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挑毛病:運之天命(書評)
ENTRY #1
Author: 望．生命
Published:
Sep 20, 2020
挑毛病:運之天命(書評)
Published:
Sep 20, 2020
ENTRY #1
我來玩嘍
Author: 望．生命
Published:
Sep 20, 2020
1 Min Read
229 Words
No Plagiarism!KuA1ijM5GRQKQdj48vwgposted on PＥNAＮＡ

首先，「的」、「地」、「得」這三隻字一定要認清楚，我也不知道提過多少次了xd（有可能是因為語音輸入法的關係

第二，雖然現在已經改了許多，但我仍然要提一提，當某人物說完話後請加上是誰說的，除非該人物有明顯的性格，例如會加語尾這樣了。

第三，有的時候整篇文章比較難以理解，建議自己再以讀者的身份去觀看一次自己的作品，這樣作出的評論才是比較公平的

第四，如果你認為雖然那一段文章較為複雜，但是依然有必要留下來的話，建議加上一小段備注，例如：（以下文章比較複雜，建議打醒12分精神去看）<——只是個樣板

（大概就是這樣子先啦，有記起有什麼缺點在再來寫）

172.70.100.168

ns 172.70.100.168da2
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