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新舊第一章大比拼！豐厚賞金！
ENTRY #4
Author: 夏夏
Published:
May 31, 2024
新舊第一章大比拼！豐厚賞金！
Published:
May 31, 2024
ENTRY #4
這次我也投新版
Author: 夏夏
Published:
May 31, 2024
1 Min Read
209 Words
No Plagiarism!2Uh4dUxj3O8P5WLoVRPmposted on PＥNAＮＡ

我投新版的原因是因為感覺舊版雖然說節奏比較快，但似乎有點太快了，似乎都沒有好好的表達出內容，讓我看了感覺有點跳脫

增添的那些對話可以增添效果，和有趣度

而且這樣在第一章白花火也有出現，在他離開時又會不禁讓人思考她要去幹麻，增加期待度

墨守晨也有成功變身到，所以期待度也不會縮減

而且不管新版還舊版，讓我感覺的劇情進度是一樣的，可論看到且記起的東西，新版我更有印象

新版還有介紹了一下墨守晨的家庭背景，和他的個性，且不會讓人覺得太快

所以呢我決定投新版一票

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