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筆流暢舒服,看上去與故事匹配,讀得非常舒服。在這個故事塑造這個氛圍裏面,其實都沒有什麼好挑剔的了。576Please respect copyright.PENANA8tMmUFjGLE
唯獨有點附加意見就是,既然作者已經非常擅於掌握節奏同寫到好溫馨細膩的感情,建議日後寫愛情小說時,在劇情或者世界觀裏面下點功夫,讓故事看上去「特別」一點。576Please respect copyright.PENANAdee79KY8BI
畢竟如今現實純愛的故事已經有點不待見,所以要吸引讀者 / 編輯眼球的話,就可能要在其他方面花點功夫哦。加油!8964 copyright protection572PENANAYP61Xw3j94 維尼
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整篇作品都好完整,沒什麼好挑剔的。576Please respect copyright.PENANA6v6Ajtir0a
唯一可以挑刺就是對於「十年」這點算是較為牽強。如果寫長少少的話,可以是作者想17歲出書但失敗,然後再用十年參賽、投稿,成為一個知名作家,這樣就會扣題扣得好很多了。576Please respect copyright.PENANAL61xMeDJMp
其實這一篇也可以寫長,變成一部5、6萬的中短篇小說,我覺得也挺有潛質的。8964 copyright protection572PENANAYQjttw2nDR 維尼
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一起來迎接最後一位參賽者~576Please respect copyright.PENANAyvcEgGNE7k
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很不錯的玄幻作品。其實這種參賽作品,更是限制了一萬字內的比賽,要撰寫玄幻或異世界類的作品是困難的。576Please respect copyright.PENANApqaNfX9Qcr
首先很聰明先用現代及香港作背景,同時以茅山道法這香港人較熟悉的元素,變相不需要花費太多筆墨就能夠寫出玄幻元素。576Please respect copyright.PENANAOddZlK2IFr
整體從文筆、劇情、橋段等等實屬不俗。576Please respect copyright.PENANAnHE6UFYSwn
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為了楓成而入寫作坑的人……莫名熱血啊!576Please respect copyright.PENANAjz0AhwsdAw
以有限的字數建構完整的世界觀不容易,我認為作者在這方面是成功的。576Please respect copyright.PENANAzDaL5LGtxT
不過可以再留意內容的剪裁,精減一些與主線無關的敍述,如三位後人的感情線,可使情節更為緊湊。8964 copyright protection572PENANAP5jkWPwE1e 維尼
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優點是世界觀與故事完成度高,打鬥戲精彩。576Please respect copyright.PENANASfKCObDzTU
缺點是劇情枝節太多,只是整體瑕不掩瑜,算是海選中其中一篇精品。8964 copyright protection572PENANAlVbvf2xp0O 維尼
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1. 此等短篇字數有限,切忌得隴望蜀。不要野心太大創造過多角色,在一萬以內的短文之中,人多反而容易手腳亂。576Please respect copyright.PENANAJL1V4kCs2Z
2. 對於傳統茅山道術知識的引用需要注意一下,適量拋出會顯得淵博,但過多則會適得其反,有賣弄之感。576Please respect copyright.PENANAIZRJPv2Bri
3. 如第一點所言,三名小主角其實性格同存在感都不算突出,比較流於表面,尤其感情戲其實頗嫌累贅。下次設計劇情時要注意一下。8964 copyright protection572PENANAGcNmJGM8aa 維尼
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嗯576Please respect copyright.PENANAVpNNAthD0U
這個作者是我認識的人呢576Please respect copyright.PENANAPDwaXB4bzW
見證到他的成長也挺欣慰的8964 copyright protection572PENANAhpCLMDzSEt 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection572PENANAL4UL6VnPuY 維尼
東南老人家模式啟動了8964 copyright protection572PENANABKoCVQZSXa 維尼
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想當年出現了⋯⋯8964 copyright protection572PENANAHHh9NdwVhG 維尼
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來,576Please respect copyright.PENANAbq5Lf6qkoO
東叔,一起來玩⭕️❌吧8964 copyright protection572PENANAvFxqoAJQbQ 維尼
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(很想給⭕️的⋯⋯)8964 copyright protection572PENANAF9rUxe2Sju 維尼
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恭喜恭喜8964 copyright protection572PENANAug7tGGprf8 維尼
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恭喜8964 copyright protection572PENANAglZQMwW7iP 維尼
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亡魂之筆可以進入候選區囉!8964 copyright protection572PENANAj8mGxWPOY1 維尼
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參賽者們的評審階段都完成囉!8964 copyright protection572PENANAgM6eeUkBco 維尼
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儀洛羊576Please respect copyright.PENANAx0hszkTRzb
郁郁如煙消於天576Please respect copyright.PENANAnNSImRc9Cu
涼靜融576Please respect copyright.PENANA7bFpGIv7e3
Blackative576Please respect copyright.PENANA2G6Zm1LU6z
日勻576Please respect copyright.PENANAsDuIt30ZXv
