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筆流暢舒服,看上去與故事匹配,讀得非常舒服。在這個故事塑造這個氛圍裏面,其實都沒有什麼好挑剔的了。434Please respect copyright.PENANAnvZACxFkI9
唯獨有點附加意見就是,既然作者已經非常擅於掌握節奏同寫到好溫馨細膩的感情,建議日後寫愛情小說時,在劇情或者世界觀裏面下點功夫,讓故事看上去「特別」一點。434Please respect copyright.PENANAoHiyiZwnqf
畢竟如今現實純愛的故事已經有點不待見,所以要吸引讀者 / 編輯眼球的話,就可能要在其他方面花點功夫哦。加油!8964 copyright protection430PENANAQ16CgPANJR 維尼
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單就此篇而言已是無甚可再挑剔之處。8964 copyright protection430PENANA6gCbvY3zTs 維尼
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非常好的作品啊,勵志,愛情,熱血都有,很有《爆漫》的感覺。434Please respect copyright.PENANAkp2owlwvtX
整篇作品都好完整,沒什麼好挑剔的。434Please respect copyright.PENANAVJJTEPsjFh
唯一可以挑刺就是對於「十年」這點算是較為牽強。如果寫長少少的話,可以是作者想17歲出書但失敗,然後再用十年參賽、投稿,成為一個知名作家,這樣就會扣題扣得好很多了。434Please respect copyright.PENANA7POITfV7kQ
其實這一篇也可以寫長,變成一部5、6萬的中短篇小說,我覺得也挺有潛質的。8964 copyright protection430PENANAB8llICBM70 維尼
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只要下次不要第一下交無字天書就可以了434Please respect copyright.PENANAk2t0SWmbda
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當初文楓你們也這麼說……434Please respect copyright.PENANA85rdvmQzCO
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一起來迎接最後一位參賽者~434Please respect copyright.PENANArMYxisNvYu
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很不錯的玄幻作品。其實這種參賽作品,更是限制了一萬字內的比賽,要撰寫玄幻或異世界類的作品是困難的。434Please respect copyright.PENANA5Bl2hPnaxY
首先很聰明先用現代及香港作背景,同時以茅山道法這香港人較熟悉的元素,變相不需要花費太多筆墨就能夠寫出玄幻元素。434Please respect copyright.PENANA5UENTEUfON
整體從文筆、劇情、橋段等等實屬不俗。434Please respect copyright.PENANA3w612oCKWj
期待你的成長。8964 copyright protection430PENANAYL2kWO8iWS 維尼
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為了楓成而入寫作坑的人……莫名熱血啊!434Please respect copyright.PENANAFGZ0TMsL7b
以有限的字數建構完整的世界觀不容易,我認為作者在這方面是成功的。434Please respect copyright.PENANAasTLfBWOwr
不過可以再留意內容的剪裁,精減一些與主線無關的敍述,如三位後人的感情線,可使情節更為緊湊。8964 copyright protection430PENANAKvk0PUsJki 維尼
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優點是世界觀與故事完成度高,打鬥戲精彩。434Please respect copyright.PENANAQQyQnHsqFZ
缺點是劇情枝節太多,只是整體瑕不掩瑜,算是海選中其中一篇精品。8964 copyright protection430PENANASHz3CzmTvH 維尼
以下有幾個建議:434Please respect copyright.PENANAPkYOZwRH7n
1. 此等短篇字數有限,切忌得隴望蜀。不要野心太大創造過多角色,在一萬以內的短文之中,人多反而容易手腳亂。434Please respect copyright.PENANA9C1DS2yVKQ
2. 對於傳統茅山道術知識的引用需要注意一下,適量拋出會顯得淵博,但過多則會適得其反,有賣弄之感。434Please respect copyright.PENANAWSBV5Y2g0s
3. 如第一點所言,三名小主角其實性格同存在感都不算突出,比較流於表面,尤其感情戲其實頗嫌累贅。下次設計劇情時要注意一下。8964 copyright protection430PENANARYb2dHQq5L 維尼
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我是很想給pass的喇(遙望節目組)8964 copyright protection430PENANAzrqBD7qAi7 維尼
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嗯434Please respect copyright.PENANAQrcyVXfOwn
這個作者是我認識的人呢434Please respect copyright.PENANAH35S51JCMI
見證到他的成長也挺欣慰的8964 copyright protection430PENANAgf6uIYU5rC 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection430PENANAlTAIncwBCh 維尼
東南老人家模式啟動了8964 copyright protection430PENANAUio4qpQrAV 維尼
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對8964 copyright protection430PENANAvHqXvhos6W 維尼
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想當年出現了⋯⋯8964 copyright protection430PENANAS622tiyeGu 維尼
