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新舊第一章大比拼！豐厚賞金！
ENTRY #5
Author: 子不語
Published:
Jun 1, 2024
新舊第一章大比拼！豐厚賞金！
Published:
Jun 1, 2024
ENTRY #5
新版 +1
Author: 子不語
Published:
Jun 1, 2024
1 Min Read
90 Words
No Plagiarism!EsLC2u9WX7KRM0ASVofVposted on PＥNAＮＡ

新版的第一段就是一個鉤子，讓讀者一開始就進入一個緊湊的階段，讓讀者能繼續往下讀，雖然說新版我覺得切得有點細碎難以用直覺拼湊出事件的順序，但是一開始的緊湊節奏應該可以讓讀者耐著性子看完第一章。

513Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnnbOJnF2I9

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