這是由我的小時候經歷發想成的一部作品，希望大家也會喜歡。
這部作品是我兩年前參賽作品，結果沒有評審要鳥我。
看過的人，喜歡這個作品的人說我的文字很乾淨，純粹，沒有太多華麗的鋪陳。
覺得還好的人就會說，你的作品角色太少了，層次不夠。
感謝他們的批評指教，我會繼續努力75Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDQ6YiCsXeV
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