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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #83
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #83
《無人島的大叔》　作者：張玫琪
No Plagiarism!UE4uoQZ0q2yGCBOhgeVPposted on PＥNAＮＡ

　

　　主題走向（單看簡介）：戀愛、恐怖、男男、無人島類型。光看文章內的簡介笑出來，以為是搞笑的４０多歲大叔，結果封面是年輕的？220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡusPDPeepha

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　　目前看到第１２章

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：６０％

　　流暢度：６０％

　　標點符號：６０％

　　文字美感：６０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：６０％

　　完整性：７０％

220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZHatNPH8PI

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　　評語：有些地方跳太快，流暢度不高。看起來不太像是慢熟型的，劇情發展有點慢。220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXM3UGBOKPB

　　優點：你發文的簡介比作品裡面的簡介還要有趣，本以為是搞笑的後面又偏恐怖？不知不覺看到１２章。

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　　吸引度：作為搞笑類型也許可以閱讀，畢竟很短先放置觀望中。

220Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYHNVSjCVxr

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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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