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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #84
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #84
《烈火之心》跨界番外——亞蒂琳柏蒂　作者：子不語
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　　主題走向（單看簡介）：奇幻冒險、魔法戰鬥類型。講述阿速卡跟史卡特這一對搭檔的故事。這篇屬於跨界番外，因此劇情跟主篇不一樣。

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　　目前看到第６章　第一幕完（跨界番外）

　　已看到５６章

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：８０％

　　流暢度：１００％

　　標點符號：９０％

　　文字美感：９０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：９０％

　　完整性：９０％

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　　優點：劇情流暢，人物情感強烈，阿速卡依舊是女強人。小鬼的碎語描敘生動以及能想像的到阿速卡那破口大罵的聲音，亞蒂琳拼命求饒的模樣。在設定上作者也很用心，曾經互相討論過。

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　　吸引度：戰鬥、人物、情感等敘述細緻，有吸引到。

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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
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