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中間的互動其實應該描繪女主的音樂如何吸引男主,救治到男主的內心。552Please respect copyright.PENANAwPoBtzBfeU
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這個放心啦552Please respect copyright.PENANAZTl3Qqmu5g
非常出色的愛情小品,蒼老如我也回想起當年學校時純純的戀愛時光!552Please respect copyright.PENANA4G1C9gG7is
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文筆流暢而動人,學生時代的青澀令人感動,整體是一篇完整、感人而溫馨的短篇純愛故事。552Please respect copyright.PENANAOb5k7PR9Bl
如果在周應月暗戀唐嘉陽的伏筆上再花點心思會更佳。8964 copyright protection548PENANAlN0Ym2IQUZ 維尼
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真的真的,是一部非常成熟的作品,故事雖然偏向典型言情,但當中甜甜的感覺掌握得非常好。552Please respect copyright.PENANAraVdet2v8D
筆流暢舒服,看上去與故事匹配,讀得非常舒服。在這個故事塑造這個氛圍裏面,其實都沒有什麼好挑剔的了。552Please respect copyright.PENANAvII5jqLdt7
唯獨有點附加意見就是,既然作者已經非常擅於掌握節奏同寫到好溫馨細膩的感情,建議日後寫愛情小說時,在劇情或者世界觀裏面下點功夫,讓故事看上去「特別」一點。552Please respect copyright.PENANAdAnkoFmlgA
畢竟如今現實純愛的故事已經有點不待見,所以要吸引讀者 / 編輯眼球的話,就可能要在其他方面花點功夫哦。加油!8964 copyright protection548PENANAl2JcFDk5T9 維尼
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這愛情作品,好像還滿得三位的歡心哦~552Please respect copyright.PENANApmcPOWQwVa
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情感真摯動人,各種元素的揉合也很成熟,讀之使人心有戚戚焉。552Please respect copyright.PENANADPOlhcAmby
單就此篇而言已是無甚可再挑剔之處。8964 copyright protection548PENANAGCKJgsDRXR 維尼
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嗯嗯~552Please respect copyright.PENANAC15VjDDbaA
非常好的作品啊,勵志,愛情,熱血都有,很有《爆漫》的感覺。552Please respect copyright.PENANATYO97QSmuX
整篇作品都好完整,沒什麼好挑剔的。552Please respect copyright.PENANA7m3BENZPrT
唯一可以挑刺就是對於「十年」這點算是較為牽強。如果寫長少少的話,可以是作者想17歲出書但失敗,然後再用十年參賽、投稿,成為一個知名作家,這樣就會扣題扣得好很多了。552Please respect copyright.PENANARGDOD3xN3w
其實這一篇也可以寫長,變成一部5、6萬的中短篇小說,我覺得也挺有潛質的。8964 copyright protection548PENANAE6aZ8hh2q3 維尼
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只要下次不要第一下交無字天書就可以了552Please respect copyright.PENANAld33GPpeRc
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行文用字並沒有太過出人意表,但偏偏就靠著整個故事敘事方式,把情感表達得淋漓盡致。8964 copyright protection548PENANAp5Z1yfTz3F 維尼
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當初文楓你們也這麼說……552Please respect copyright.PENANAyKRFc1Ay2A
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早就說了不用擔心嘛8964 copyright protection548PENANAYCWHNWz6Tc 維尼
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恭喜陌情有落👏👏552Please respect copyright.PENANA3GLi7W2knN
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候選區歡迎你8964 copyright protection548PENANACaJxKrj6gu 維尼
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我是很誠實derrrrrrrrr8964 copyright protection548PENANAMRRR9xvHbL 維尼
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再次恭喜!8964 copyright protection548PENANAsftcUqUPT9 維尼
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當宵夜552Please respect copyright.PENANA1CtgoWW1PY
節目錄太久了喇8964 copyright protection548PENANAG6rQVuocWS 維尼
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只有楓成還沒用拳8964 copyright protection548PENANA7XbluKtMPv 維尼
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早知道我就學你552Please respect copyright.PENANAPJXsvXD47F
我就不用那麼謹慎了8964 copyright protection548PENANABa1fH1pWdo 維尼
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早知道就讓節目組加圈552Please respect copyright.PENANAhUs1ayAWgq
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好了,時候不早了。552Please respect copyright.PENANABPgMAq4zku
