964 copyright protection573PENANAYY4QA5RZAb 維尼
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1. 此等短篇字數有限,切忌得隴望蜀。不要野心太大創造過多角色,在一萬以內的短文之中,人多反而容易手腳亂。577Please respect copyright.PENANAzjPrbGvzY3
2. 對於傳統茅山道術知識的引用需要注意一下,適量拋出會顯得淵博,但過多則會適得其反,有賣弄之感。577Please respect copyright.PENANAxRvttWJSAW
3. 如第一點所言,三名小主角其實性格同存在感都不算突出,比較流於表面,尤其感情戲其實頗嫌累贅。下次設計劇情時要注意一下。8964 copyright protection573PENANAnDV4htViQz 維尼
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這個作者是我認識的人呢577Please respect copyright.PENANA71Zp1hFYGr
見證到他的成長也挺欣慰的8964 copyright protection573PENANAJAQYMqSADB 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection573PENANAwrglReZiLs 維尼
東南老人家模式啟動了8964 copyright protection573PENANAagKNz9MScf 維尼
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東叔,一起來玩⭕️❌吧8964 copyright protection573PENANAua8DycbtZH 維尼
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郁郁如煙消於天577Please respect copyright.PENANAhudZVBwT4O
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Blackative577Please respect copyright.PENANA0n3kWo3giF
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接下來請三位退場577Please respect copyright.PENANASGrelbHyh3
到自己的休息室給8位候選區的參賽者排邀請順序哦!8964 copyright protection573PENANAIuqb51wEjN 維尼
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我覺得下一站天后是很可惜的8964 copyright protection573PENANAdAVQcso395 維尼
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嗯,就是子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億。8964 copyright protection573PENANASamUWdO0vE 維尼
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你也是打滿高分的。8964 copyright protection573PENANAcMWrFEGpdx 維尼
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嗯8964 copyright protection573PENANAorcGP4CwLW 維尼
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如果當初沒有用到✊✊的機會577Please respect copyright.PENANAstTdjOC4vs
你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection573PENANAQVMAdDXQEN 維尼
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應該也不會。因為拳拳是直接順序第一名的選項577Please respect copyright.PENANA6PQwaPV7kv
我覺得作者如果入選的話是紀言會比較符合他/她的風格577Please respect copyright.PENANAYkeuQRPcnb
我雖然能給到意見,但要入隊的話我還是想選一些我自覺能幫助更多的同學8964 copyright protection573PENANAQCaeSdhMZS 維尼
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你有甚麼想跟選你的參賽者說的嗎?8964 copyright protection573PENANAoyogkbkmz8 維尼
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多謝選擇我。577Please respect copyright.PENANAXcLO5Jqmq8
希望我作為導師不會讓你們失望。8964 copyright protection573PENANAqSuqeOvuBM 維尼
我能否一個個說?8964 copyright protection573PENANArcThFKCc0x 維尼
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可以的8964 copyright protection573PENANASnSI7JBV7r 維尼
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首先跟日匀 說吧。8964 copyright protection573PENANAbsuL78HyFt 維尼
其實見到你的文章,我感覺見到一個強化版的「當年自己」。577Please respect copyright.PENANAAcw7cBSVcB
你的文字功力甚至比我當年紮實。劇情弱項也跟我當年類同。577Please respect copyright.PENANAZHsGzeaXbk
所以我很希望能幫助你寫武俠,加油!8964 copyright protection573PENANADfRfay7mmw 維尼
然後到過海巴士的洛羊。577Please respect copyright.PENANAWNBABIK7Zf
很驚訝你那麼高水準的會選擇我,希望我不會讓你失望!8964 copyright protection573PENANApmLe06k7Gy 維尼
最後到逆時。577Please respect copyright.PENANAUcsJBlu2rn
嗯 ..... 你的文很對我腦波,所以。。。。多謝!!8964 copyright protection573PENANAopkwSZipzo 維尼
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你會先選那些首選你的參賽者嗎?8964 copyright protection573PENANA8Vxhhfz33t 維尼
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其實不會的577Please respect copyright.PENANAuCZIVW7xed