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來,434Please respect copyright.PENANAmnfTEf61ae
東叔,一起來玩⭕️❌吧8964 copyright protection430PENANA0viItaYjgP 維尼
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(很想給⭕️的⋯⋯)8964 copyright protection430PENANAU4nAdapCB0 維尼
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恭喜恭喜8964 copyright protection430PENANAWEX2Nb1X6X 維尼
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恭喜8964 copyright protection430PENANAlhxJGPk6XS 維尼
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亡魂之筆可以進入候選區囉!8964 copyright protection430PENANAGmsf0Gw9Ye 維尼
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參賽者們的評審階段都完成囉!8964 copyright protection430PENANAMPFDjN3q3P 維尼
進入候選區的分別是8964 copyright protection430PENANAeX1mkWnDBy 維尼
儀洛羊434Please respect copyright.PENANABUONZdRIoa
郁郁如煙消於天434Please respect copyright.PENANAic52QT1zVa
涼靜融434Please respect copyright.PENANAUJPwnCtCpN
Blackative434Please respect copyright.PENANAYmLjCEAsFC
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亡魂之筆434Please respect copyright.PENANAA46jdVptev
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陌情有落8964 copyright protection430PENANApMGdN7PBUy 維尼
還有兩位由誠意✊✊打救的參賽者8964 copyright protection430PENANAEsuxPKkGrJ 維尼
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文楓8964 copyright protection430PENANApPtLYbhDKl 維尼
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接下來請三位退場434Please respect copyright.PENANAt9D4Wnx6Va
到自己的休息室給8位候選區的參賽者排邀請順序哦!8964 copyright protection430PENANAYa9WirBmMN 維尼
【東南預備室】8964 copyright protection430PENANASIq3aFYC54 維尼
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你有沒有覺得哪個參賽者進不了候選區,很可惜的呢?8964 copyright protection430PENANAM3fu9M7QGw 維尼
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我覺得下一站天后是很可惜的8964 copyright protection430PENANAhW0zJzA8Xl 維尼
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嗯,就是子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億。8964 copyright protection430PENANAWk32g4hrPw 維尼
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對8964 copyright protection430PENANAEqMcp5m5eh 維尼
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你也是打滿高分的。8964 copyright protection430PENANALoGPQlcUN0 維尼
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嗯8964 copyright protection430PENANAEvJu04ZUiy 維尼
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如果當初沒有用到✊✊的機會434Please respect copyright.PENANA3gvP4NExCp
你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection430PENANAGGVbjEePx1 維尼
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應該也不會。因為拳拳是直接順序第一名的選項434Please respect copyright.PENANAWnqHybnJEr
我覺得作者如果入選的話是紀言會比較符合他/她的風格434Please respect copyright.PENANAf9wDkNpVAE
我雖然能給到意見,但要入隊的話我還是想選一些我自覺能幫助更多的同學8964 copyright protection430PENANATXzkBtcr5P 維尼
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你有甚麼想跟選你的參賽者說的嗎?8964 copyright protection430PENANASn1PyFcJyp 維尼
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多謝選擇我。434Please respect copyright.PENANAxBbfEFvptv
希望我作為導師不會讓你們失望。8964 copyright protection430PENANAFEl2bBqZkA 維尼
我能否一個個說?8964 copyright protection430PENANAt7On2ZUbwW 維尼
