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文筆練習
ISSUE #3
Author: 羽璇
文筆練習
Author: 羽璇
ISSUE #3
綜合練習-比喻03
No Plagiarism!unNFckhdqGmKU1PG0wIQposted on PＥNAＮＡ

隱喻：

題目：她的聲音是——

試寫：

她的聲音是山間暮曉敲響的鐘聲，繚繞在心中，久久盤旋不去。

（下意識練習到第三天，好像有逐漸抓到一點感覺，看到題目好像可以比較快聯想到了！只是文學性與美感似乎還差點呢？）

借喻：

題目：她手上的紅酒——

試寫：

深紫色的液體在精緻的玻璃杯內，隨著女人的手輕微搖盪。她舉杯喝下紅酒，本該嚐到迷人酒香，餘下卻只感一片苦澀。只因她喝下的不是酒，而是她心底難忘的情意。

（借喻好難啊啊啊啊～～～試著引用多種摹寫+比喻，哈哈）

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