但碰巧這次三個都極中我8964 copyright protection573PENANAaEdQPPRJua 維尼
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明白。577Please respect copyright.PENANAD5kCFOaVaT
那你邀請順序已經想好了嗎?577Please respect copyright.PENANAuADeKTVYJP
有讓你猶豫的部分?8964 copyright protection573PENANAKCK2hLPGSf 維尼
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想好了8964 copyright protection573PENANABjt4WI9cOU 維尼
1. #19 過海巴士 儀洛羊577Please respect copyright.PENANAFwrjllv1my
2. #20 他的故事 日勻8964 copyright protection573PENANAanpxJmD5LH 維尼
其他全棄權讓給另外兩位吧www8964 copyright protection573PENANAm20au18YSA 維尼
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竟然這樣!577Please respect copyright.PENANAtZqxAzrinF
你就不怕另外兩位跟你搶嗎?577Please respect copyright.PENANAk5S4HE2YOA
這樣你最糟可能只有一人進隊哦!8964 copyright protection573PENANAodk0iTBBJV 維尼
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我覺得他們一定不會搶日匀的。577Please respect copyright.PENANAKoB0tXhBDj
另外洛羊他們雖給到很高分,但我覺得他們有另外適合他們的577Please respect copyright.PENANADejUCodbbM
應該不會跟我搶的wwwww8964 copyright protection573PENANAjuIk9FvpH9 維尼
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好的,一起來看看 東南的Flag……577Please respect copyright.PENANAFJVdSVucv8
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求不要搶577Please respect copyright.PENANAqTF44nKXNK
😂8964 copyright protection573PENANAC6RC1TUkwp 維尼
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【楓成預備室】8964 copyright protection573PENANAPVapgPuWMZ 維尼
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剛才完成了選擇門的部分8964 copyright protection573PENANAb5mP2RLP9n 維尼
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是的577Please respect copyright.PENANA5P0Xnrwvwj
真是艱難的一部份(汗8964 copyright protection573PENANAFhN59p0gFx 維尼
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你有感覺哪位參賽者進不了候選區577Please respect copyright.PENANA5IESSs0cww
很可惜的嗎?8964 copyright protection573PENANAWxurr6PswW 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection573PENANAycc8tNCTzT 維尼
嗯…577Please respect copyright.PENANArkR50yRsub
真要說的話577Please respect copyright.PENANAzdiCFqVz0w
子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億是不錯的作品577Please respect copyright.PENANAXSvnQq1eJk
只可惜名額有限8964 copyright protection573PENANAd6zJVhLqaI 維尼
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那如果✊✊現在還可以用,你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection573PENANAYnGKsoLA7v 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection573PENANAFIHaPuJSG4 維尼
也不會,哈哈577Please respect copyright.PENANAkS0Rnp7wDs
因為入選剩下來的選手也很出色8964 copyright protection573PENANA52S3NZ5AHu 維尼
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是的。577Please respect copyright.PENANAjWi1Lru7LM
想問一下577Please respect copyright.PENANAf24BTK8ovF
日勻的作品——他的故事8964 copyright protection573PENANAK3nQbil1FX 維尼
你好像是給他打滿高分的,577Please respect copyright.PENANA0iIjQ55VfX
但你好似沒有給他舉圈的吧?8964 copyright protection573PENANAnJgwbGCX2r 維尼
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是的哈哈,大概是圓圈太有限了(眼神死8964 copyright protection573PENANAAFo8eSTnyO 維尼
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如果好像文楓落得三叉的下場,你會像紀言那樣出拳嗎?8964 copyright protection573PENANAUE9MYYLMZO 維尼
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這個,大概南師父不會給叉哈哈,所以我很放心577Please respect copyright.PENANAk1ypUzGQva
所以應該也不會8964 copyright protection573PENANAv9Pfk4GbpT 維尼
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你就算好了他們想法是不是ww8964 copyright protection573PENANAiBnZbF4dgS 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection573PENANAImhU5ul2Uv 維尼
