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中間的互動其實應該描繪女主的音樂如何吸引男主,救治到男主的內心。436Please respect copyright.PENANAinHczFq1DM
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非常出色的愛情小品,蒼老如我也回想起當年學校時純純的戀愛時光!436Please respect copyright.PENANAzGvbQsBJg4
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文筆流暢而動人,學生時代的青澀令人感動,整體是一篇完整、感人而溫馨的短篇純愛故事。436Please respect copyright.PENANAXJYBDHuMbB
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筆流暢舒服,看上去與故事匹配,讀得非常舒服。在這個故事塑造這個氛圍裏面,其實都沒有什麼好挑剔的了。436Please respect copyright.PENANA9m6IBv0DCV
唯獨有點附加意見就是,既然作者已經非常擅於掌握節奏同寫到好溫馨細膩的感情,建議日後寫愛情小說時,在劇情或者世界觀裏面下點功夫,讓故事看上去「特別」一點。436Please respect copyright.PENANANjiBwg9L5e
畢竟如今現實純愛的故事已經有點不待見,所以要吸引讀者 / 編輯眼球的話,就可能要在其他方面花點功夫哦。加油!8964 copyright protection432PENANAW5AbVyqZX7 維尼
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情感真摯動人,各種元素的揉合也很成熟,讀之使人心有戚戚焉。436Please respect copyright.PENANATqC6lmxG4K
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非常好的作品啊,勵志,愛情,熱血都有,很有《爆漫》的感覺。436Please respect copyright.PENANAyAAZofnykE
整篇作品都好完整,沒什麼好挑剔的。436Please respect copyright.PENANAVD8kKX8JUQ
唯一可以挑刺就是對於「十年」這點算是較為牽強。如果寫長少少的話,可以是作者想17歲出書但失敗,然後再用十年參賽、投稿,成為一個知名作家,這樣就會扣題扣得好很多了。436Please respect copyright.PENANARay1Yhx9Hr
其實這一篇也可以寫長,變成一部5、6萬的中短篇小說,我覺得也挺有潛質的。8964 copyright protection432PENANA6PxuX6xiHU 維尼
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只要下次不要第一下交無字天書就可以了436Please respect copyright.PENANAKwAV7A7gck
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當初文楓你們也這麼說……436Please respect copyright.PENANABTyKxalNu1
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節目錄太久了喇8964 copyright protection432PENANAF2fizP2o7w 維尼
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一起來迎接最後一位參賽者~436Please respect copyright.PENANA9kxeDpeJF3
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很不錯的玄幻作品。其實這種參賽作品,更是限制了一萬字內的比賽,要撰寫玄幻或異世界類的作品是困難的。436Please respect copyright.PENANAPnYoojdAkh
首先很聰明先用現代及香港作背景,同時以茅山道法這香港人較熟悉的元素,變相不需要花費太多筆墨就能夠寫出玄幻元素。436Please respect copyright.PENANAcukNiw6Xdq
整體從文筆、劇情、橋段等等實屬不俗。436Please respect copyright.PENANAj8dz4U4292
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以有限的字數建構完整的世界觀不容易,我認為作者在這方面是成功的。436Please respect copyright.PENANAyCH6eD5qsB
不過可以再留意內容的剪裁,精減一些與主線無關的敍述,如三位後人的感情線,可使情節更為緊湊。8964 copyright protection432PENANA2PRYdsvZ19 維尼
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缺點是劇情枝節太多,只是整體瑕不掩瑜,算是海選中其中一篇精品。8964 copyright protection432PENANAAc3R5Axzoa 維尼
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1. 此等短篇字數有限,切忌得隴望蜀。不要野心太大創造過多角色,在一萬以內的短文之中,人多反而容易手腳亂。436Please respect copyright.PENANAR4I7ZTgFeA
2. 對於傳統茅山道術知識的引用需要注意一下,適量拋出會顯得淵博,但過多則會適得其反,有賣弄之感。436Please respect copyright.PENANAdIOf5Y9mbq
3. 如第一點所言,三名小主角其實性格同存在感都不算突出,比較流於表面,尤其感情戲其實頗嫌累贅。下次設計劇情時要注意一下。8964 copyright protection432PENANA4J7pNb5JdE 維尼
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嗯436Please respect copyright.PENANAG644VFHB9a
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見證到他的成長也挺欣慰的8964 copyright protection432PENANAsxgBeN9kzZ 維尼
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東叔,一起來玩⭕️❌吧8964 copyright protection432PENANA4l4cjXq1KC 維尼
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郁郁如煙消於天436Please respect copyright.PENANAokeUngCFT9
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接下來請三位退場436Please respect copyright.PENANAXZh18tA8Pv