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可以的8964 copyright protection430PENANAgf4uV7HCiv 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection430PENANAht9tcaREXh 維尼
首先跟日匀 說吧。8964 copyright protection430PENANArU66gBnzpD 維尼
其實見到你的文章,我感覺見到一個強化版的「當年自己」。434Please respect copyright.PENANAFJXuGBt17v
你的文字功力甚至比我當年紮實。劇情弱項也跟我當年類同。434Please respect copyright.PENANAHYXkamnoIM
所以我很希望能幫助你寫武俠,加油!8964 copyright protection430PENANAHi5frSZCpq 維尼
然後到過海巴士的洛羊。434Please respect copyright.PENANAn1J2wOCvqk
很驚訝你那麼高水準的會選擇我,希望我不會讓你失望!8964 copyright protection430PENANAqcjciJdLKF 維尼
最後到逆時。434Please respect copyright.PENANARKrlWT93CE
嗯 ..... 你的文很對我腦波,所以。。。。多謝!!8964 copyright protection430PENANAKT3SnijL5N 維尼
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你會先選那些首選你的參賽者嗎?8964 copyright protection430PENANAlOPvP2E600 維尼
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其實不會的434Please respect copyright.PENANA9lmvypokco
但碰巧這次三個都極中我8964 copyright protection430PENANAgpAwvHFBKg 維尼
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明白。434Please respect copyright.PENANAKaL6RND6ZW
那你邀請順序已經想好了嗎?434Please respect copyright.PENANAUByyX2TPHH
有讓你猶豫的部分?8964 copyright protection430PENANAtiR5csKRqc 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection430PENANApOlyO23X5s 維尼
想好了8964 copyright protection430PENANAfVA7LJFggd 維尼
1. #19 過海巴士 儀洛羊434Please respect copyright.PENANA2wAMsGXDhx
2. #20 他的故事 日勻8964 copyright protection430PENANAAz5kQNLIPj 維尼
其他全棄權讓給另外兩位吧www8964 copyright protection430PENANAzbAGYMAu90 維尼
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竟然這樣!434Please respect copyright.PENANANBmxmTSsJ0
你就不怕另外兩位跟你搶嗎?434Please respect copyright.PENANAG9OgQOAhOo
這樣你最糟可能只有一人進隊哦!8964 copyright protection430PENANAcU5RG1p8KJ 維尼
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我覺得他們一定不會搶日匀的。434Please respect copyright.PENANAtAac3LNFbs
另外洛羊他們雖給到很高分,但我覺得他們有另外適合他們的434Please respect copyright.PENANA5efWoh4sqm
應該不會跟我搶的wwwww8964 copyright protection430PENANAHbmsccb08h 維尼
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好的,一起來看看 東南的Flag……434Please respect copyright.PENANAQA23uLYcWW
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wwww434Please respect copyright.PENANAoG0lnpLkYw
求不要搶434Please respect copyright.PENANAOSaj3WAI7B
😂8964 copyright protection430PENANAFwTwok03Qa 維尼
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【楓成預備室】8964 copyright protection430PENANAEEpl2T5cwa 維尼
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剛才完成了選擇門的部分8964 copyright protection430PENANAxFGpyBT9RW 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection430PENANAU2gh5P2QUV 維尼
是的434Please respect copyright.PENANA0YATrUeNwQ
真是艱難的一部份(汗8964 copyright protection430PENANAcNUbrVOmTo 維尼
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你有感覺哪位參賽者進不了候選區434Please respect copyright.PENANARnBLi2jI3S
很可惜的嗎?8964 copyright protection430PENANAo4UlqwEDhm 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection430PENANAs1cgDLGiGM 維尼
嗯…434Please respect copyright.PENANA77mOZ7MRlb
真要說的話434Please respect copyright.PENANAbZ4U1rS8J0
