手機拿在手裡以後,我沒有立刻解鎖。8Please respect copyright.PENANApIz0woxegB
螢幕已經暗下去,只剩一小塊黑色的反光。我在上面看見自己剛睡醒的臉,頭髮亂得不像樣,眼睛還有些發乾。窗外的光比剛才亮了一點,房間裡那些散亂的東西也慢慢有了輪廓:沒有洗的杯子、攤在桌上的筆記本、昨晚看到一半的企劃資料,還有椅背上那件本來打算今天穿的外套。8Please respect copyright.PENANAtkuN92k9Iu
我按亮螢幕。8Please respect copyright.PENANAIsAqJg0JYo
工作群組最上面的訊息跳了出來。8Please respect copyright.PENANAWDwc3iZWl4
早,客戶剛回覆第二版了。8Please respect copyright.PENANAFd9mzL0T8z
他們想把開場再調整一次,下午的確認也提前到十點半。8Please respect copyright.PENANAo8BMPA1Clv
@我,妳方便先看嗎?8Please respect copyright.PENANA54BtvQsvSE
下面很快又多了一則。8Please respect copyright.PENANAOkQRsWJu8G
他們說整體方向沒有問題,只是希望「更有生活感一點」。8Please respect copyright.PENANA430eZ5LqVl
我盯著最後那幾個字看了幾秒。8Please respect copyright.PENANAKRQbGGkCpu
每次看到這種話,我都得花一點時間判斷它到底是什麼意思。是想把原本的東西改得更容易懂,還是想把所有邊角都磨平,讓誰看了都不會不舒服。兩者聽起來很像,做起來卻完全不同。8Please respect copyright.PENANAwuNCReyy4O
手機又震了一下。8Please respect copyright.PENANA12sMyeUMQF
這次是那封信。8Please respect copyright.PENANABRd2BUTkwV
主旨完整顯示出來:8Please respect copyright.PENANAHOKVxsH5OV
修訂意見|城市導覽文字・第二版8Please respect copyright.PENANAgXS80yJoEJ
我終於點開。8Please respect copyright.PENANAS9RMseaoQ1
信裡沒有寫太多,只附了一份標了密密麻麻註解的檔案。紅字沿著段落一路排下去,有些是字句,有些是順序,還有幾處只留了很短的問題。8Please respect copyright.PENANAWd18Ake9TP
這裡能不能再明確一點?8Please respect copyright.PENANAzGVzlpcies
讀者會不會不知道自己在哪裡?8Please respect copyright.PENANAznuiYYXdro
語氣太遠了。8Please respect copyright.PENANAu5e9M3eqAt
可否更直接?8Please respect copyright.PENANAH4v09ry80c
我滑到最下面,看見寄件人補了一句:8Please respect copyright.PENANAqLJH0DVmt7
不急著全部改完,但希望今天上午能先看到妳的判斷。8Please respect copyright.PENANAqa9Oop6UIH
這句話比前面那些紅字好一點。8Please respect copyright.PENANAM8An7MeP5b
至少不是直接替我決定要怎麼改。8Please respect copyright.PENANA0U6MjDdN3K
我靠著窗邊站了一會兒,才在群組裡回覆:8Please respect copyright.PENANA4FO1GuGTuM
我先看。九點前給第一輪方向。8Please respect copyright.PENANAw5U4TtQyEe
訊息送出去後,螢幕安靜下來。8Please respect copyright.PENANAoYDGsSilLc
我把手機放到桌上,去廚房燒水。8Please respect copyright.PENANAKGBGSvdy9n
水壺放在流理臺旁邊,昨天晚上洗過,還沒完全乾。按下開關後,裡面的水先是很安靜,過了一會兒才開始發出細細的聲音。我站在旁邊,手撐著檯面,視線落在牆角堆著的回收紙箱上。8Please respect copyright.PENANA8npvNa25fp
那裡沒有灰。8Please respect copyright.PENANAxBd9Clq55u
沒有任何不該出現在這裡的東西。8Please respect copyright.PENANAQuNOl8UqZK
我應該覺得這樣很好。8Please respect copyright.PENANAAjA5nti76g
水燒開前,我還是低頭看了一眼自己的手。8Please respect copyright.PENANAdbL5pY9EOe
掌心已經不再出汗了。剛才那種僵硬也散得差不多,只剩手背上像被碰過似的錯覺,淡得幾乎抓不住。8Please respect copyright.PENANAmSDUpsXkEI
我把手握起來,又慢慢鬆開。8Please respect copyright.PENANAfA0Ya12FEb
水壺在這時發出提示音。8Please respect copyright.PENANABTjp8elCjg
我嚇得肩膀一緊,杯子差點從手裡滑下去。8Please respect copyright.PENANAO8XbU0BezB
過了半秒,我才低聲罵了自己一句。8Please respect copyright.PENANAi9XzUAHhoH
窗外的巷子開始有更多聲音。早餐店拉開第二道鐵門,機車從路口騎過,樓上的人拖著行李箱下樓。有人在樓梯間講電話,聲音斷斷續續傳進來,聽不清內容,只能聽見他正在抱怨今天太早。8Please respect copyright.PENANAE3zjYv8zkp
我把熱水倒進杯子裡。8Please respect copyright.PENANAoR44Uwl1fK
蒸氣升起來,暫時遮住視線。8Please respect copyright.PENANA0tMa7zwZGF
等它散開以後,我端著杯子回到桌前。8Please respect copyright.PENANAagefmYJoFB
手機還亮著,工作群組裡多了一則簡短的回覆。8Please respect copyright.PENANA1m7TZGUMIF
好,等妳。8Please respect copyright.PENANAacNzX9qJF1
我把杯子放到鍵盤旁,拉開椅子。8Please respect copyright.PENANAcHirRaI1hd
電腦睡了一整晚,螢幕亮起來時有些慢。那份標滿紅字的檔案還停在昨天最後關掉的位置,游標落在第一段後面,一下一下地閃。8Please respect copyright.PENANARNETf5VgTo
我看了一會兒。8Please respect copyright.PENANA6G3T2Yzc5J
然後把第一句刪掉,重新打了一行。
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