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你想得到別人對自己作品的感想嗎？「不專業的小說評鑒指南」幫到你！
ENTRY #36
Author: 鶄
Published:
Sep 5, 2024
你想得到別人對自己作品的感想嗎？「不專業的小說評鑒指南」幫到你！
Published:
Sep 5, 2024
ENTRY #36
奇幻/戰鬥/競技場《亂斗Menagerie 》
Author: 鶄
Published:
Sep 5, 2024
1 Min Read
114 Words
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你好，書評辛苦了。

這是一個由八名來自不同地方的戰士，在競技場裏爭奪英雄刃的故事。

169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3gm7V7rYYd

因為只有九話，希望你可以評價一下：

  • - 故事有沒有看下去的慾望，節奏會不會太慢
    • - 我在戰鬥場面的呈現
  • - 我在角色互動和性格上的表達能力

169Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnVe4Dg8Aqn

https://www.penana.com/story/151895/%E9%9A%A8%E5%BF%83%E6%9B%B4-%E4%BA%82%E6%96%97menagerie

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