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第三屆 是的,要來填詞啦！宋詞創作挑戰
ENTRY #11
Author: 霧飄山亭
Published:
Dec 11, 2018
第三屆 是的,要來填詞啦！宋詞創作挑戰
Published:
Dec 11, 2018
ENTRY #11
《憶江南·牡丹回文梨花》
Author: 霧飄山亭
Published:
Dec 11, 2018
1 Min Read
261 Words
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(正看：牡丹)悲後喜

飛蝶繞花梨

肥綠瘦紅餘下媚

微微温暖不天明

眉下是芳菲

(見朱熹的《虞美人》回文詞，也來一首回文詞，正看是牡丹，倒看是：梨花)

菲芳是下眉

明天不暖温微微

媚下餘紅瘦綠肥

梨花繞蝶飛

喜後悲

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一直也是寫回文詩，還真是未寫過回文詞XD

牡丹篇：牡丹給人一種美麗、明媚之感，因此正看是喜：悲後一定會喜，蝶繞在牡丹花上(這裏的梨指同籬)，就算綠肥紅瘦，一瞬間也只餘下明媚之象，微暖不會到天明(永不結束)眉頭之下盡是芳菲。

梨花篇：因：落盡梨花春又了。有種凋零之感，故從下讀上是悲：芳菲一下眉便逝，明天不會暖，明媚一下便是綠肥紅瘦，凋零之意，梨花就算有蝶飛，也終是喜後生悲。

寫後還真是覺得很難！還請高手們指點XD

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