子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億是不錯的作品434Please respect copyright.PENANAhB4ZAER5kE
只可惜名額有限8964 copyright protection430PENANAvla7iWr3zo 維尼
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那如果✊✊現在還可以用,你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection430PENANAy6VSnp9B43 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection430PENANAfYQnnjLrD7 維尼
也不會,哈哈434Please respect copyright.PENANA89XzhjBwlj
因為入選剩下來的選手也很出色8964 copyright protection430PENANA8PYtPeDYuQ 維尼
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是的。434Please respect copyright.PENANAKVvvdjxwJD
想問一下434Please respect copyright.PENANAqgwU7q4cQG
日勻的作品——他的故事8964 copyright protection430PENANAS6TNJfmkOr 維尼
你好像是給他打滿高分的,434Please respect copyright.PENANAIpn11DAZMa
但你好似沒有給他舉圈的吧?8964 copyright protection430PENANAQzp6e929hg 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection430PENANAhWbYL5Lu8p 維尼
是的哈哈,大概是圓圈太有限了(眼神死8964 copyright protection430PENANAMoU1sBL3xT 維尼
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如果好像文楓落得三叉的下場,你會像紀言那樣出拳嗎?8964 copyright protection430PENANAVfp9cso5uM 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection430PENANAIOWnDEcQyr 維尼
這個,大概南師父不會給叉哈哈,所以我很放心434Please respect copyright.PENANAzycq41z0qK
所以應該也不會8964 copyright protection430PENANADJN2O41p0D 維尼
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你就算好了他們想法是不是ww8964 copyright protection430PENANAO4Dw4IfZYj 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection430PENANAJwCPO0dIcF 維尼
沒錯!434Please respect copyright.PENANAb7uaegsnNf
你看洗版南師父就知道434Please respect copyright.PENANAta9MszWP3v
古風武俠,他不會放過!8964 copyright protection430PENANArxOxKoUWKE 維尼
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那說回來,8位候選區的選手們,你是會怎麼給他們排邀請優先序呢?434Please respect copyright.PENANAUs4sGdWYJS
因為你不像另外兩位,已經定了第一名邀請的參賽者434Please respect copyright.PENANAzYXYwPgz6A
你覺得是比較好、自在?434Please respect copyright.PENANAKohuPlWVwh
還是比較擔心被搶人呢?8964 copyright protection430PENANAXA5OOJHV2F 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection430PENANAFt4VLXeaif 維尼
也不會特別怕啦哈哈8964 copyright protection430PENANAIdqREw5aqV 維尼
434Please respect copyright.PENANAVZf0heqjGC
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【紀言預備室】8964 copyright protection430PENANAUaSnc0ZmTm 維尼
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剛完成了選擇門的部分434Please respect copyright.PENANAenDHSEhwKT
有甚麼感想的嗎?8964 copyright protection430PENANAHCg6POgo9M 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection430PENANAGEMkuJU5p3 維尼
真的讓人緊張呢434Please respect copyright.PENANAiBVrZsZr4E
其實很多參賽者的實力相差真的不遠434Please respect copyright.PENANAIUFXpjdmQq
在抉擇時真的讓人加倍為難8964 copyright protection430PENANAhwK2TwOya8 維尼
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有沒有覺得可惜的參賽者?竟然進不了候選區這樣?8964 copyright protection430PENANAVmOLzozJjf 維尼
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其實此去拾年我覺得是寫得不錯的434Please respect copyright.PENANALNUa4hAGJX
可是類似的作品有點多434Please respect copyright.PENANA0YMTCMCjK3
真的很可惜8964 copyright protection430PENANAOR0HekRXlH 維尼
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這是你當時沒有給出✊的原因嗎?8964 copyright protection430PENANA6IZtro2G4l 維尼
