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唯一可以挑刺就是對於「十年」這點算是較為牽強。如果寫長少少的話,可以是作者想17歲出書但失敗,然後再用十年參賽、投稿,成為一個知名作家,這樣就會扣題扣得好很多了。633Please respect copyright.PENANAsf15vtmg8K
其實這一篇也可以寫長,變成一部5、6萬的中短篇小說,我覺得也挺有潛質的。8964 copyright protection629PENANAjU16tWz7DI 維尼
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很不錯的玄幻作品。其實這種參賽作品,更是限制了一萬字內的比賽,要撰寫玄幻或異世界類的作品是困難的。633Please respect copyright.PENANAUUoscXEW82
首先很聰明先用現代及香港作背景,同時以茅山道法這香港人較熟悉的元素,變相不需要花費太多筆墨就能夠寫出玄幻元素。633Please respect copyright.PENANAX2sVtoxNOL
整體從文筆、劇情、橋段等等實屬不俗。633Please respect copyright.PENANA8vIFxCgnBv
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以有限的字數建構完整的世界觀不容易,我認為作者在這方面是成功的。633Please respect copyright.PENANAAA4EA1l0ms
不過可以再留意內容的剪裁,精減一些與主線無關的敍述,如三位後人的感情線,可使情節更為緊湊。8964 copyright protection629PENANAuk6jX7fcq6 維尼
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缺點是劇情枝節太多,只是整體瑕不掩瑜,算是海選中其中一篇精品。8964 copyright protection629PENANA88BmcDYoGF 維尼
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1. 此等短篇字數有限,切忌得隴望蜀。不要野心太大創造過多角色,在一萬以內的短文之中,人多反而容易手腳亂。633Please respect copyright.PENANAz6tDPLONaM
2. 對於傳統茅山道術知識的引用需要注意一下,適量拋出會顯得淵博,但過多則會適得其反,有賣弄之感。633Please respect copyright.PENANAp2Szd557Oj
3. 如第一點所言,三名小主角其實性格同存在感都不算突出,比較流於表面,尤其感情戲其實頗嫌累贅。下次設計劇情時要注意一下。8964 copyright protection629PENANAIU37wcyBYr 維尼
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這個作者是我認識的人呢633Please respect copyright.PENANAWV069z7P5g
見證到他的成長也挺欣慰的8964 copyright protection629PENANAHFEizOC8eQ 維尼
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郁郁如煙消於天633Please respect copyright.PENANApXn4jXckXO
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到自己的休息室給8位候選區的參賽者排邀請順序哦!8964 copyright protection629PENANANqQPnFaIBe 維尼
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我覺得下一站天后是很可惜的8964 copyright protection629PENANATeuSY6ONhv 維尼
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嗯,就是子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億。8964 copyright protection629PENANAPJPhARWOmN 維尼
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你也是打滿高分的。8964 copyright protection629PENANAAdcvbAJVLT 維尼
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你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection629PENANAzcbEWfTQmf 維尼
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應該也不會。因為拳拳是直接順序第一名的選項633Please respect copyright.PENANAfG4r1hZ7D5
我覺得作者如果入選的話是紀言會比較符合他/她的風格633Please respect copyright.PENANAKX0GP9bPoa
我雖然能給到意見,但要入隊的話我還是想選一些我自覺能幫助更多的同學8964 copyright protection629PENANAjWiUz9nEJp 維尼
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多謝選擇我。633Please respect copyright.PENANAy4lhfz8wR1
希望我作為導師不會讓你們失望。8964 copyright protection629PENANAVsU5I1oXwP 維尼
我能否一個個說?8964 copyright protection629PENANAlzLwdJxdGZ 維尼
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可以的8964 copyright protection629PENANAXoYrLFqDzj 維尼
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首先跟日匀 說吧。8964 copyright protection629PENANAfsh0SQO7qw 維尼
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你的文字功力甚至比我當年紮實。劇情弱項也跟我當年類同。633Please respect copyright.PENANAEAea1DVAPo
所以我很希望能幫助你寫武俠,加油!8964 copyright protection629PENANAJhjmTsF2ks 維尼
然後到過海巴士的洛羊。633Please respect copyright.PENANAMmym7ISwJz
很驚訝你那麼高水準的會選擇我,希望我不會讓你失望!8964 copyright protection629PENANAleu6U4btks 維尼
最後到逆時。633Please respect copyright.PENANAdh5dnCwjaW
嗯 ..... 你的文很對我腦波,所以。。。。多謝!!8964 copyright protection629PENANAdvpyHuL7aL 維尼
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你會先選那些首選你的參賽者嗎?8964 copyright protection629PENANAb4WuMCv69y 維尼
