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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #76
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #76
邪魔巨擘　作者：行者
No Plagiarism!OOkcRX6sednrCDEuatuEposted on PＥNAＮＡ

　

　　主題走向（單看簡介）：沒有標籤。

　　很簡單的復仇古風類型。

202Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1mKBWoZQhR

　　目前看到第三章

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：７０％

　　對話：３０％

　　排版舒適度：７０％

　　流暢度：７０％

　　標點符號：７０％

　　文字美感：６０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：７０％

　　完整性：７０％

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　　評語：閱讀下來是古風類型。雖然感覺跟作品名沒有關聯。

　　優點：劇情流暢，也許是因為有人幫忙改過的緣故。

　　吸引度：整體尚可，劇情只有為了復仇而已，因此沒有吸引到。

202Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4kdYSYM0Ku

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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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