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此去拾年和十年陽光、董小姐都被我歸到同一類中434Please respect copyright.PENANAbwNIpZeKAa
嘛,他也寫得很好,但另外兩篇真的是更好8964 copyright protection430PENANASBojB3YKa0 維尼
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明白。434Please respect copyright.PENANAbVso5vmJkd
那現在進入了給候選區參賽者排邀請順序的環節434Please respect copyright.PENANAAOgfqwgwyV
你有甚麼想法嗎?8964 copyright protection430PENANAPMiQV3z6Z6 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection430PENANACp9y2TaClK 維尼
說實在的434Please respect copyright.PENANAgYxXdYiLuK
我超級糾結434Please respect copyright.PENANA8ZBWtj3RO2
尤其是(竟然)有那麼多參賽者選我,壓力倍增呢8964 copyright protection430PENANAqnZ7ZVp8S8 維尼
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有想好要根據甚麼去排的?8964 copyright protection430PENANAC5Q4VzIIuk 維尼
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本來是要跟分數排的,可是後來考慮到題材的問題,又再排了一次434Please respect copyright.PENANAXTg8rRsVXa
如上所說,十年陽光和董小姐是在最高分之列434Please respect copyright.PENANAFhS1Aqm2EG
可是他們的題材有點類近434Please respect copyright.PENANANNansy1A9J
我想讓我的學員們能接觸多一點不同的類型,這樣聊起來才更有趣434Please respect copyright.PENANAPNXJtiyabQ
所以嘛,即使二人都是最高分,我還是只會選一個8964 copyright protection430PENANAkJZA9L38g5 維尼
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說回來,你是參賽者們的最搶手首選導師,就最多人選你8964 copyright protection430PENANA0XGPRTVLF9 維尼
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當初沒想過這麼多人選我的哈哈434Please respect copyright.PENANAb7RHwHtzrJ
畢竟楓成是penana人氣王434Please respect copyright.PENANANeEmslKboz
東南也筆耕了十多年434Please respect copyright.PENANAB5nBmZU2iy
說到資歷和寫作的字數,可能我是最少的呢哈哈434Please respect copyright.PENANAsfmSVSBM7p
不過也感謝大家的愛戴8964 copyright protection430PENANAtW2ukUdmE1 維尼
我先說我的首選好了434Please respect copyright.PENANATUqxhBlz0O
(是甚麼呢???????)(自帶效果!)8964 copyright protection430PENANAg2TVgSxFH7 維尼
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不是你說要早點睡的嗎!www8964 copyright protection430PENANAwBQfPl39Xh 維尼
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好了喇434Please respect copyright.PENANA1D7jjFbckm
第一位是十年陽光喇434Please respect copyright.PENANAH7xn5e59n3
我要分享一下我的心路歷程XPXP8964 copyright protection430PENANAbToFqO1O1g 維尼
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可以的~8964 copyright protection430PENANAIN9U5LmveQ 維尼
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第二位就是成功獲得我一拳的獵巫!434Please respect copyright.PENANAYrBqZuCycu
第三位其實糾結了超~~~~~~~~~~~久434Please respect copyright.PENANAoBxuSWjECd
是在輪候者和天使的惡作劇之間掙扎了好久8964 copyright protection430PENANAVG23MZSpYU 維尼
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但輪候者的Blackative 很厲害,寫了兩篇不一樣的作品~8964 copyright protection430PENANAAJVWLzLODi 維尼
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輪候者是非常成熟的作品,風格也已經定形了434Please respect copyright.PENANADVDOmShocF
時限內能寫兩篇也真的很厲害434Please respect copyright.PENANA3JPdVv4ayl
不過時間小偷的話我就稍嫌有點負面了434Please respect copyright.PENANAa2ypAYF8LS
寫作作為興趣,應該是先令自己開心,然後再看看其他的可能的434Please respect copyright.PENANALEa9WFrbnc
至於天使的惡作劇,雖然分數上不及輪候者,但是他的文風很對我的腦波,我也覺得他有潛力434Please respect copyright.PENANAhQwjdafaer
所以第三位一直在他們之間糾結8964 copyright protection430PENANAHEMIgaHfnb 維尼