一起來迎接最後一位參賽者~552Please respect copyright.PENANARoSCyEy95U
亡魂之筆的作品8964 copyright protection548PENANAie2ctWEHLU 維尼
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很不錯的玄幻作品。其實這種參賽作品,更是限制了一萬字內的比賽,要撰寫玄幻或異世界類的作品是困難的。552Please respect copyright.PENANAwXIP3efLYU
首先很聰明先用現代及香港作背景,同時以茅山道法這香港人較熟悉的元素,變相不需要花費太多筆墨就能夠寫出玄幻元素。552Please respect copyright.PENANAuwpBA3JCnu
整體從文筆、劇情、橋段等等實屬不俗。552Please respect copyright.PENANAznsWA3Lh8g
期待你的成長。8964 copyright protection548PENANAZZcdqdNly3 維尼
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為了楓成而入寫作坑的人……莫名熱血啊!552Please respect copyright.PENANAMQNCaB8g5G
以有限的字數建構完整的世界觀不容易,我認為作者在這方面是成功的。552Please respect copyright.PENANAWQ0TgZAizl
不過可以再留意內容的剪裁,精減一些與主線無關的敍述,如三位後人的感情線,可使情節更為緊湊。8964 copyright protection548PENANAZV9japR6AW 維尼
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優點是世界觀與故事完成度高,打鬥戲精彩。552Please respect copyright.PENANAJmnwLrEkSB
缺點是劇情枝節太多,只是整體瑕不掩瑜,算是海選中其中一篇精品。8964 copyright protection548PENANA0WNTzwa5O5 維尼
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1. 此等短篇字數有限,切忌得隴望蜀。不要野心太大創造過多角色,在一萬以內的短文之中,人多反而容易手腳亂。552Please respect copyright.PENANAOPE0Vmjbl3
2. 對於傳統茅山道術知識的引用需要注意一下,適量拋出會顯得淵博,但過多則會適得其反,有賣弄之感。552Please respect copyright.PENANASyFQgzCaeO
3. 如第一點所言,三名小主角其實性格同存在感都不算突出,比較流於表面,尤其感情戲其實頗嫌累贅。下次設計劇情時要注意一下。8964 copyright protection548PENANA7wqOFFjyHR 維尼
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嗯552Please respect copyright.PENANAl7SiEs2LW3
這個作者是我認識的人呢552Please respect copyright.PENANA1Y32LoyfNV
見證到他的成長也挺欣慰的8964 copyright protection548PENANAvBFEDAS4VZ 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection548PENANAIokDKWKeof 維尼
東南老人家模式啟動了8964 copyright protection548PENANA8SHHlbaUta 維尼
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想當年出現了⋯⋯8964 copyright protection548PENANAXDRDywAnCA 維尼
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東叔,一起來玩⭕️❌吧8964 copyright protection548PENANAX4SAnS3bsq 維尼
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參賽者們的評審階段都完成囉!8964 copyright protection548PENANAbgB86VpC1R 維尼
進入候選區的分別是8964 copyright protection548PENANAqUTDy7dDu2 維尼
儀洛羊552Please respect copyright.PENANAONoWp3Ghve
郁郁如煙消於天552Please respect copyright.PENANATAcumasdSM
涼靜融552Please respect copyright.PENANAG37p2tuKjc
Blackative552Please respect copyright.PENANAiTOrRdtabn
日勻552Please respect copyright.PENANAvE1ECdPz1K
亡魂之筆552Please respect copyright.PENANATnjFxgwGPf
浮游詩墨552Please respect copyright.PENANAhpTHJiy1Re
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還有兩位由誠意✊✊打救的參賽者8964 copyright protection548PENANASuBraNfuYn 維尼
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文楓8964 copyright protection548PENANAk1BtWIZy8h 維尼
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接下來請三位退場552Please respect copyright.PENANAnx1UOOKL7q
到自己的休息室給8位候選區的參賽者排邀請順序哦!8964 copyright protection548PENANAoRFMvpEP5U 維尼
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你有沒有覺得哪個參賽者進不了候選區,很可惜的呢?8964 copyright protection548PENANA7nAr1v56rb 維尼
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我覺得下一站天后是很可惜的8964 copyright protection548PENANAGYdzUJjqfQ 維尼
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嗯,就是子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億。8964 copyright protection548PENANA93PbFgIiMf 維尼