到自己的休息室給8位候選區的參賽者排邀請順序哦!8964 copyright protection432PENANArrp3HKSK1L 維尼
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我覺得下一站天后是很可惜的8964 copyright protection432PENANAj6DX30GvgF 維尼
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嗯,就是子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億。8964 copyright protection432PENANAnuqRRLG24O 維尼
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你也是打滿高分的。8964 copyright protection432PENANA5DII9KQuNZ 維尼
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嗯8964 copyright protection432PENANATwi6ymrYfw 維尼
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如果當初沒有用到✊✊的機會436Please respect copyright.PENANAtrJKvjUTzV
你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection432PENANAmx566smX55 維尼
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應該也不會。因為拳拳是直接順序第一名的選項436Please respect copyright.PENANAt2bcdombGG
我覺得作者如果入選的話是紀言會比較符合他/她的風格436Please respect copyright.PENANASsoY2w4hBg
我雖然能給到意見,但要入隊的話我還是想選一些我自覺能幫助更多的同學8964 copyright protection432PENANAPXE8V1Sopy 維尼
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你有甚麼想跟選你的參賽者說的嗎?8964 copyright protection432PENANAU0K3nFpz9N 維尼
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多謝選擇我。436Please respect copyright.PENANAOUuO72WN9v
希望我作為導師不會讓你們失望。8964 copyright protection432PENANAIotev20hbq 維尼
我能否一個個說?8964 copyright protection432PENANAMlocoNnP7z 維尼
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可以的8964 copyright protection432PENANALlkb5EQTyE 維尼
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首先跟日匀 說吧。8964 copyright protection432PENANAyRcj52zKvU 維尼
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你的文字功力甚至比我當年紮實。劇情弱項也跟我當年類同。436Please respect copyright.PENANAmn3g8Qymom
所以我很希望能幫助你寫武俠,加油!8964 copyright protection432PENANAbZVNfExJ6L 維尼
然後到過海巴士的洛羊。436Please respect copyright.PENANAiBgv8ZZxep
很驚訝你那麼高水準的會選擇我,希望我不會讓你失望!8964 copyright protection432PENANAoVtWn4x3Mf 維尼
最後到逆時。436Please respect copyright.PENANAZgje6AhbT3
嗯 ..... 你的文很對我腦波,所以。。。。多謝!!8964 copyright protection432PENANAVHSq60yjqV 維尼
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你會先選那些首選你的參賽者嗎?8964 copyright protection432PENANAAX4y7Rtuxx 維尼
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其實不會的436Please respect copyright.PENANAp0vGjbAgoS
但碰巧這次三個都極中我8964 copyright protection432PENANAkOgyoms7mY 維尼
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明白。436Please respect copyright.PENANAoM6DSIfRff
那你邀請順序已經想好了嗎?436Please respect copyright.PENANAbaH3v8StqT
有讓你猶豫的部分?8964 copyright protection432PENANAejoogY6FIW 維尼
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想好了8964 copyright protection432PENANASrUy3KSiP4 維尼
1. #19 過海巴士 儀洛羊436Please respect copyright.PENANAO1pLfdmEeU
2. #20 他的故事 日勻8964 copyright protection432PENANAKRU7tvuYXJ 維尼
其他全棄權讓給另外兩位吧www8964 copyright protection432PENANAbEPByReUMr 維尼
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竟然這樣!436Please respect copyright.PENANA2WVzPT02H0
你就不怕另外兩位跟你搶嗎?436Please respect copyright.PENANAdUGdTrFmcf
這樣你最糟可能只有一人進隊哦!8964 copyright protection432PENANAnjq65Yjtoa 維尼
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我覺得他們一定不會搶日匀的。436Please respect copyright.PENANAKfmQQ0A6FP
另外洛羊他們雖給到很高分,但我覺得他們有另外適合他們的436Please respect copyright.PENANAXDLRiPOido