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最後,你的選擇是……8964 copyright protection430PENANA3tWg26qrI6 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection430PENANAR9yTbdyBVk 維尼
就是⋯⋯434Please respect copyright.PENANAngKGgbtUkd
天使的惡作劇!434Please respect copyright.PENANAIjl4azGRPR
我希望Blackative能被其他導師收入戰隊434Please respect copyright.PENANAKkXuYtsAFz
他的實力是值得的434Please respect copyright.PENANAPDsV8WRgMX
奈何只有三個位置434Please respect copyright.PENANAdStiGF5Tzd
(嘛,規則也是我們三人定的,也沒辦法喇)8964 copyright protection430PENANAktmMq5tibo 維尼
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好了……我們就先聽紀言的頭三順序,不然要天亮了8964 copyright protection430PENANA6OmvbAqnFU 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection430PENANAHrLVqsEmKG 維尼
嘮嘮叨叨了一大堆呢哈哈8964 copyright protection430PENANAGWieRCRP2K 維尼
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謝謝紀言😂8964 copyright protection430PENANAFljsudu93h 維尼
434Please respect copyright.PENANAmY9hWWLh6t
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434Please respect copyright.PENANA4tL9xfoO59
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(邀請順序收集中……)8964 copyright protection430PENANACdM83kdls8 維尼
(節目組整理中……)8964 copyright protection430PENANAHsZok2omqF 維尼
開始送出組隊邀請!8964 copyright protection430PENANAt9VqbyirmE 維尼
434Please respect copyright.PENANAEoisSCUfYC
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【參賽者預備室】8964 copyright protection430PENANAHn0WZRvsbU 維尼
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有些參賽者和導師們是兩情相悅的,434Please respect copyright.PENANAXTcG82Rkpe
最終修成正果,可喜可賀!8964 copyright protection430PENANAtG7gtV2ZbG 維尼
434Please respect copyright.PENANA0JDWXi6yJE
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恭喜你,成功加入東南/ 紀言 / 楓成戰隊!8964 copyright protection430PENANA7EpkQbtvC9 維尼
參賽者A8964 copyright protection430PENANA8ULPuiexLw 維尼
:O 我以為係21號先有結果😂 btw thx8964 copyright protection430PENANA8qvbdFH9Jz 維尼
參賽者B8964 copyright protection430PENANAXxTpkiatbe 維尼
哇!真架?🥰8964 copyright protection430PENANA1cKixY4M0Z 維尼
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收到了,感謝你這麼晚了還要通知我們這群選手8964 copyright protection430PENANAw3jMRojVUC 維尼
參賽者D8964 copyright protection430PENANAuDjbh8ltp4 維尼
感激涕零!🥺🥺8964 copyright protection430PENANAjfjQEBk8GE 維尼
參賽者E8964 copyright protection430PENANAvbLvQSg5gw 維尼
我入圍了?8964 copyright protection430PENANA5QrSKcRGRM 維尼
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多謝你8964 copyright protection430PENANAf6nnui9nTI 維尼
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終於等到消息😭😭8964 copyright protection430PENANApt4IaT7gQl 維尼
434Please respect copyright.PENANAI0t5183CH9
8964 copyright protection430PENANAKhTkrfMXR6 維尼
零器8964 copyright protection430PENANAmIyGCGD7FV 維尼
而有些參賽者就要陷入天人交戰的選擇!434Please respect copyright.PENANA29s58Isu0E
面對非首選導師的邀請,是要接受,還是……8964 copyright protection430PENANA2FfY5rgZrR 維尼
434Please respect copyright.PENANAau4yrH4B3m
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導師A誠邀你進入他的戰隊,請問你願意接受嗎?434Please respect copyright.PENANAlbX9DZTFhH
提提你,你首選係導師B8964 copyright protection430PENANA7hSDR5YAE9 維尼
參賽者H8964 copyright protection430PENANAUScIQryRWt 維尼
