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你想得到別人對自己作品的感想嗎？「不專業的小說評鑒指南」幫到你！
ENTRY #37
Author: 灰
Published:
Sep 5, 2024
你想得到別人對自己作品的感想嗎？「不專業的小說評鑒指南」幫到你！
Published:
Sep 5, 2024
ENTRY #37
【奇幻/穿越】我在異世界靠罵人成為超人氣直播主
Author: 灰
Published:
Sep 5, 2024
1 Min Read
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1. 內容簡介

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一個研究生穿越到所有人都能讀取心聲的異世界的故事。

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2.作品類型/作品定位

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穿越異世界的輕鬆短篇小品，一個人吃午餐打發時間用

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3.最希望能夠讓我看完的地方

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總字數並不是很多，四萬字內，希望能夠看完！

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因為是第一次涉獵小說，其實越寫越覺得有很多可以展開好好敘述的地方( ꈨຶ ˙̫̮ ꈨຶ )很可惜這樣的腦洞沒有寫到自己心目中的完美，很多支線都草草帶過了，加上後期太多外務，沒有分配好……

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如果能聽到關於缺點的建議的評語就太好了！！！也可以和我稍微說說或許可能有哪些是比較好的地方、可以保留的特色等等，之後應該也會考慮重新寫過一遍～～～

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非常感謝大大這次舉辦的創挑٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و

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作品連結：

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我在異世界靠罵人成為超人氣直播主

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