應該不會跟我搶的wwwww8964 copyright protection432PENANAf2SdoSaQ0t 維尼
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好的,一起來看看 東南的Flag……436Please respect copyright.PENANAQda3vtR1yj
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wwww436Please respect copyright.PENANA4cbhZisWNZ
求不要搶436Please respect copyright.PENANAtTFmYh7WHC
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【楓成預備室】8964 copyright protection432PENANAtnrN4lPFEj 維尼
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剛才完成了選擇門的部分8964 copyright protection432PENANAtdtxbnqqzB 維尼
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是的436Please respect copyright.PENANAxJIPcAYRDO
真是艱難的一部份(汗8964 copyright protection432PENANAiZOTMTrLVU 維尼
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你有感覺哪位參賽者進不了候選區436Please respect copyright.PENANA2ufgIOPM50
很可惜的嗎?8964 copyright protection432PENANAxYK4OETslb 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection432PENANAzBTmWX6vUL 維尼
嗯…436Please respect copyright.PENANAmNbDwRYfV2
真要說的話436Please respect copyright.PENANAPVgtkCfyho
子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億是不錯的作品436Please respect copyright.PENANANTOV2I6xID
只可惜名額有限8964 copyright protection432PENANATVqrjxUFjo 維尼
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那如果✊✊現在還可以用,你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection432PENANAdtBxYdNdZ0 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection432PENANAdOd0biPM6b 維尼
也不會,哈哈436Please respect copyright.PENANAixUIO7VtT1
因為入選剩下來的選手也很出色8964 copyright protection432PENANAFJJbWUtTBs 維尼
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是的。436Please respect copyright.PENANAdNfkDUQyFi
想問一下436Please respect copyright.PENANAkse9jJmzgq
日勻的作品——他的故事8964 copyright protection432PENANAubGMZrHAmc 維尼
你好像是給他打滿高分的,436Please respect copyright.PENANANg67m6MJij
但你好似沒有給他舉圈的吧?8964 copyright protection432PENANAjMEqq9RJ2X 維尼
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是的哈哈,大概是圓圈太有限了(眼神死8964 copyright protection432PENANAMmWNiOlRkv 維尼
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如果好像文楓落得三叉的下場,你會像紀言那樣出拳嗎?8964 copyright protection432PENANAwHUFyRauf4 維尼
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這個,大概南師父不會給叉哈哈,所以我很放心436Please respect copyright.PENANAcS6DIPrt0f
所以應該也不會8964 copyright protection432PENANAqIFuYsoslp 維尼
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你就算好了他們想法是不是ww8964 copyright protection432PENANAK5FHDdzM37 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection432PENANAhM4XFaJIhm 維尼
沒錯!436Please respect copyright.PENANA6yDr81LZla
你看洗版南師父就知道436Please respect copyright.PENANAjTnuQ8xG5t
古風武俠,他不會放過!8964 copyright protection432PENANAbZOJOifU7G 維尼
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那說回來,8位候選區的選手們,你是會怎麼給他們排邀請優先序呢?436Please respect copyright.PENANAclI4efTL2c
因為你不像另外兩位,已經定了第一名邀請的參賽者436Please respect copyright.PENANANNs1jLCz0Y
你覺得是比較好、自在?436Please respect copyright.PENANAzc5lOij1hS
還是比較擔心被搶人呢?8964 copyright protection432PENANATOwCF0w2TJ 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection432PENANA7yfhWwdL30 維尼
也不會特別怕啦哈哈8964 copyright protection432PENANAqtikkUSmPM 維尼
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【紀言預備室】8964 copyright protection432PENANAHXFSWEXXry 維尼