亡魂之筆576Please respect copyright.PENANABWDjNC6Rhz
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陌情有落8964 copyright protection572PENANAWpoqvqg5rv 維尼
還有兩位由誠意✊✊打救的參賽者8964 copyright protection572PENANA6lZh3iCTxP 維尼
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文楓8964 copyright protection572PENANA7piIo4aXw2 維尼
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接下來請三位退場576Please respect copyright.PENANApiVl9yZVrP
到自己的休息室給8位候選區的參賽者排邀請順序哦!8964 copyright protection572PENANAKE0Ke23yci 維尼
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你有沒有覺得哪個參賽者進不了候選區,很可惜的呢?8964 copyright protection572PENANAyAELNljdDP 維尼
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我覺得下一站天后是很可惜的8964 copyright protection572PENANACLd3VZLf5f 維尼
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嗯,就是子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億。8964 copyright protection572PENANADVE9Rkn2F5 維尼
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對8964 copyright protection572PENANABNEpjmkCGP 維尼
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你也是打滿高分的。8964 copyright protection572PENANADgJCY4gBEp 維尼
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嗯8964 copyright protection572PENANA1LgAVJiDXE 維尼
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如果當初沒有用到✊✊的機會576Please respect copyright.PENANA2lcSOtuodi
你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection572PENANALkQlt674P5 維尼
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應該也不會。因為拳拳是直接順序第一名的選項576Please respect copyright.PENANAmeLXD989SZ
我覺得作者如果入選的話是紀言會比較符合他/她的風格576Please respect copyright.PENANApajVPLU6Do
我雖然能給到意見,但要入隊的話我還是想選一些我自覺能幫助更多的同學8964 copyright protection572PENANAF6XGYtjCft 維尼
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你有甚麼想跟選你的參賽者說的嗎?8964 copyright protection572PENANAOzzKquSVXn 維尼
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多謝選擇我。576Please respect copyright.PENANAJawNdtzBMG
希望我作為導師不會讓你們失望。8964 copyright protection572PENANAagMDdU48xi 維尼
我能否一個個說?8964 copyright protection572PENANAJ6Ri906b8a 維尼
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可以的8964 copyright protection572PENANAO2bw7j12xi 維尼
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首先跟日匀 說吧。8964 copyright protection572PENANA8ej0aS8Md2 維尼
其實見到你的文章,我感覺見到一個強化版的「當年自己」。576Please respect copyright.PENANArzYdr0V5iE
你的文字功力甚至比我當年紮實。劇情弱項也跟我當年類同。576Please respect copyright.PENANAJMeKOkJ855
所以我很希望能幫助你寫武俠,加油!8964 copyright protection572PENANAurfGRUmxiS 維尼
然後到過海巴士的洛羊。576Please respect copyright.PENANAGXNxMV88cU
很驚訝你那麼高水準的會選擇我,希望我不會讓你失望!8964 copyright protection572PENANAq9Eaf5m6Gz 維尼
最後到逆時。576Please respect copyright.PENANARtOAZ2tXJs
嗯 ..... 你的文很對我腦波,所以。。。。多謝!!8964 copyright protection572PENANAwrpJmEYH5d 維尼
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你會先選那些首選你的參賽者嗎?8964 copyright protection572PENANAguAU6Ueb0l 維尼
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其實不會的576Please respect copyright.PENANAbukz0N3uST
但碰巧這次三個都極中我8964 copyright protection572PENANAM0Y9eJwgLn 維尼
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明白。576Please respect copyright.PENANATpZZ1bSiVx
那你邀請順序已經想好了嗎?576Please respect copyright.PENANAvH1p2y0wEw
有讓你猶豫的部分?8964 copyright protection572PENANAim6lHrqUt9 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection572PENANAHNz85yc1jh 維尼
想好了8964 copyright protection572PENANA8ZMXjrZnvP 維尼
1. #19 過海巴士 儀洛羊576Please respect copyright.PENANALLTlSMuotV
2. #20 他的故事 日勻8964 copyright protection572PENANAhuHzojnCj0 維尼
