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第三屆 是的,要來填詞啦！宋詞創作挑戰
ENTRY #10
Author: 霧飄山亭
Published:
Dec 11, 2018
第三屆 是的,要來填詞啦！宋詞創作挑戰
Published:
Dec 11, 2018
ENTRY #10
《憶江南·垂絲海棠》
Author: 霧飄山亭
Published:
Dec 11, 2018
1 Min Read
183 Words
No Plagiarism!07KgHGWaoJq3CjuYoK6pposted on PＥNAＮＡ

渢漏動

晨抹戀花蜂

紫蠟低垂猶醉夢

海棠絲錦落玲瓏

流潦亦春濃

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這次換個風格，好不好便不知了…

還是解釋下吧！

昨夜風雨吹，今早水滴在葉間漏動，早上晨光照過花蜂，如紫蠟的垂絲海棠，其低垂的花蕊又似醉夢(垂絲海棠的樣子)，海棠落下，絲帶玲瓏，流潦(用典：王國維的明朝又是傷流潦，即漬水)，再反用李清照的：卻道海棠依舊，知否，知否，應是綠肥紅瘦(本指雨後海棠會瘦)但這裏偏說雨後春還濃，海棠還美。

換個風格！若有不足，希望再次指正！留點評語XD

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