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剛完成了選擇門的部分436Please respect copyright.PENANAAgZxNzqEJp
有甚麼感想的嗎?8964 copyright protection432PENANAOT2LTYEJBr 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection432PENANAkxobzNBNFw 維尼
真的讓人緊張呢436Please respect copyright.PENANAT3VD0vmRMM
其實很多參賽者的實力相差真的不遠436Please respect copyright.PENANAR9g9SDeYIe
在抉擇時真的讓人加倍為難8964 copyright protection432PENANA5HkIpCf2vG 維尼
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有沒有覺得可惜的參賽者?竟然進不了候選區這樣?8964 copyright protection432PENANAjx40udHlWq 維尼
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其實此去拾年我覺得是寫得不錯的436Please respect copyright.PENANA9l8RjlwBqM
可是類似的作品有點多436Please respect copyright.PENANAUxt5kyCG15
真的很可惜8964 copyright protection432PENANADlvHAnEC1P 維尼
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這是你當時沒有給出✊的原因嗎?8964 copyright protection432PENANAjbciFV2gQe 維尼
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此去拾年和十年陽光、董小姐都被我歸到同一類中436Please respect copyright.PENANA9pV3HJLm5P
嘛,他也寫得很好,但另外兩篇真的是更好8964 copyright protection432PENANAFs2UAgOZcZ 維尼
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明白。436Please respect copyright.PENANArS1hZis7Lo
那現在進入了給候選區參賽者排邀請順序的環節436Please respect copyright.PENANAr8ECmPpNEA
你有甚麼想法嗎?8964 copyright protection432PENANAhtgpjGojoB 維尼
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說實在的436Please respect copyright.PENANApyI75QK6OI
我超級糾結436Please respect copyright.PENANAGWxzpG5kmP
尤其是(竟然)有那麼多參賽者選我,壓力倍增呢8964 copyright protection432PENANA12ucKo7CR8 維尼
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有想好要根據甚麼去排的?8964 copyright protection432PENANAUrBFdw6Ogb 維尼
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本來是要跟分數排的,可是後來考慮到題材的問題,又再排了一次436Please respect copyright.PENANAwg5C98XrZn
如上所說,十年陽光和董小姐是在最高分之列436Please respect copyright.PENANAJFdKZkZWCz
可是他們的題材有點類近436Please respect copyright.PENANAsXSDN4lYHu
我想讓我的學員們能接觸多一點不同的類型,這樣聊起來才更有趣436Please respect copyright.PENANAUkIGSgkFpQ
所以嘛,即使二人都是最高分,我還是只會選一個8964 copyright protection432PENANAOtdKWHZxkg 維尼
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說回來,你是參賽者們的最搶手首選導師,就最多人選你8964 copyright protection432PENANA56AzPDjqTq 維尼
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當初沒想過這麼多人選我的哈哈436Please respect copyright.PENANAAjXf8PKYLK
畢竟楓成是penana人氣王436Please respect copyright.PENANAwDKUHrg8iM
東南也筆耕了十多年436Please respect copyright.PENANAfKnKXSaZWn
說到資歷和寫作的字數,可能我是最少的呢哈哈436Please respect copyright.PENANAw08N5fZM7c
不過也感謝大家的愛戴8964 copyright protection432PENANAuPuBe93rWK 維尼
我先說我的首選好了436Please respect copyright.PENANAMNb1YwgKWV
(是甚麼呢???????)(自帶效果!)8964 copyright protection432PENANAPi5dXPHl1W 維尼
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不是你說要早點睡的嗎!www8964 copyright protection432PENANAlxbUWpFMFc 維尼
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好了喇436Please respect copyright.PENANAuIP1eFgkMr
第一位是十年陽光喇436Please respect copyright.PENANARSDrXvrpJS
我要分享一下我的心路歷程XPXP8964 copyright protection432PENANAQBZHvLhGWv 維尼
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可以的~8964 copyright protection432PENANAaljCqt0QUO 維尼
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第二位就是成功獲得我一拳的獵巫!436Please respect copyright.PENANAjr8pwwiusm
第三位其實糾結了超~~~~~~~~~~~久436Please respect copyright.PENANAzgFc2flcTt
是在輪候者和天使的惡作劇之間掙扎了好久8964 copyright protection432PENANA825uRkv3gS 維尼