沒錯!577Please respect copyright.PENANAxKWReCUIaq
你看洗版南師父就知道577Please respect copyright.PENANAQuUHm0B41j
古風武俠,他不會放過!8964 copyright protection573PENANA8JkgLlTmDE 維尼
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那說回來,8位候選區的選手們,你是會怎麼給他們排邀請優先序呢?577Please respect copyright.PENANA9sualDg3hA
因為你不像另外兩位,已經定了第一名邀請的參賽者577Please respect copyright.PENANAgoWdnalD9f
你覺得是比較好、自在?577Please respect copyright.PENANACpsbueHTKf
還是比較擔心被搶人呢?8964 copyright protection573PENANATi734Pt46F 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection573PENANAtqdYz9UiJi 維尼
也不會特別怕啦哈哈8964 copyright protection573PENANAg8jkjz5c1E 維尼
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【紀言預備室】8964 copyright protection573PENANA1AP92bb594 維尼
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剛完成了選擇門的部分577Please respect copyright.PENANAhYMD0R9yCQ
有甚麼感想的嗎?8964 copyright protection573PENANAqsvIb9D98L 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection573PENANAB5vOu6VGFm 維尼
真的讓人緊張呢577Please respect copyright.PENANAcduVP47kEH
其實很多參賽者的實力相差真的不遠577Please respect copyright.PENANArLCPvJDyq7
在抉擇時真的讓人加倍為難8964 copyright protection573PENANAOnobLZRcxM 維尼
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有沒有覺得可惜的參賽者?竟然進不了候選區這樣?8964 copyright protection573PENANA0C7vBpfpjb 維尼
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其實此去拾年我覺得是寫得不錯的577Please respect copyright.PENANA1i2lfN1IfN
可是類似的作品有點多577Please respect copyright.PENANANC2S3NPZqE
真的很可惜8964 copyright protection573PENANAlQC073wCRD 維尼
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這是你當時沒有給出✊的原因嗎?8964 copyright protection573PENANA6S22VY3skp 維尼
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此去拾年和十年陽光、董小姐都被我歸到同一類中577Please respect copyright.PENANAllEb0wF7jd
嘛,他也寫得很好,但另外兩篇真的是更好8964 copyright protection573PENANAkjE6OlQsUz 維尼
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明白。577Please respect copyright.PENANAtYQMspL0eA
那現在進入了給候選區參賽者排邀請順序的環節577Please respect copyright.PENANAHZaekWRVaX
你有甚麼想法嗎?8964 copyright protection573PENANALiReCVVZR5 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection573PENANA3VUvIRDL5u 維尼
說實在的577Please respect copyright.PENANA2YfqgGKYQp
我超級糾結577Please respect copyright.PENANAdcTWVVH7M8
尤其是(竟然)有那麼多參賽者選我,壓力倍增呢8964 copyright protection573PENANAKCF0bUJnG8 維尼
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有想好要根據甚麼去排的?8964 copyright protection573PENANAA8nK2PQ7Uj 維尼
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本來是要跟分數排的,可是後來考慮到題材的問題,又再排了一次577Please respect copyright.PENANAk8BFRSwdbU
如上所說,十年陽光和董小姐是在最高分之列577Please respect copyright.PENANAFEtidAjkpc
可是他們的題材有點類近577Please respect copyright.PENANAoECHVPq8tr
我想讓我的學員們能接觸多一點不同的類型,這樣聊起來才更有趣577Please respect copyright.PENANAROfxoSymNt
所以嘛,即使二人都是最高分,我還是只會選一個8964 copyright protection573PENANAcagPXNwjbM 維尼
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說回來,你是參賽者們的最搶手首選導師,就最多人選你8964 copyright protection573PENANAS2EuJ9f33z 維尼
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當初沒想過這麼多人選我的哈哈577Please respect copyright.PENANA3X6Jz2TPiF
畢竟楓成是penana人氣王577Please respect copyright.PENANA9JiDffR4KQ
東南也筆耕了十多年577Please respect copyright.PENANA352TW1CELW
說到資歷和寫作的字數,可能我是最少的呢哈哈577Please respect copyright.PENANA9sCRqHrqFb
不過也感謝大家的愛戴8964 copyright protection573PENANAwX2SeScONC 維尼
我先說我的首選好了577Please respect copyright.PENANA2ubT3zfj3l
(是甚麼呢???????)(自帶效果!)8964 copyright protection573PENANAvBRLTpEJeW 維尼