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其實不會的633Please respect copyright.PENANAk8DPKBZkSX
但碰巧這次三個都極中我8964 copyright protection629PENANAkFA8JXOTyp 維尼
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明白。633Please respect copyright.PENANA67oSkjJWgV
那你邀請順序已經想好了嗎?633Please respect copyright.PENANARxHv5bybqV
有讓你猶豫的部分?8964 copyright protection629PENANA3wWIyr5yaa 維尼
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想好了8964 copyright protection629PENANADZXkeSFn9f 維尼
1. #19 過海巴士 儀洛羊633Please respect copyright.PENANARxTvqongjd
2. #20 他的故事 日勻8964 copyright protection629PENANASs7t0tU0SI 維尼
其他全棄權讓給另外兩位吧www8964 copyright protection629PENANA8KfeU6pNDR 維尼
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竟然這樣!633Please respect copyright.PENANA5JOI4pBlZx
你就不怕另外兩位跟你搶嗎?633Please respect copyright.PENANAePfdEAHeYK
這樣你最糟可能只有一人進隊哦!8964 copyright protection629PENANAUTAvmGhy66 維尼
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我覺得他們一定不會搶日匀的。633Please respect copyright.PENANAhnr8ozVfkr
另外洛羊他們雖給到很高分,但我覺得他們有另外適合他們的633Please respect copyright.PENANAQniNvwkXlU
應該不會跟我搶的wwwww8964 copyright protection629PENANANp6kpy7FYu 維尼
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好的,一起來看看 東南的Flag……633Please respect copyright.PENANA0IXfS2lBMV
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求不要搶633Please respect copyright.PENANAKff6GZLNgn
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剛才完成了選擇門的部分8964 copyright protection629PENANApgC6aaFUme 維尼
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是的633Please respect copyright.PENANAAHYYeQnrjT
真是艱難的一部份(汗8964 copyright protection629PENANAiClHPOeuDw 維尼
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你有感覺哪位參賽者進不了候選區633Please respect copyright.PENANAGepG65dmJ1
很可惜的嗎?8964 copyright protection629PENANAMwjHbwBoer 維尼
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嗯…633Please respect copyright.PENANA1EEHDK8Opd
真要說的話633Please respect copyright.PENANAqLGp3f5Yob
子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億是不錯的作品633Please respect copyright.PENANAsUZAifxdS3
只可惜名額有限8964 copyright protection629PENANAhzYOzzppq0 維尼
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那如果✊✊現在還可以用,你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection629PENANAOPkjQrHzv2 維尼
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也不會,哈哈633Please respect copyright.PENANASLc85pMkBE
因為入選剩下來的選手也很出色8964 copyright protection629PENANA478fA4oUCJ 維尼
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是的。633Please respect copyright.PENANA2NkoIqd0tp
想問一下633Please respect copyright.PENANAr6u2OJeUpS
日勻的作品——他的故事8964 copyright protection629PENANAONl6uRBHCP 維尼
你好像是給他打滿高分的,633Please respect copyright.PENANAUN1kinmJmO
但你好似沒有給他舉圈的吧?8964 copyright protection629PENANAFSCGgWh40w 維尼
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是的哈哈,大概是圓圈太有限了(眼神死8964 copyright protection629PENANACTxzDuKk3N 維尼
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如果好像文楓落得三叉的下場,你會像紀言那樣出拳嗎?8964 copyright protection629PENANAVFMYAM640d 維尼
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這個,大概南師父不會給叉哈哈,所以我很放心633Please respect copyright.PENANAfImQNp0dm3
所以應該也不會8964 copyright protection629PENANA4TE90Gkq7O 維尼
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你就算好了他們想法是不是ww8964 copyright protection629PENANA7BIXZRAa4o 維尼
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沒錯!633Please respect copyright.PENANAUJPRyHiLom