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對8964 copyright protection548PENANAHKxQX5WN5o 維尼
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你也是打滿高分的。8964 copyright protection548PENANAGBhfF2YFpP 維尼
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嗯8964 copyright protection548PENANAFJCOgQN5Gx 維尼
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如果當初沒有用到✊✊的機會552Please respect copyright.PENANAdbtqXPfhpt
你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection548PENANALrsAvS19n5 維尼
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應該也不會。因為拳拳是直接順序第一名的選項552Please respect copyright.PENANAHgXf4Kh61k
我覺得作者如果入選的話是紀言會比較符合他/她的風格552Please respect copyright.PENANAvOBAarCQff
我雖然能給到意見,但要入隊的話我還是想選一些我自覺能幫助更多的同學8964 copyright protection548PENANAv8Otxg9sVR 維尼
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你有甚麼想跟選你的參賽者說的嗎?8964 copyright protection548PENANAox2WvhEFTt 維尼
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多謝選擇我。552Please respect copyright.PENANAMD9ymIeLti
希望我作為導師不會讓你們失望。8964 copyright protection548PENANACjYj4ZroWs 維尼
我能否一個個說?8964 copyright protection548PENANAMC1wX7iABs 維尼
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可以的8964 copyright protection548PENANAtwKcZOWW2I 維尼
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首先跟日匀 說吧。8964 copyright protection548PENANAC00ZaPaxlS 維尼
其實見到你的文章,我感覺見到一個強化版的「當年自己」。552Please respect copyright.PENANAQnrEsqjO97
你的文字功力甚至比我當年紮實。劇情弱項也跟我當年類同。552Please respect copyright.PENANAYC2AxGE4fF
所以我很希望能幫助你寫武俠,加油!8964 copyright protection548PENANAROYpId603d 維尼
然後到過海巴士的洛羊。552Please respect copyright.PENANAOCnOgcdwuD
很驚訝你那麼高水準的會選擇我,希望我不會讓你失望!8964 copyright protection548PENANAoOsJ9oDWaa 維尼
最後到逆時。552Please respect copyright.PENANA1dboz1pVWr
嗯 ..... 你的文很對我腦波,所以。。。。多謝!!8964 copyright protection548PENANAPsLwnWPioA 維尼
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你會先選那些首選你的參賽者嗎?8964 copyright protection548PENANAhKlXRkH0xb 維尼
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其實不會的552Please respect copyright.PENANAQE8IA3K0Yo
但碰巧這次三個都極中我8964 copyright protection548PENANAxEPvxf4UFK 維尼
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明白。552Please respect copyright.PENANAhzQbEmPDJr
那你邀請順序已經想好了嗎?552Please respect copyright.PENANAq8UEIO8ysx
有讓你猶豫的部分?8964 copyright protection548PENANAeIewkE43RY 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection548PENANAjdmWdGP4eP 維尼
想好了8964 copyright protection548PENANAGkdyrQZaIL 維尼
1. #19 過海巴士 儀洛羊552Please respect copyright.PENANA11xPoIXCcF
2. #20 他的故事 日勻8964 copyright protection548PENANAfO2hz9GjUT 維尼
其他全棄權讓給另外兩位吧www8964 copyright protection548PENANA3hsHTtcsvM 維尼
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竟然這樣!552Please respect copyright.PENANAIguZ58ggGT
你就不怕另外兩位跟你搶嗎?552Please respect copyright.PENANAblpGf0uEwP
這樣你最糟可能只有一人進隊哦!8964 copyright protection548PENANAY6M1MmFJVn 維尼
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我覺得他們一定不會搶日匀的。552Please respect copyright.PENANA1L2dszoKv3
另外洛羊他們雖給到很高分,但我覺得他們有另外適合他們的552Please respect copyright.PENANAxUnzS5epFr
應該不會跟我搶的wwwww8964 copyright protection548PENANANHHVP2IO17 維尼
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好的,一起來看看 東南的Flag……552Please respect copyright.PENANAKLUEypEbNW
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wwww552Please respect copyright.PENANAn9h405MrxQ