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不是你說要早點睡的嗎!www8964 copyright protection573PENANAkhEqClMayO 維尼
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好了喇577Please respect copyright.PENANABqNMxH52nd
第一位是十年陽光喇577Please respect copyright.PENANAEOACACOc0v
我要分享一下我的心路歷程XPXP8964 copyright protection573PENANA5zMfO8knUX 維尼
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可以的~8964 copyright protection573PENANAosfFniCdhv 維尼
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第二位就是成功獲得我一拳的獵巫!577Please respect copyright.PENANAz59b5cpo3s
第三位其實糾結了超~~~~~~~~~~~久577Please respect copyright.PENANARrqODWY9bQ
是在輪候者和天使的惡作劇之間掙扎了好久8964 copyright protection573PENANA9McfU0te7S 維尼
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但輪候者的Blackative 很厲害,寫了兩篇不一樣的作品~8964 copyright protection573PENANAnKpXYMg4mt 維尼
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輪候者是非常成熟的作品,風格也已經定形了577Please respect copyright.PENANAnbhCHHUI2W
時限內能寫兩篇也真的很厲害577Please respect copyright.PENANAQW9kjnmB7M
不過時間小偷的話我就稍嫌有點負面了577Please respect copyright.PENANA9Yw3URFLSg
寫作作為興趣,應該是先令自己開心,然後再看看其他的可能的577Please respect copyright.PENANAU7BbJaE4SP
至於天使的惡作劇,雖然分數上不及輪候者,但是他的文風很對我的腦波,我也覺得他有潛力577Please respect copyright.PENANAi3wZWFK0jS
所以第三位一直在他們之間糾結8964 copyright protection573PENANAALwsAU9jRe 維尼
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最後,你的選擇是……8964 copyright protection573PENANA3wsItK3WHU 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection573PENANA3bWL9j08hz 維尼
就是⋯⋯577Please respect copyright.PENANAevSwz8kDvr
天使的惡作劇!577Please respect copyright.PENANAFjbeISwKGP
我希望Blackative能被其他導師收入戰隊577Please respect copyright.PENANAVA0hqarTVT
他的實力是值得的577Please respect copyright.PENANACFhYOuKfQE
奈何只有三個位置577Please respect copyright.PENANAxrmv0bbr8s
(嘛,規則也是我們三人定的,也沒辦法喇)8964 copyright protection573PENANASXqqKW53Fe 維尼
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好了……我們就先聽紀言的頭三順序,不然要天亮了8964 copyright protection573PENANAhn5ENRNgEN 維尼
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嘮嘮叨叨了一大堆呢哈哈8964 copyright protection573PENANAsXGTSM5oHV 維尼
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謝謝紀言😂8964 copyright protection573PENANANFEnmpPWkR 維尼
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(邀請順序收集中……)8964 copyright protection573PENANAIhfCM19bes 維尼
(節目組整理中……)8964 copyright protection573PENANAU8EMnW0Td7 維尼
開始送出組隊邀請!8964 copyright protection573PENANAoA9QHGnb2d 維尼
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【參賽者預備室】8964 copyright protection573PENANAHsBwII30hJ 維尼
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有些參賽者和導師們是兩情相悅的,577Please respect copyright.PENANACRu6Pg5S3d
最終修成正果,可喜可賀!8964 copyright protection573PENANA3zNSezMPm4 維尼
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恭喜你,成功加入東南/ 紀言 / 楓成戰隊!8964 copyright protection573PENANAEnj1I5b7rn 維尼
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:O 我以為係21號先有結果😂 btw thx8964 copyright protection573PENANAduCnXo6MPY 維尼
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哇!真架?🥰8964 copyright protection573PENANAYXXPlzRaQG 維尼
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收到了,感謝你這麼晚了還要通知我們這群選手8964 copyright protection573PENANAwIOUyCBipY 維尼
參賽者D8964 copyright protection573PENANAkfeJjALfOL 維尼
感激涕零!🥺🥺8964 copyright protection573PENANAUH6eVE8jBi 維尼
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我入圍了?8964 copyright protection573PENANAHRLGsxdAlm 維尼
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多謝你8964 copyright protection573PENANABPBu204za2 維尼