你看洗版南師父就知道633Please respect copyright.PENANATz3O76GREk
古風武俠,他不會放過!8964 copyright protection629PENANAol61ye6dlf 維尼
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因為你不像另外兩位,已經定了第一名邀請的參賽者633Please respect copyright.PENANAgpzzTrLgTG
你覺得是比較好、自在?633Please respect copyright.PENANAEsMnvhf3ce
還是比較擔心被搶人呢?8964 copyright protection629PENANAAbPYN9wvjX 維尼
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也不會特別怕啦哈哈8964 copyright protection629PENANAvfF0vnuRFn 維尼
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剛完成了選擇門的部分633Please respect copyright.PENANAOL85RjWRcN
有甚麼感想的嗎?8964 copyright protection629PENANAUGDPVcHFAL 維尼
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真的讓人緊張呢633Please respect copyright.PENANAuKZbeoJQSE
其實很多參賽者的實力相差真的不遠633Please respect copyright.PENANASuVgxinSpP
在抉擇時真的讓人加倍為難8964 copyright protection629PENANAUWLUzBqahb 維尼
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有沒有覺得可惜的參賽者?竟然進不了候選區這樣?8964 copyright protection629PENANA9NkHmtv98P 維尼
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其實此去拾年我覺得是寫得不錯的633Please respect copyright.PENANA83fVvaPaTL
可是類似的作品有點多633Please respect copyright.PENANArmXVChwdq9
真的很可惜8964 copyright protection629PENANA9ezHOlyfMk 維尼
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這是你當時沒有給出✊的原因嗎?8964 copyright protection629PENANAD7hmelUrqG 維尼
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此去拾年和十年陽光、董小姐都被我歸到同一類中633Please respect copyright.PENANAqobLz3hCKz
嘛,他也寫得很好,但另外兩篇真的是更好8964 copyright protection629PENANAViBCDpdugx 維尼
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明白。633Please respect copyright.PENANASMoZhGTncf
那現在進入了給候選區參賽者排邀請順序的環節633Please respect copyright.PENANAcmbaWdRkGb
你有甚麼想法嗎?8964 copyright protection629PENANA3dJrE0sxHA 維尼
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說實在的633Please respect copyright.PENANAcr0f2oVBjy
我超級糾結633Please respect copyright.PENANAPI7ysrwpck
尤其是(竟然)有那麼多參賽者選我,壓力倍增呢8964 copyright protection629PENANAP1aCYcvsel 維尼
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本來是要跟分數排的,可是後來考慮到題材的問題,又再排了一次633Please respect copyright.PENANAX8g52tmqt1
如上所說,十年陽光和董小姐是在最高分之列633Please respect copyright.PENANAvUXdvNOsPx
可是他們的題材有點類近633Please respect copyright.PENANARGE1JAIA81
我想讓我的學員們能接觸多一點不同的類型,這樣聊起來才更有趣633Please respect copyright.PENANAmG3bwp6Aiw
所以嘛,即使二人都是最高分,我還是只會選一個8964 copyright protection629PENANAfG55zCBmzN 維尼
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說回來,你是參賽者們的最搶手首選導師,就最多人選你8964 copyright protection629PENANAQSTSYbQ9su 維尼
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當初沒想過這麼多人選我的哈哈633Please respect copyright.PENANAVybBcgWv9P
畢竟楓成是penana人氣王633Please respect copyright.PENANAXlL8iI6pk2
東南也筆耕了十多年633Please respect copyright.PENANAMGTGJeJrVb
說到資歷和寫作的字數,可能我是最少的呢哈哈633Please respect copyright.PENANAgMXvQhAmsn
不過也感謝大家的愛戴8964 copyright protection629PENANAVPIknTmHVp 維尼
我先說我的首選好了633Please respect copyright.PENANAMPtEL2jpUt
(是甚麼呢???????)(自帶效果!)8964 copyright protection629PENANA1Lghj98rXd 維尼
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不是你說要早點睡的嗎!www8964 copyright protection629PENANAVtQxdvDt83 維尼
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好了喇633Please respect copyright.PENANAhNA6WdA5OZ
第一位是十年陽光喇633Please respect copyright.PENANAjJ3pZipFEJ
我要分享一下我的心路歷程XPXP8964 copyright protection629PENANA6GWmwMKjhU 維尼
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可以的~8964 copyright protection629PENANA8MM7QUPXTp 維尼
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第二位就是成功獲得我一拳的獵巫!633Please respect copyright.PENANAoy6PQgeRbo