雖然冇被導師B選中有啲可惜,但我其實唔介意被分到邊一隊(搔頭8964 copyright protection430PENANAQ6SywhuXjB 維尼
參賽者I8964 copyright protection430PENANAGWWuTpmNPI 維尼
但導師B有冇講咩?8964 copyright protection430PENANACU7F5DuADb 維尼
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或者我解釋下先,個情況係:434Please respect copyright.PENANApQvc8UQPm9
導師A對你嘅邀請順序高過導師B。434Please respect copyright.PENANA5ZxLR0qi87
如果你拒絕咗,有可能會收到導師B嘅邀請,434Please respect copyright.PENANAhbYkwevaDh
但前提係:當時導師B戰隊未滿人。434Please respect copyright.PENANAGgBlNYKMWu
如果導師B戰隊已經滿人,但你又拒絕咗導師A,434Please respect copyright.PENANAvG8V8cui3h
你就只可以參與復活賽,睇下仲有冇機會入導師B戰隊。8964 copyright protection430PENANAXO09Iyo2Ew 維尼
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咁複雜既ODO?!434Please respect copyright.PENANALd2LGLb4iO
喊出嚟,都好賭博喎(つД`)8964 copyright protection430PENANAP2wGyuMgTA 維尼
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依個我最遲可以幾時答你?8964 copyright protection430PENANABat4stFxZA 維尼
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可能……盡快?8964 copyright protection430PENANA7rzgkQX9tM 維尼
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我今晚墊高枕頭諗諗,聽日覆你唔好意思(つД`)8964 copyright protection430PENANA82ENfafWQQ 維尼
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咁就加入導師A嘅戰隊434Please respect copyright.PENANA6fBllKZEuz
我估,咁姐係佢幾欣賞我434Please respect copyright.PENANAUcDfJWA62e
掛8964 copyright protection430PENANAK09dfaTTbD 維尼
參賽者H8964 copyright protection430PENANAfI4wdOxwxa 維尼
我決定好了(超快434Please respect copyright.PENANAtFjrc9Mlkj
我都係入導師A隊434Please respect copyright.PENANAZIgFwsrx4T
唔太敢賭(つД`)8964 copyright protection430PENANAFlpCGiOAKr 維尼
434Please respect copyright.PENANAiV7HhIjtbs
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【鏡頭關上後】8964 copyright protection430PENANAYXrjZ0Vr6E 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection430PENANANeMYSx3Op1 維尼
我有少少寄語卑Blackative,我不如Pm你?8964 copyright protection430PENANABtymvPO1AB 維尼
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好8964 copyright protection430PENANAu8zZeRT59N 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection430PENANAFpTJSq9Skk 維尼
首先要講一句好遺憾你入唔到戰隊賽。434Please respect copyright.PENANAAlJXwQK8Og
你兩篇文喺我眼中都係本次比賽裏面的精品,但我選擇戰隊成員時,實力雖然係其中一個考慮因素,但另外更多係會考慮成員風格同自己夾唔夾,同埋每位成員的潛力等等因素。434Please respect copyright.PENANAIzl4FKqumc
你卑我感覺係一個已經相當成熟,好有自己一套嘅作者,無論係時間小偷定係豬果篇我覺得都發揮得唔錯,我讀時都頗有眼前一亮的感覺。434Please respect copyright.PENANADGh5ChEAMo
但奈何戰隊賽名額有限,我揀的三位亦係我認為最適合我戰隊的成員,所以就只能忍痛無向你拋出橄欖枝,我相信其餘兩位導師應該都同我一樣,對你落選係感到遺憾的。434Please respect copyright.PENANAHKA92fsBAj
我希望你唔好因為呢個結果就感到氣餒,希望你能夠堅持同繼續寫落去。如果你參加復活賽的話,我亦會非常期待你復活賽的表現,加油!8964 copyright protection430PENANAfCvpmZ06Dd 維尼
【海選選秀環節】完!8964 copyright protection430PENANA3bRM6bfz1x 維尼
多謝收看!8964 copyright protection430PENANAJ4g1FKoA5a 維尼
請繼續關注:8964 copyright protection430PENANAJJGdhXSK0l 維尼
【第二階段:戰隊/復活賽】「太歲兵團 X 萌動學生小說集2021」寫作營8964 copyright protection430PENANAzaZND8w38s 維尼
之後還會有很多寫作分享跟幕後花絮讓你看,不要錯過囉!8964 copyright protection430PENANAZ6POPyzaOa 維尼
參賽者們,8964 copyright protection430PENANAlQY31OKVbx 維尼
第二階段還有三十二天就要結束了!8964 copyright protection430PENANALqMnzs8ppp 維尼
注意時間哦!8964 copyright protection430PENANA7dnWLzc7T5 維尼
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