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終於等到消息😭😭8964 copyright protection573PENANAlmM94gr8VS 維尼
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而有些參賽者就要陷入天人交戰的選擇!577Please respect copyright.PENANAlh5ydYNZqm
面對非首選導師的邀請,是要接受,還是……8964 copyright protection573PENANAJ3WkwqZC9P 維尼
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導師A誠邀你進入他的戰隊,請問你願意接受嗎?577Please respect copyright.PENANAe5cyM5yfFh
提提你,你首選係導師B8964 copyright protection573PENANAMH97RWXLWz 維尼
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雖然冇被導師B選中有啲可惜,但我其實唔介意被分到邊一隊(搔頭8964 copyright protection573PENANAjSEobVPqm3 維尼
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但導師B有冇講咩?8964 copyright protection573PENANAFywbG7bItw 維尼
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或者我解釋下先,個情況係:577Please respect copyright.PENANARSvAriN8ft
導師A對你嘅邀請順序高過導師B。577Please respect copyright.PENANAo5olkPQcE2
如果你拒絕咗,有可能會收到導師B嘅邀請,577Please respect copyright.PENANARD8sTZ8tUE
但前提係:當時導師B戰隊未滿人。577Please respect copyright.PENANAKK2WhunUnF
如果導師B戰隊已經滿人,但你又拒絕咗導師A,577Please respect copyright.PENANAPlWfeMUwb1
你就只可以參與復活賽,睇下仲有冇機會入導師B戰隊。8964 copyright protection573PENANApPShqEh2D1 維尼
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咁複雜既ODO?!577Please respect copyright.PENANAnUIK5RShdA
喊出嚟,都好賭博喎(つД`)8964 copyright protection573PENANAwfBnep4ihT 維尼
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依個我最遲可以幾時答你?8964 copyright protection573PENANAAbAusadlxS 維尼
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可能……盡快?8964 copyright protection573PENANAjNSt3EZLT0 維尼
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我今晚墊高枕頭諗諗,聽日覆你唔好意思(つД`)8964 copyright protection573PENANAkcOBWj1wbn 維尼
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咁就加入導師A嘅戰隊577Please respect copyright.PENANAh8nUMFyVgF
我估,咁姐係佢幾欣賞我577Please respect copyright.PENANAnKEE4pWSqe
掛8964 copyright protection573PENANAWBEWHskR1k 維尼
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我決定好了(超快577Please respect copyright.PENANAiODPl18Kmd
我都係入導師A隊577Please respect copyright.PENANAFnlylq4Cod
唔太敢賭(つД`)8964 copyright protection573PENANAAF4P6ZTE0y 維尼
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【鏡頭關上後】8964 copyright protection573PENANAgVy8oWKJiJ 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection573PENANAOHv8yAVYpO 維尼
我有少少寄語卑Blackative,我不如Pm你?8964 copyright protection573PENANACWl9bG84Mo 維尼
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好8964 copyright protection573PENANAmciC3P734o 維尼
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首先要講一句好遺憾你入唔到戰隊賽。577Please respect copyright.PENANABD83qcq8KW
你兩篇文喺我眼中都係本次比賽裏面的精品,但我選擇戰隊成員時,實力雖然係其中一個考慮因素,但另外更多係會考慮成員風格同自己夾唔夾,同埋每位成員的潛力等等因素。577Please respect copyright.PENANArn6jybC3QR
你卑我感覺係一個已經相當成熟,好有自己一套嘅作者,無論係時間小偷定係豬果篇我覺得都發揮得唔錯,我讀時都頗有眼前一亮的感覺。577Please respect copyright.PENANAZUqULC6B6L
但奈何戰隊賽名額有限,我揀的三位亦係我認為最適合我戰隊的成員,所以就只能忍痛無向你拋出橄欖枝,我相信其餘兩位導師應該都同我一樣,對你落選係感到遺憾的。577Please respect copyright.PENANAcwKAxZdcUG
我希望你唔好因為呢個結果就感到氣餒,希望你能夠堅持同繼續寫落去。如果你參加復活賽的話,我亦會非常期待你復活賽的表現,加油!8964 copyright protection573PENANAiypzcBTtDc 維尼
【海選選秀環節】完!8964 copyright protection573PENANAKxFTIU14ZS 維尼
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之後還會有很多寫作分享跟幕後花絮讓你看,不要錯過囉!8964 copyright protection573PENANAWLLzplbrJ0 維尼
參賽者們,8964 copyright protection573PENANA31xsWTbDXe 維尼
第二階段還有三十二天就要結束了!8964 copyright protection573PENANA1wUWCqiRTS 維尼
注意時間哦!8964 copyright protection573PENANAN5pz5wQfG2 維尼
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