第三位其實糾結了超~~~~~~~~~~~久633Please respect copyright.PENANA3FdCB58XjY
是在輪候者和天使的惡作劇之間掙扎了好久8964 copyright protection629PENANAuvzFV1A5nf 維尼
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但輪候者的Blackative 很厲害,寫了兩篇不一樣的作品~8964 copyright protection629PENANA66og24Uvj4 維尼
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輪候者是非常成熟的作品,風格也已經定形了633Please respect copyright.PENANAXY1nsl18Lh
時限內能寫兩篇也真的很厲害633Please respect copyright.PENANAfdvNnz4qDS
不過時間小偷的話我就稍嫌有點負面了633Please respect copyright.PENANABgwoUzthTn
寫作作為興趣,應該是先令自己開心,然後再看看其他的可能的633Please respect copyright.PENANA5poxOh2T8o
至於天使的惡作劇,雖然分數上不及輪候者,但是他的文風很對我的腦波,我也覺得他有潛力633Please respect copyright.PENANATv7Kpuv5zQ
所以第三位一直在他們之間糾結8964 copyright protection629PENANAMW94lqwFBH 維尼
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最後,你的選擇是……8964 copyright protection629PENANATm7wi61Mhk 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection629PENANAHe1fqxtHOo 維尼
就是⋯⋯633Please respect copyright.PENANAUeim1AqFri
天使的惡作劇!633Please respect copyright.PENANANCJ47ID3ak
我希望Blackative能被其他導師收入戰隊633Please respect copyright.PENANAbZXPkHwBgm
他的實力是值得的633Please respect copyright.PENANASPPwPyYDD6
奈何只有三個位置633Please respect copyright.PENANAoJPBdPJ6Gf
(嘛,規則也是我們三人定的,也沒辦法喇)8964 copyright protection629PENANAGZPl1r57pp 維尼
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好了……我們就先聽紀言的頭三順序,不然要天亮了8964 copyright protection629PENANAuLKzwBTSof 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection629PENANADiTqh1TKYc 維尼
嘮嘮叨叨了一大堆呢哈哈8964 copyright protection629PENANAiMJoDGSCTd 維尼
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謝謝紀言😂8964 copyright protection629PENANAYHt5BNtaAw 維尼
633Please respect copyright.PENANA3jhLsvJLbE
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(邀請順序收集中……)8964 copyright protection629PENANAOxnn4vSS5W 維尼
(節目組整理中……)8964 copyright protection629PENANAtxyu4isHIu 維尼
開始送出組隊邀請!8964 copyright protection629PENANAMowAzfUNhc 維尼
633Please respect copyright.PENANAB1oJp0QUY5
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【參賽者預備室】8964 copyright protection629PENANAHhszptiB70 維尼
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有些參賽者和導師們是兩情相悅的,633Please respect copyright.PENANA7MMrAkhn7E
最終修成正果,可喜可賀!8964 copyright protection629PENANAKUofn1x5yy 維尼
633Please respect copyright.PENANA7T751O80Xq
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恭喜你,成功加入東南/ 紀言 / 楓成戰隊!8964 copyright protection629PENANAIUh4u7igAN 維尼
參賽者A8964 copyright protection629PENANAzUdpR2Vedw 維尼
:O 我以為係21號先有結果😂 btw thx8964 copyright protection629PENANAeF0BaO4qIc 維尼
參賽者B8964 copyright protection629PENANAOH6iLh5ERn 維尼
哇!真架?🥰8964 copyright protection629PENANAORMQKmZtJD 維尼
參賽者C8964 copyright protection629PENANAQ5cWaCCZzd 維尼
收到了,感謝你這麼晚了還要通知我們這群選手8964 copyright protection629PENANAgzNmBQOFWL 維尼
參賽者D8964 copyright protection629PENANAGiqvbeL8WF 維尼
感激涕零!🥺🥺8964 copyright protection629PENANApAjlbaM6BQ 維尼
參賽者E8964 copyright protection629PENANAAw21p6vFR1 維尼
我入圍了?8964 copyright protection629PENANAfGJKkKGker 維尼
參賽者F8964 copyright protection629PENANA5gLVLFk55W 維尼
多謝你8964 copyright protection629PENANANSLPyftxHy 維尼
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終於等到消息😭😭8964 copyright protection629PENANAY3yaihGmrA 維尼
633Please respect copyright.PENANA5m8G4kZLfe
8964 copyright protection629PENANAQJermmnK8E 維尼
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而有些參賽者就要陷入天人交戰的選擇!633Please respect copyright.PENANAif8sPk2qwB