求不要搶552Please respect copyright.PENANA7qCuuqhacq
😂8964 copyright protection548PENANAeBWoeI19I2 維尼
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【楓成預備室】8964 copyright protection548PENANAnpia0cNvnR 維尼
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剛才完成了選擇門的部分8964 copyright protection548PENANAadBzRaEgU5 維尼
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是的552Please respect copyright.PENANAyZvIIrXR3g
真是艱難的一部份(汗8964 copyright protection548PENANAtpChKwJknr 維尼
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你有感覺哪位參賽者進不了候選區552Please respect copyright.PENANAtg15nfp9Fj
很可惜的嗎?8964 copyright protection548PENANAoLuRu3zZ7O 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection548PENANAIlwq0SaOLf 維尼
嗯…552Please respect copyright.PENANA8oVOrlOY4t
真要說的話552Please respect copyright.PENANAglEXavfC1O
子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億是不錯的作品552Please respect copyright.PENANAOq7av0ersm
只可惜名額有限8964 copyright protection548PENANA2TdwbVIrV4 維尼
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那如果✊✊現在還可以用,你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection548PENANAyRwjREI7Li 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection548PENANAIp68vH8LUg 維尼
也不會,哈哈552Please respect copyright.PENANASSSTBNorz5
因為入選剩下來的選手也很出色8964 copyright protection548PENANARIbn3Cc9rI 維尼
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是的。552Please respect copyright.PENANASuKGeGRb1g
想問一下552Please respect copyright.PENANAOEVU7WB6yU
日勻的作品——他的故事8964 copyright protection548PENANAWT1UVIhsj9 維尼
你好像是給他打滿高分的,552Please respect copyright.PENANAbAvz3qotfQ
但你好似沒有給他舉圈的吧?8964 copyright protection548PENANASiFYYxPP8Z 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection548PENANAKEa05MekgB 維尼
是的哈哈,大概是圓圈太有限了(眼神死8964 copyright protection548PENANAypnbtvID6p 維尼
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如果好像文楓落得三叉的下場,你會像紀言那樣出拳嗎?8964 copyright protection548PENANATw4xYl3opD 維尼
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這個,大概南師父不會給叉哈哈,所以我很放心552Please respect copyright.PENANAMuLUyyOcJA
所以應該也不會8964 copyright protection548PENANAa3PSO55UX9 維尼
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你就算好了他們想法是不是ww8964 copyright protection548PENANAYYmoumUHCD 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection548PENANAJah3pxHQ1j 維尼
沒錯!552Please respect copyright.PENANArTAPiznt0E
你看洗版南師父就知道552Please respect copyright.PENANAh5bPXyRfSP
古風武俠,他不會放過!8964 copyright protection548PENANAtaXgFEpNgG 維尼
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那說回來,8位候選區的選手們,你是會怎麼給他們排邀請優先序呢?552Please respect copyright.PENANAaXigwfl27B
因為你不像另外兩位,已經定了第一名邀請的參賽者552Please respect copyright.PENANAZRhONqzsXP
你覺得是比較好、自在?552Please respect copyright.PENANAasBxUJretu
還是比較擔心被搶人呢?8964 copyright protection548PENANAZXyq4xM8Ah 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection548PENANAfUBtUcAO5t 維尼
也不會特別怕啦哈哈8964 copyright protection548PENANA3zomZfBQCN 維尼
552Please respect copyright.PENANAxdeN2I1bNt
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【紀言預備室】8964 copyright protection548PENANASDbKL2jhAn 維尼
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剛完成了選擇門的部分552Please respect copyright.PENANAOomflfYGSY
有甚麼感想的嗎?8964 copyright protection548PENANAbTZGvnOlV5 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection548PENANAHSIoeNKTyr 維尼
