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人在做天在看!你來寫我評判!【第二期】
ENTRY #57
Author: 神奇外星文明
Published:
Mar 23, 2026
人在做天在看!你來寫我評判!【第二期】
Published:
Mar 23, 2026
ENTRY #57
[廚師]你在遠岸 我在彼端 無
Author: 神奇外星文明
Published:
Mar 23, 2026
1 Min Read
126 Words
No Plagiarism!LmXXec9HvGymVeGfYBbTposted on PＥNAＮＡ 148Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPRjvkXGAOV

https://www.penana.com/article/2106270

校園戀愛的一些事。

都是過去式。

湖畔倒映出的，只會是現實。

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當初在校園寸步難行的首席，櫻鬼，在出院的那天…

回憶起了當初那個男孩。

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是短篇，1000字出頭。

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所以簡介再寫下去就要把劇情寫完了👀

主要是想知道自己的劇情方面有沒有可以再優化的地方。

希望下一篇可以進步一點點。

準備好被銳評了👀

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