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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #75
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #75
你的星空觸手可及嗎？　作者：行者
No Plagiarism!5p86GJRBvShNghF2mlakposted on PＥNAＮＡ

　

　主題走向（單看簡介）：沒有標籤。

　即使跌落到谷底，仰望觸不可及的星空也不要氣餒。

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　　目前看到第三章

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：７０％

　　對話：３０％

　　排版舒適度：７０％

　　流暢度：７０％

　　標點符號：７０％

　　文字美感：７０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：７０％

　　完整性：７０％

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　　評語：閱讀下來是古風類型。封面跟名字感覺像是日常校園，切進來是非常古風的標題與用詞，兩者關聯性不大。

　　優點：人物情感刻畫佳。

　　吸引度：整體尚可，劇情沒有很特別，因此沒有吸引到。

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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
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