真的讓人緊張呢552Please respect copyright.PENANAqm4FwPfCGZ
其實很多參賽者的實力相差真的不遠552Please respect copyright.PENANAYsYjVYXcTH
在抉擇時真的讓人加倍為難8964 copyright protection548PENANAC29one2RO9 維尼
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有沒有覺得可惜的參賽者?竟然進不了候選區這樣?8964 copyright protection548PENANAz9ZsbRTTlM 維尼
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其實此去拾年我覺得是寫得不錯的552Please respect copyright.PENANA7hPjprb7UD
可是類似的作品有點多552Please respect copyright.PENANAaynDUVSqbB
真的很可惜8964 copyright protection548PENANAtFPBXaIgmL 維尼
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這是你當時沒有給出✊的原因嗎?8964 copyright protection548PENANAPNQFBosH5r 維尼
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此去拾年和十年陽光、董小姐都被我歸到同一類中552Please respect copyright.PENANAJZFlCBcfq8
嘛,他也寫得很好,但另外兩篇真的是更好8964 copyright protection548PENANAVJasbg3ptR 維尼
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明白。552Please respect copyright.PENANArFAh9H9mHy
那現在進入了給候選區參賽者排邀請順序的環節552Please respect copyright.PENANA6hy50gHIzX
你有甚麼想法嗎?8964 copyright protection548PENANAjSlNFvDJs9 維尼
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說實在的552Please respect copyright.PENANAiDtMgpiEKO
我超級糾結552Please respect copyright.PENANAzdhU1rqDnZ
尤其是(竟然)有那麼多參賽者選我,壓力倍增呢8964 copyright protection548PENANAJPVm0h8z4R 維尼
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有想好要根據甚麼去排的?8964 copyright protection548PENANAGrnY1CUR9O 維尼
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本來是要跟分數排的,可是後來考慮到題材的問題,又再排了一次552Please respect copyright.PENANAqWirO4JL6R
如上所說,十年陽光和董小姐是在最高分之列552Please respect copyright.PENANAYqunjAVEmA
可是他們的題材有點類近552Please respect copyright.PENANAGdfyGUS8ch
我想讓我的學員們能接觸多一點不同的類型,這樣聊起來才更有趣552Please respect copyright.PENANAF9VgLmI7gR
所以嘛,即使二人都是最高分,我還是只會選一個8964 copyright protection548PENANAPAqcePfkV4 維尼
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說回來,你是參賽者們的最搶手首選導師,就最多人選你8964 copyright protection548PENANAtTPfGYzYYg 維尼
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當初沒想過這麼多人選我的哈哈552Please respect copyright.PENANAdUDWWcfoOJ
畢竟楓成是penana人氣王552Please respect copyright.PENANAVqk6jl46oW
東南也筆耕了十多年552Please respect copyright.PENANAY5Q5UUt60O
說到資歷和寫作的字數,可能我是最少的呢哈哈552Please respect copyright.PENANAvGQjlTnlmE
不過也感謝大家的愛戴8964 copyright protection548PENANAC4PdAC0PiA 維尼
我先說我的首選好了552Please respect copyright.PENANAorrtTVLsct
(是甚麼呢???????)(自帶效果!)8964 copyright protection548PENANAebvwiUflDF 維尼
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不是你說要早點睡的嗎!www8964 copyright protection548PENANA6zl0H3vone 維尼
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好了喇552Please respect copyright.PENANAbZiN8sV37v
第一位是十年陽光喇552Please respect copyright.PENANAWXl0thGGv6
我要分享一下我的心路歷程XPXP8964 copyright protection548PENANAcRTMjm76hc 維尼
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可以的~8964 copyright protection548PENANAuYYOvIyyGf 維尼
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第二位就是成功獲得我一拳的獵巫!552Please respect copyright.PENANAEZTMH9a4cR
第三位其實糾結了超~~~~~~~~~~~久552Please respect copyright.PENANA0gdLGLolYT
是在輪候者和天使的惡作劇之間掙扎了好久8964 copyright protection548PENANAaEOEMoxYEY 維尼
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但輪候者的Blackative 很厲害,寫了兩篇不一樣的作品~8964 copyright protection548PENANA0RQdHJvISI 維尼
