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文筆練習
ISSUE #2
Author: 羽璇
文筆練習
Author: 羽璇
ISSUE #2
摹寫＋比喻
No Plagiarism!PmoU551iksJQEM1e4oB8posted on PＥNAＮＡ

摹寫：

題目：天空下起小雨，像是起霧了，但樹葉和小草都還是青綠色的。

試寫：

灰濛濛的天空下起淅瀝淅瀝的小雨，細密的白色濃霧籠罩整座城市，可卻遮不住路旁樹葉和小草泛著鮮活的綠色氣息。

464Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPtUliP4lLN

比喻：

喻體：他們堅定的感情

喻衣：倒在一起的水

關聯性：刀子划不開

1.試寫：

他們堅定的感情如倒在一起的水，濃烈糾纏在一塊，你中有我我中有你，即便苦難如刀，也無法在其中留下任何痕跡。

高手範例：

他倆彷彿兩杯水倒在一起，怎麼也分不開。吵架就像在這水面上劃道兒，無論劃得多深，轉眼連條痕跡也不會留下。

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　——《老夫老妻》／馮驥才

深刻度似乎差了一大截呢~464Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYwKYxCRsK4

果然高手功力就是不一樣！

每天一次腦力激盪

要寫出好的比喻真的不容易啊啊

216.73.216.253

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