我必須說,原本我沒認為迴響有那麼大,但這次確實…都沒有題材撞題的狀況發生,也使得我的評分是非常的主觀的,我當然以發布的作品分數來說,應當是伐伐伐木工,不過lin san還有星塵隱語的作品也是緊追在後,而且我這樣看下來,以成熟度來說前兩位絕對是有經驗的創作者了,我也會關注兩位的作品,你們借鑑跟放入的梗我覺得都很有趣,相較之下,我認為應當給予星塵隱語有個最大的主因在於,前兩位大大的故事性雖然強烈但要說是否貼近卑鄙的外鄉人這個主題,我認為是擦邊球,也就是你的球很強剛好飛過我的球場,但這顆球能達到的距離不僅僅只在這,你們應當在你們的專屬領域得到你們應得的認可,懸疑之作與恐怖之作,被我的主題給栓住就浪費了,相較之下,星塵隱語抓到本次主題的精髓「不擇手段的苟活」包含「已知自己在幹嘛,並非真的就是如此但情勢所逼,無所不用其極」他的文字使用及字數沒有特別華麗也沒有很多字,但在我看來,是有發展性的,如果我拋磚可以引玉,這不過是一個起點而已,我們還會繼續。113Please respect copyright.PENANAyWsPE5TuDw
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卑鄙的外鄉人
Published:
Oct 13, 2025
ENTRY #14
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Oct 13, 2025
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