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但輪候者的Blackative 很厲害,寫了兩篇不一樣的作品~8964 copyright protection432PENANAG6g83KRcwa 維尼
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輪候者是非常成熟的作品,風格也已經定形了436Please respect copyright.PENANA8giSINw3Pn
時限內能寫兩篇也真的很厲害436Please respect copyright.PENANAi2yXMdXACz
不過時間小偷的話我就稍嫌有點負面了436Please respect copyright.PENANAXNVp2BdJ8s
寫作作為興趣,應該是先令自己開心,然後再看看其他的可能的436Please respect copyright.PENANAUtv9EtZBVZ
至於天使的惡作劇,雖然分數上不及輪候者,但是他的文風很對我的腦波,我也覺得他有潛力436Please respect copyright.PENANAhcn0axcCCF
所以第三位一直在他們之間糾結8964 copyright protection432PENANACRcTvBqCGZ 維尼
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最後,你的選擇是……8964 copyright protection432PENANAiCWbdE9etv 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection432PENANAti3g2AVtF9 維尼
就是⋯⋯436Please respect copyright.PENANAweOmxvu9q1
天使的惡作劇!436Please respect copyright.PENANAfiRRTNrNGR
我希望Blackative能被其他導師收入戰隊436Please respect copyright.PENANAKU9GMppR1a
他的實力是值得的436Please respect copyright.PENANArtVwRfEyQr
奈何只有三個位置436Please respect copyright.PENANASjB9qrasqr
(嘛,規則也是我們三人定的,也沒辦法喇)8964 copyright protection432PENANAKqewekC5QA 維尼
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好了……我們就先聽紀言的頭三順序,不然要天亮了8964 copyright protection432PENANA0t4u8Tgbxw 維尼
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嘮嘮叨叨了一大堆呢哈哈8964 copyright protection432PENANAuRiJ7IsWGA 維尼
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謝謝紀言😂8964 copyright protection432PENANAmWPYhNZjv7 維尼
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(邀請順序收集中……)8964 copyright protection432PENANAsdbQ96yuli 維尼
(節目組整理中……)8964 copyright protection432PENANAmFcWEqASdf 維尼
開始送出組隊邀請!8964 copyright protection432PENANAofsp3wvllN 維尼
436Please respect copyright.PENANA8yfvqO5bsY
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【參賽者預備室】8964 copyright protection432PENANA1qS7rY61NE 維尼
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有些參賽者和導師們是兩情相悅的,436Please respect copyright.PENANAla1uyOZqzi
最終修成正果,可喜可賀!8964 copyright protection432PENANAGTqO97aTVq 維尼
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恭喜你,成功加入東南/ 紀言 / 楓成戰隊!8964 copyright protection432PENANArFXkaJVuxm 維尼
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:O 我以為係21號先有結果😂 btw thx8964 copyright protection432PENANArAjFvSv12Z 維尼
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哇!真架?🥰8964 copyright protection432PENANAs72NXmKWed 維尼
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收到了,感謝你這麼晚了還要通知我們這群選手8964 copyright protection432PENANA1UUNwZNAtI 維尼
參賽者D8964 copyright protection432PENANAi9V6pn92Qo 維尼
感激涕零!🥺🥺8964 copyright protection432PENANAScPwqpkBht 維尼
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我入圍了?8964 copyright protection432PENANAEyypymxweF 維尼
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多謝你8964 copyright protection432PENANA4HpDUQiH4c 維尼
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終於等到消息😭😭8964 copyright protection432PENANAlX0JUeAdTn 維尼
436Please respect copyright.PENANA0vJY6MG2FQ
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而有些參賽者就要陷入天人交戰的選擇!436Please respect copyright.PENANAkQtTEAJ3ct
面對非首選導師的邀請,是要接受,還是……8964 copyright protection432PENANA3vvj706mPE 維尼
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導師A誠邀你進入他的戰隊,請問你願意接受嗎?436Please respect copyright.PENANALYh540wsdi