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輪候者是非常成熟的作品,風格也已經定形了552Please respect copyright.PENANA5KnTPrShSN
時限內能寫兩篇也真的很厲害552Please respect copyright.PENANAa24XIepIz2
不過時間小偷的話我就稍嫌有點負面了552Please respect copyright.PENANAZBAHj552NB
寫作作為興趣,應該是先令自己開心,然後再看看其他的可能的552Please respect copyright.PENANA2mrIL4dZ1d
至於天使的惡作劇,雖然分數上不及輪候者,但是他的文風很對我的腦波,我也覺得他有潛力552Please respect copyright.PENANArvZn3olzE6
所以第三位一直在他們之間糾結8964 copyright protection548PENANA1aZpCHsjyK 維尼
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最後,你的選擇是……8964 copyright protection548PENANA0S26QKI9Pw 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection548PENANAa07iqOi2Te 維尼
就是⋯⋯552Please respect copyright.PENANALCLvPRxCnZ
天使的惡作劇!552Please respect copyright.PENANA3CMymDsjVZ
我希望Blackative能被其他導師收入戰隊552Please respect copyright.PENANAb374Kh176T
他的實力是值得的552Please respect copyright.PENANA7llpLaX5Wr
奈何只有三個位置552Please respect copyright.PENANAg5UwZSibuO
(嘛,規則也是我們三人定的,也沒辦法喇)8964 copyright protection548PENANAuK0pSY88It 維尼
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好了……我們就先聽紀言的頭三順序,不然要天亮了8964 copyright protection548PENANAHayO8VMZZW 維尼
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嘮嘮叨叨了一大堆呢哈哈8964 copyright protection548PENANAqecz03PXSX 維尼
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謝謝紀言😂8964 copyright protection548PENANAsHY15SUF27 維尼
552Please respect copyright.PENANAc9X7bxRtlL
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(邀請順序收集中……)8964 copyright protection548PENANAFHqE9kRFiT 維尼
(節目組整理中……)8964 copyright protection548PENANAahWhkuUpMb 維尼
開始送出組隊邀請!8964 copyright protection548PENANAnkJUZcWeWI 維尼
552Please respect copyright.PENANAqgzLKPzTTr
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【參賽者預備室】8964 copyright protection548PENANAmBCMPfI7ve 維尼
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有些參賽者和導師們是兩情相悅的,552Please respect copyright.PENANAlzgWa4YpkF
最終修成正果,可喜可賀!8964 copyright protection548PENANA432aAUoCSZ 維尼
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恭喜你,成功加入東南/ 紀言 / 楓成戰隊!8964 copyright protection548PENANAn1iFe6b7tV 維尼
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:O 我以為係21號先有結果😂 btw thx8964 copyright protection548PENANA26N9DGcsMX 維尼
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哇!真架?🥰8964 copyright protection548PENANAMrghFJLdTP 維尼
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收到了,感謝你這麼晚了還要通知我們這群選手8964 copyright protection548PENANAxXYXD6J7ok 維尼
參賽者D8964 copyright protection548PENANAK1rIgPZxfN 維尼
感激涕零!🥺🥺8964 copyright protection548PENANAapc8Y82e23 維尼
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我入圍了?8964 copyright protection548PENANA6XT3QYQWkP 維尼
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多謝你8964 copyright protection548PENANA0kWfCT7coi 維尼
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終於等到消息😭😭8964 copyright protection548PENANA6SeyqcSdbj 維尼
552Please respect copyright.PENANA2EsNZEHwH2
8964 copyright protection548PENANA29o4TZmf6E 維尼
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而有些參賽者就要陷入天人交戰的選擇!552Please respect copyright.PENANAENGxmvrcF0
面對非首選導師的邀請,是要接受,還是……8964 copyright protection548PENANAwZ7I0Pxwq1 維尼
552Please respect copyright.PENANACvcuK1MXjR
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導師A誠邀你進入他的戰隊,請問你願意接受嗎?552Please respect copyright.PENANA2lIMTfziRF