其他全棄權讓給另外兩位吧www8964 copyright protection572PENANAKhMFQs1W71 維尼
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竟然這樣!576Please respect copyright.PENANAwzEqKy2iQP
你就不怕另外兩位跟你搶嗎?576Please respect copyright.PENANAHi8jgP7TTy
這樣你最糟可能只有一人進隊哦!8964 copyright protection572PENANAYsxzOGqmQM 維尼
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我覺得他們一定不會搶日匀的。576Please respect copyright.PENANAuwDJOpCQbF
另外洛羊他們雖給到很高分,但我覺得他們有另外適合他們的576Please respect copyright.PENANAQy67xOwjxY
應該不會跟我搶的wwwww8964 copyright protection572PENANAfQ1vTpjyJK 維尼
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好的,一起來看看 東南的Flag……576Please respect copyright.PENANArTlABWqgWt
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wwww576Please respect copyright.PENANAovRjXOY4wj
求不要搶576Please respect copyright.PENANAaWepKZ6foB
😂8964 copyright protection572PENANAEer6e3S7tH 維尼
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【楓成預備室】8964 copyright protection572PENANA7wuZbAkIFA 維尼
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剛才完成了選擇門的部分8964 copyright protection572PENANApWHUG6Tc1b 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection572PENANAZTdaIf1fWI 維尼
是的576Please respect copyright.PENANAKLBwVPNm69
真是艱難的一部份(汗8964 copyright protection572PENANAITwJ5oLSiR 維尼
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你有感覺哪位參賽者進不了候選區576Please respect copyright.PENANATrxtiaCf3e
很可惜的嗎?8964 copyright protection572PENANAGovlKVj9LF 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection572PENANAIsSEjMmeAC 維尼
嗯…576Please respect copyright.PENANAYKd9AKX4y6
真要說的話576Please respect copyright.PENANAywxm4Q6AWR
子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億是不錯的作品576Please respect copyright.PENANA7Ih9tas154
只可惜名額有限8964 copyright protection572PENANAqMWF2lERYu 維尼
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那如果✊✊現在還可以用,你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection572PENANAHZp9i0fDuD 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection572PENANAl8EVHBuYJg 維尼
也不會,哈哈576Please respect copyright.PENANAVDLGS4sMcI
因為入選剩下來的選手也很出色8964 copyright protection572PENANAHFLEiHkbsX 維尼
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是的。576Please respect copyright.PENANATz59Fz6QN8
想問一下576Please respect copyright.PENANAl0PCjGdXbH
日勻的作品——他的故事8964 copyright protection572PENANALBwAAwRoPL 維尼
你好像是給他打滿高分的,576Please respect copyright.PENANAIVvA6M13Bt
但你好似沒有給他舉圈的吧?8964 copyright protection572PENANAdzEGBv1Ny0 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection572PENANA9J4b5S4aUJ 維尼
是的哈哈,大概是圓圈太有限了(眼神死8964 copyright protection572PENANAwqmcm2gI8b 維尼
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如果好像文楓落得三叉的下場,你會像紀言那樣出拳嗎?8964 copyright protection572PENANAKRNZpEuQAc 維尼
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這個,大概南師父不會給叉哈哈,所以我很放心576Please respect copyright.PENANAxI7ZzK8MVJ
所以應該也不會8964 copyright protection572PENANAVmjwVlRwbN 維尼
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你就算好了他們想法是不是ww8964 copyright protection572PENANAMeZd4DQ94o 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection572PENANAYH0h2z363X 維尼
沒錯!576Please respect copyright.PENANAENfHzugiD9
你看洗版南師父就知道576Please respect copyright.PENANAbzhMOPmyVz
古風武俠,他不會放過!8964 copyright protection572PENANAJJLxgSlYbF 維尼
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那說回來,8位候選區的選手們,你是會怎麼給他們排邀請優先序呢?576Please respect copyright.PENANAIlIfq1WNai
因為你不像另外兩位,已經定了第一名邀請的參賽者576Please respect copyright.PENANAe2BPedNsj1