提提你,你首選係導師B8964 copyright protection432PENANAWkbVOBb3OL 維尼
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雖然冇被導師B選中有啲可惜,但我其實唔介意被分到邊一隊(搔頭8964 copyright protection432PENANAJPtr4ZyYdD 維尼
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但導師B有冇講咩?8964 copyright protection432PENANAakZ40RnHTj 維尼
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或者我解釋下先,個情況係:436Please respect copyright.PENANA6S3P9iec1b
導師A對你嘅邀請順序高過導師B。436Please respect copyright.PENANALISwBEvWw4
如果你拒絕咗,有可能會收到導師B嘅邀請,436Please respect copyright.PENANAjlPVtvhoIU
但前提係:當時導師B戰隊未滿人。436Please respect copyright.PENANARLrAPy1BhM
如果導師B戰隊已經滿人,但你又拒絕咗導師A,436Please respect copyright.PENANArWWfLmq0no
你就只可以參與復活賽,睇下仲有冇機會入導師B戰隊。8964 copyright protection432PENANA3R8LR0Go6J 維尼
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咁複雜既ODO?!436Please respect copyright.PENANAoTrlYGpziX
喊出嚟,都好賭博喎(つД`)8964 copyright protection432PENANABfONrs7Od1 維尼
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依個我最遲可以幾時答你?8964 copyright protection432PENANAHpkgkvtH14 維尼
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可能……盡快?8964 copyright protection432PENANA3GCy0C33Cp 維尼
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我今晚墊高枕頭諗諗,聽日覆你唔好意思(つД`)8964 copyright protection432PENANAHY0tQrNcft 維尼
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咁就加入導師A嘅戰隊436Please respect copyright.PENANATBXhfC045T
我估,咁姐係佢幾欣賞我436Please respect copyright.PENANAoMqzBAp4cy
掛8964 copyright protection432PENANAsgcnOQMHJS 維尼
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我決定好了(超快436Please respect copyright.PENANAuog4d5vwYd
我都係入導師A隊436Please respect copyright.PENANACYs5ctN6Zy
唔太敢賭(つД`)8964 copyright protection432PENANAofPvsMpyjU 維尼
436Please respect copyright.PENANA0ej46iw0wW
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【鏡頭關上後】8964 copyright protection432PENANAgOOfq9JPGE 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection432PENANAYlMJHcnqMe 維尼
我有少少寄語卑Blackative,我不如Pm你?8964 copyright protection432PENANA7HZatHSvAU 維尼
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好8964 copyright protection432PENANAKbz2GAB6ha 維尼
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首先要講一句好遺憾你入唔到戰隊賽。436Please respect copyright.PENANAjXiHOgvw6V
你兩篇文喺我眼中都係本次比賽裏面的精品,但我選擇戰隊成員時,實力雖然係其中一個考慮因素,但另外更多係會考慮成員風格同自己夾唔夾,同埋每位成員的潛力等等因素。436Please respect copyright.PENANAE8GJM1CQku
你卑我感覺係一個已經相當成熟,好有自己一套嘅作者,無論係時間小偷定係豬果篇我覺得都發揮得唔錯,我讀時都頗有眼前一亮的感覺。436Please respect copyright.PENANAsxxnAOSI11
但奈何戰隊賽名額有限,我揀的三位亦係我認為最適合我戰隊的成員,所以就只能忍痛無向你拋出橄欖枝,我相信其餘兩位導師應該都同我一樣,對你落選係感到遺憾的。436Please respect copyright.PENANAZdUUcsIxdS
我希望你唔好因為呢個結果就感到氣餒,希望你能夠堅持同繼續寫落去。如果你參加復活賽的話,我亦會非常期待你復活賽的表現,加油!8964 copyright protection432PENANA3pdC9BJ5eZ 維尼
【海選選秀環節】完!8964 copyright protection432PENANAo4NCKEpYS5 維尼
多謝收看!8964 copyright protection432PENANAYKPkb9xRY4 維尼
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【第二階段:戰隊/復活賽】「太歲兵團 X 萌動學生小說集2021」寫作營8964 copyright protection432PENANAByQj3fUpl1 維尼
之後還會有很多寫作分享跟幕後花絮讓你看,不要錯過囉!8964 copyright protection432PENANARYGc7j2k9a 維尼
參賽者們,8964 copyright protection432PENANAP4DrvYprV9 維尼
第二階段還有三十二天就要結束了!8964 copyright protection432PENANAzu6v40rWpm 維尼
注意時間哦!8964 copyright protection432PENANAVMeIOeN0q1 維尼
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