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屁股王
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這是由我的小時候經歷發想成的一部作品，希望大家也會喜歡。

這部作品是我兩年前參賽作品，結果沒有評審要鳥我。

看過的人，喜歡這個作品的人說我的文字很乾淨，純粹，沒有太多華麗的鋪陳。

覺得還好的人就會說，你的作品角色太少了，層次不夠。

感謝他們的批評指教，我會繼續努力


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Last updated: Jun 3, 2026
Total word count: 3,823
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屁股王
愛情 原創 奇幻 輕小說
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