你覺得是比較好、自在?576Please respect copyright.PENANAQvDz4qrsjM
還是比較擔心被搶人呢?8964 copyright protection572PENANAeGzlObooIo 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection572PENANAF4fhDJCnzm 維尼
也不會特別怕啦哈哈8964 copyright protection572PENANAHfYOZyoW0x 維尼
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【紀言預備室】8964 copyright protection572PENANA6DRoVDJL2R 維尼
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剛完成了選擇門的部分576Please respect copyright.PENANAvHgl5fE0ZG
有甚麼感想的嗎?8964 copyright protection572PENANAzik2AwYuGA 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection572PENANAPF77piSQc8 維尼
真的讓人緊張呢576Please respect copyright.PENANAFO4ugJiBmF
其實很多參賽者的實力相差真的不遠576Please respect copyright.PENANAJv6qZOaa9d
在抉擇時真的讓人加倍為難8964 copyright protection572PENANAfaTFLpcseQ 維尼
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有沒有覺得可惜的參賽者?竟然進不了候選區這樣?8964 copyright protection572PENANAZF58YlGaFd 維尼
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其實此去拾年我覺得是寫得不錯的576Please respect copyright.PENANA05MdGPFbo8
可是類似的作品有點多576Please respect copyright.PENANAHLt8pjVwqI
真的很可惜8964 copyright protection572PENANAuE1wAbDT1z 維尼
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這是你當時沒有給出✊的原因嗎?8964 copyright protection572PENANAoeV2YW1jxq 維尼
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此去拾年和十年陽光、董小姐都被我歸到同一類中576Please respect copyright.PENANA0YaZkgHmnu
嘛,他也寫得很好,但另外兩篇真的是更好8964 copyright protection572PENANAYSGyN16CRl 維尼
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明白。576Please respect copyright.PENANAKEVgg8osc6
那現在進入了給候選區參賽者排邀請順序的環節576Please respect copyright.PENANA84qKbSemZv
你有甚麼想法嗎?8964 copyright protection572PENANAP7Esz9zthW 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection572PENANACrJaxJzhc0 維尼
說實在的576Please respect copyright.PENANACyleK1jGv4
我超級糾結576Please respect copyright.PENANAVw0VQHrT1X
尤其是(竟然)有那麼多參賽者選我,壓力倍增呢8964 copyright protection572PENANA3Ybij0slm0 維尼
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有想好要根據甚麼去排的?8964 copyright protection572PENANA6j1RB1PHxe 維尼
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本來是要跟分數排的,可是後來考慮到題材的問題,又再排了一次576Please respect copyright.PENANARoQSnNWifK
如上所說,十年陽光和董小姐是在最高分之列576Please respect copyright.PENANAzhlnMmQDwm
可是他們的題材有點類近576Please respect copyright.PENANAmSdhZ826wS
我想讓我的學員們能接觸多一點不同的類型,這樣聊起來才更有趣576Please respect copyright.PENANA9AZ6m9gptz
所以嘛,即使二人都是最高分,我還是只會選一個8964 copyright protection572PENANAejtDHi73sR 維尼
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說回來,你是參賽者們的最搶手首選導師,就最多人選你8964 copyright protection572PENANAopmjUDzu0q 維尼
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當初沒想過這麼多人選我的哈哈576Please respect copyright.PENANA3JP4yiYAlD
畢竟楓成是penana人氣王576Please respect copyright.PENANAmbkIjStdbJ
東南也筆耕了十多年576Please respect copyright.PENANAVfKFgOfRPM
說到資歷和寫作的字數,可能我是最少的呢哈哈576Please respect copyright.PENANAMmC8tPjpue
不過也感謝大家的愛戴8964 copyright protection572PENANAgvjJrVCZLL 維尼
我先說我的首選好了576Please respect copyright.PENANAz7k5aWylno
(是甚麼呢???????)(自帶效果!)8964 copyright protection572PENANAoexb4mC8Kl 維尼
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不是你說要早點睡的嗎!www8964 copyright protection572PENANA76s8Nd6MYK 維尼
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好了喇576Please respect copyright.PENANAz6S2g8wsTe
第一位是十年陽光喇576Please respect copyright.PENANAik1ABHQmsJ
我要分享一下我的心路歷程XPXP8964 copyright protection572PENANAZoTfjvbqOI 維尼
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可以的~8964 copyright protection572PENANAW3iknkC86k 維尼