提提你,你首選係導師B8964 copyright protection548PENANA0BcG2AUh8V 維尼
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雖然冇被導師B選中有啲可惜,但我其實唔介意被分到邊一隊(搔頭8964 copyright protection548PENANAW1WXBlUxmf 維尼
參賽者I8964 copyright protection548PENANAF9EQJvLprR 維尼
但導師B有冇講咩?8964 copyright protection548PENANAytiLvJ1903 維尼
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或者我解釋下先,個情況係:552Please respect copyright.PENANAB203HtbvYA
導師A對你嘅邀請順序高過導師B。552Please respect copyright.PENANAcuftfIaenY
如果你拒絕咗,有可能會收到導師B嘅邀請,552Please respect copyright.PENANAIPhsjGvD2t
但前提係:當時導師B戰隊未滿人。552Please respect copyright.PENANAEvfUgJnP5f
如果導師B戰隊已經滿人,但你又拒絕咗導師A,552Please respect copyright.PENANAFGWB2lW13v
你就只可以參與復活賽,睇下仲有冇機會入導師B戰隊。8964 copyright protection548PENANAb66PUUFn7R 維尼
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咁複雜既ODO?!552Please respect copyright.PENANAm1CFozCacs
喊出嚟,都好賭博喎(つД`)8964 copyright protection548PENANAMK4hajpLCY 維尼
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依個我最遲可以幾時答你?8964 copyright protection548PENANARByLn3j53m 維尼
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可能……盡快?8964 copyright protection548PENANAyr2mHKFbvK 維尼
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我今晚墊高枕頭諗諗,聽日覆你唔好意思(つД`)8964 copyright protection548PENANATL9XgGnlW4 維尼
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咁就加入導師A嘅戰隊552Please respect copyright.PENANA1Lk1U2C9bL
我估,咁姐係佢幾欣賞我552Please respect copyright.PENANAY4TQOk9fGQ
掛8964 copyright protection548PENANAGXIm3xk9N7 維尼
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我決定好了(超快552Please respect copyright.PENANAoKCdQtuw0k
我都係入導師A隊552Please respect copyright.PENANAdEHfwRl8iJ
唔太敢賭(つД`)8964 copyright protection548PENANA2AYGYjO5v2 維尼
552Please respect copyright.PENANAFJOTsSeLZc
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【鏡頭關上後】8964 copyright protection548PENANAjAw84n6YPT 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection548PENANAaLI0IeC0Ux 維尼
我有少少寄語卑Blackative,我不如Pm你?8964 copyright protection548PENANA2bwPJ1pixX 維尼
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好8964 copyright protection548PENANA0QXNxntbcB 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection548PENANAcMcBA39im3 維尼
首先要講一句好遺憾你入唔到戰隊賽。552Please respect copyright.PENANArUFaELQ2Jm
你兩篇文喺我眼中都係本次比賽裏面的精品,但我選擇戰隊成員時,實力雖然係其中一個考慮因素,但另外更多係會考慮成員風格同自己夾唔夾,同埋每位成員的潛力等等因素。552Please respect copyright.PENANAMPMLvGkBfS
你卑我感覺係一個已經相當成熟,好有自己一套嘅作者,無論係時間小偷定係豬果篇我覺得都發揮得唔錯,我讀時都頗有眼前一亮的感覺。552Please respect copyright.PENANAn74uNueqAs
但奈何戰隊賽名額有限,我揀的三位亦係我認為最適合我戰隊的成員,所以就只能忍痛無向你拋出橄欖枝,我相信其餘兩位導師應該都同我一樣,對你落選係感到遺憾的。552Please respect copyright.PENANArkabrLPOhI
我希望你唔好因為呢個結果就感到氣餒,希望你能夠堅持同繼續寫落去。如果你參加復活賽的話,我亦會非常期待你復活賽的表現,加油!8964 copyright protection548PENANAPIoROf46Ai 維尼
【海選選秀環節】完!8964 copyright protection548PENANAVtwfDEUAqH 維尼
多謝收看!8964 copyright protection548PENANAKjqfumoneI 維尼
請繼續關注:8964 copyright protection548PENANABKm108oIG4 維尼
【第二階段:戰隊/復活賽】「太歲兵團 X 萌動學生小說集2021」寫作營8964 copyright protection548PENANAKpeTlqsQOw 維尼
之後還會有很多寫作分享跟幕後花絮讓你看,不要錯過囉!8964 copyright protection548PENANAPoKajwdBry 維尼
參賽者們,8964 copyright protection548PENANA2n77Z7A9AL 維尼
第二階段還有三十二天就要結束了!8964 copyright protection548PENANAU3Pmjoim6Z 維尼
注意時間哦!8964 copyright protection548PENANAQkhrCAKB4c 維尼
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