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挑毛病:運之天命(書評)
ENTRY #2
Author: 魚落井
Published:
Nov 14, 2020
挑毛病:運之天命(書評)
Published:
Nov 14, 2020
ENTRY #2
快評
Author: 魚落井
Published:
Nov 14, 2020
1 Min Read
137 Words
No Plagiarism!DpAWIAqUWYfADQJXOUhcposted on PＥNAＮＡ

先戴頭盔：我只讀了頭幾章，就停下來了。

主要覺得需要改進的是一開頭的情節沒有什麼能吸引讀者的地方。吸引讀者的一則是懸疑/奇怪的地方，令人想要知道為什麼會這樣？一則是人物的目標和達成目標的困難，能預示人物的掙扎會很好看。但頭幾張除了爺爺的喪禮之外，感覺偏向日常，沒有什麼走向，也沒有什麼引起我好奇的地方。

287Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6Sy2fvPOVo

172.70.126.183

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