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第二位就是成功獲得我一拳的獵巫!576Please respect copyright.PENANArKGtXZwtj6
第三位其實糾結了超~~~~~~~~~~~久576Please respect copyright.PENANAyVKmJQ279o
是在輪候者和天使的惡作劇之間掙扎了好久8964 copyright protection572PENANAHQUOUKX3ig 維尼
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但輪候者的Blackative 很厲害,寫了兩篇不一樣的作品~8964 copyright protection572PENANAArlKi0ePdl 維尼
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輪候者是非常成熟的作品,風格也已經定形了576Please respect copyright.PENANApZ75v4R0wc
時限內能寫兩篇也真的很厲害576Please respect copyright.PENANArAVZsnDkao
不過時間小偷的話我就稍嫌有點負面了576Please respect copyright.PENANAv4kZ1jl43c
寫作作為興趣,應該是先令自己開心,然後再看看其他的可能的576Please respect copyright.PENANAkiZB2bc99S
至於天使的惡作劇,雖然分數上不及輪候者,但是他的文風很對我的腦波,我也覺得他有潛力576Please respect copyright.PENANA3C1mEaYVzH
所以第三位一直在他們之間糾結8964 copyright protection572PENANAE0AtQf0RgN 維尼
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最後,你的選擇是……8964 copyright protection572PENANAV7S34lezWH 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection572PENANAnaGdc2mMYP 維尼
就是⋯⋯576Please respect copyright.PENANALUk6BGkbXC
天使的惡作劇!576Please respect copyright.PENANAT4bxrJl6Qe
我希望Blackative能被其他導師收入戰隊576Please respect copyright.PENANAY72mWhi98Y
他的實力是值得的576Please respect copyright.PENANAReIddC4ge6
奈何只有三個位置576Please respect copyright.PENANAevFPLuP3ie
(嘛,規則也是我們三人定的,也沒辦法喇)8964 copyright protection572PENANAeQUQ5vc21M 維尼
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好了……我們就先聽紀言的頭三順序,不然要天亮了8964 copyright protection572PENANABl6vluJtkK 維尼
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嘮嘮叨叨了一大堆呢哈哈8964 copyright protection572PENANAkxp8UVoEI7 維尼
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謝謝紀言😂8964 copyright protection572PENANA0llJKJMCB4 維尼
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(邀請順序收集中……)8964 copyright protection572PENANAzXnwrgTyZQ 維尼
(節目組整理中……)8964 copyright protection572PENANAo44ExhlPSB 維尼
開始送出組隊邀請!8964 copyright protection572PENANAfvYkdhHUKJ 維尼
576Please respect copyright.PENANAMRFbf5q1Da
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【參賽者預備室】8964 copyright protection572PENANAjw0TupV7OE 維尼
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有些參賽者和導師們是兩情相悅的,576Please respect copyright.PENANADMn4Np6S8d
最終修成正果,可喜可賀!8964 copyright protection572PENANAvfwolXCWjp 維尼
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恭喜你,成功加入東南/ 紀言 / 楓成戰隊!8964 copyright protection572PENANABjsYz8Mf7g 維尼
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:O 我以為係21號先有結果😂 btw thx8964 copyright protection572PENANAdb1RbMx1zY 維尼
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哇!真架?🥰8964 copyright protection572PENANAuBDl47okAl 維尼
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收到了,感謝你這麼晚了還要通知我們這群選手8964 copyright protection572PENANAk0DAkrHQwx 維尼
參賽者D8964 copyright protection572PENANAUWZnphGSUn 維尼
感激涕零!🥺🥺8964 copyright protection572PENANA59hQ2zk0Th 維尼
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我入圍了?8964 copyright protection572PENANAJNbMSiZMK0 維尼
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多謝你8964 copyright protection572PENANAWndl6mi2MH 維尼
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終於等到消息😭😭8964 copyright protection572PENANAfFZpaEPIcj 維尼
576Please respect copyright.PENANAsTSJ5GNIwz
8964 copyright protection572PENANAae92Vnz8aH 維尼
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而有些參賽者就要陷入天人交戰的選擇!576Please respect copyright.PENANATxujnPC1MT