面對非首選導師的邀請,是要接受,還是……8964 copyright protection629PENANAnnRurj61E1 維尼
633Please respect copyright.PENANAiyRXGiX8dn
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導師A誠邀你進入他的戰隊,請問你願意接受嗎?633Please respect copyright.PENANAIVqN02jqHM
提提你,你首選係導師B8964 copyright protection629PENANABcOQTO86eu 維尼
參賽者H8964 copyright protection629PENANAxIcJ7Bqj28 維尼
雖然冇被導師B選中有啲可惜,但我其實唔介意被分到邊一隊(搔頭8964 copyright protection629PENANAnJ9X3GAcU0 維尼
參賽者I8964 copyright protection629PENANAdarnE5CoKI 維尼
但導師B有冇講咩?8964 copyright protection629PENANAjy9ZYtpb7o 維尼
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或者我解釋下先,個情況係:633Please respect copyright.PENANACkQO5kh2jI
導師A對你嘅邀請順序高過導師B。633Please respect copyright.PENANA8xey0SGg4T
如果你拒絕咗,有可能會收到導師B嘅邀請,633Please respect copyright.PENANAwH9NgTIkQQ
但前提係:當時導師B戰隊未滿人。633Please respect copyright.PENANAWjJDt79yml
如果導師B戰隊已經滿人,但你又拒絕咗導師A,633Please respect copyright.PENANASE6bYeZEE6
你就只可以參與復活賽,睇下仲有冇機會入導師B戰隊。8964 copyright protection629PENANA9PySbIvJnC 維尼
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咁複雜既ODO?!633Please respect copyright.PENANApBPwnT4cvl
喊出嚟,都好賭博喎(つД`)8964 copyright protection629PENANAALOWqtEenr 維尼
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依個我最遲可以幾時答你?8964 copyright protection629PENANAKjmT3a3tsW 維尼
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可能……盡快?8964 copyright protection629PENANAjjL0PBCgxP 維尼
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我今晚墊高枕頭諗諗,聽日覆你唔好意思(つД`)8964 copyright protection629PENANA3vj691izoS 維尼
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咁就加入導師A嘅戰隊633Please respect copyright.PENANALFeOZqOj54
我估,咁姐係佢幾欣賞我633Please respect copyright.PENANAq1kvpPHgMU
掛8964 copyright protection629PENANAHq9SeQrRLk 維尼
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我決定好了(超快633Please respect copyright.PENANAacVdsFIQcC
我都係入導師A隊633Please respect copyright.PENANAFqvdzpq7Cn
唔太敢賭(つД`)8964 copyright protection629PENANAJ1ddF7m45c 維尼
633Please respect copyright.PENANAx9xsmBXJOo
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【鏡頭關上後】8964 copyright protection629PENANA6Jm2COylNt 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection629PENANAutC0Tepqs5 維尼
我有少少寄語卑Blackative,我不如Pm你?8964 copyright protection629PENANAfiz7W5vMZ2 維尼
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好8964 copyright protection629PENANAgGcsajwKrb 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection629PENANA1gi0qeX378 維尼
首先要講一句好遺憾你入唔到戰隊賽。633Please respect copyright.PENANAbnRGdEucQA
你兩篇文喺我眼中都係本次比賽裏面的精品,但我選擇戰隊成員時,實力雖然係其中一個考慮因素,但另外更多係會考慮成員風格同自己夾唔夾,同埋每位成員的潛力等等因素。633Please respect copyright.PENANA6dd5gRSe8i
你卑我感覺係一個已經相當成熟,好有自己一套嘅作者,無論係時間小偷定係豬果篇我覺得都發揮得唔錯,我讀時都頗有眼前一亮的感覺。633Please respect copyright.PENANAVFW0V8NYm2
但奈何戰隊賽名額有限,我揀的三位亦係我認為最適合我戰隊的成員,所以就只能忍痛無向你拋出橄欖枝,我相信其餘兩位導師應該都同我一樣,對你落選係感到遺憾的。633Please respect copyright.PENANAederTs3C4W
我希望你唔好因為呢個結果就感到氣餒,希望你能夠堅持同繼續寫落去。如果你參加復活賽的話,我亦會非常期待你復活賽的表現,加油!8964 copyright protection629PENANApyCZD1z9zr 維尼
【海選選秀環節】完!8964 copyright protection629PENANA6ZtFQmcR2d 維尼
多謝收看!8964 copyright protection629PENANAEWFleAsXeY 維尼
請繼續關注:8964 copyright protection629PENANABgOIhe1nwO 維尼
【第二階段:戰隊/復活賽】「太歲兵團 X 萌動學生小說集2021」寫作營8964 copyright protection629PENANAxjAm2gnnu3 維尼
之後還會有很多寫作分享跟幕後花絮讓你看,不要錯過囉!8964 copyright protection629PENANAMrkAM3flja 維尼
參賽者們,8964 copyright protection629PENANAjwBYFLmj0J 維尼
第二階段還有三十二天就要結束了!8964 copyright protection629PENANACpQsLkWrdA 維尼
注意時間哦!8964 copyright protection629PENANArNWvQvwmaC 維尼
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