面對非首選導師的邀請,是要接受,還是……8964 copyright protection572PENANAbi8KzYz2VD 維尼
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導師A誠邀你進入他的戰隊,請問你願意接受嗎?576Please respect copyright.PENANAiR81TaofHA
提提你,你首選係導師B8964 copyright protection572PENANAGnCCiv8d68 維尼
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雖然冇被導師B選中有啲可惜,但我其實唔介意被分到邊一隊(搔頭8964 copyright protection572PENANAolBzxKaXGr 維尼
參賽者I8964 copyright protection572PENANAnh9A5mBZUM 維尼
但導師B有冇講咩?8964 copyright protection572PENANAYmi4SqaiQm 維尼
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或者我解釋下先,個情況係:576Please respect copyright.PENANApLjJjXM6G9
導師A對你嘅邀請順序高過導師B。576Please respect copyright.PENANAQ4tF6pC5cX
如果你拒絕咗,有可能會收到導師B嘅邀請,576Please respect copyright.PENANABbwCYnUIIw
但前提係:當時導師B戰隊未滿人。576Please respect copyright.PENANAfKIl7F0Kga
如果導師B戰隊已經滿人,但你又拒絕咗導師A,576Please respect copyright.PENANAN58yMHncic
你就只可以參與復活賽,睇下仲有冇機會入導師B戰隊。8964 copyright protection572PENANAUb6IorTAsS 維尼
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咁複雜既ODO?!576Please respect copyright.PENANACel4By4QzW
喊出嚟,都好賭博喎(つД`)8964 copyright protection572PENANAEkpcD8oPvT 維尼
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依個我最遲可以幾時答你?8964 copyright protection572PENANAU1VFK1qOnC 維尼
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可能……盡快?8964 copyright protection572PENANAaR00fdtQmX 維尼
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我今晚墊高枕頭諗諗,聽日覆你唔好意思(つД`)8964 copyright protection572PENANACvp6YtIH9L 維尼
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咁就加入導師A嘅戰隊576Please respect copyright.PENANAerH6N86erD
我估,咁姐係佢幾欣賞我576Please respect copyright.PENANAuUmSaAJ8Ik
掛8964 copyright protection572PENANAcd1xon1l72 維尼
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我決定好了(超快576Please respect copyright.PENANAv2OIILHPpv
我都係入導師A隊576Please respect copyright.PENANAuyvcLdL4IK
唔太敢賭(つД`)8964 copyright protection572PENANA1HXOPwdQvv 維尼
576Please respect copyright.PENANANR3WvR1Kqj
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【鏡頭關上後】8964 copyright protection572PENANAE75WFEWni7 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection572PENANA77tZka2mOs 維尼
我有少少寄語卑Blackative,我不如Pm你?8964 copyright protection572PENANAvX8sAzkqh0 維尼
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好8964 copyright protection572PENANAzr2JQdT1XB 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection572PENANAWopFKbmmHi 維尼
首先要講一句好遺憾你入唔到戰隊賽。576Please respect copyright.PENANAFnCOc8tK2u
你兩篇文喺我眼中都係本次比賽裏面的精品,但我選擇戰隊成員時,實力雖然係其中一個考慮因素,但另外更多係會考慮成員風格同自己夾唔夾,同埋每位成員的潛力等等因素。576Please respect copyright.PENANALBOft8AzyU
你卑我感覺係一個已經相當成熟,好有自己一套嘅作者,無論係時間小偷定係豬果篇我覺得都發揮得唔錯,我讀時都頗有眼前一亮的感覺。576Please respect copyright.PENANAj08MaCRtTV
但奈何戰隊賽名額有限,我揀的三位亦係我認為最適合我戰隊的成員,所以就只能忍痛無向你拋出橄欖枝,我相信其餘兩位導師應該都同我一樣,對你落選係感到遺憾的。576Please respect copyright.PENANANK77UTEs5q
我希望你唔好因為呢個結果就感到氣餒,希望你能夠堅持同繼續寫落去。如果你參加復活賽的話,我亦會非常期待你復活賽的表現,加油!8964 copyright protection572PENANAQDelT273LJ 維尼
【海選選秀環節】完!8964 copyright protection572PENANAQwAmqaJLeG 維尼
多謝收看!8964 copyright protection572PENANAjyYcxAzK6u 維尼
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【第二階段:戰隊/復活賽】「太歲兵團 X 萌動學生小說集2021」寫作營8964 copyright protection572PENANAbiNWBkuXPU 維尼
之後還會有很多寫作分享跟幕後花絮讓你看,不要錯過囉!8964 copyright protection572PENANADojawtKUif 維尼
參賽者們,8964 copyright protection572PENANARLbMbMOwX9 維尼
第二階段還有三十二天就要結束了!8964 copyright protection572PENANAD252OlAG5J 維尼
注意時間哦!8964 copyright protection572PENANAL23jCgL7dl 維尼
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