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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #70
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #70
致我們的生命狂想　作者：平安貓
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　　主題走向（單看簡介）：犯罪類型。很典型的自殺、抑鬱型。223Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCM1Lgd1Cyi

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　　目前看到第三章

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：７０％

　　對話：３０％

　　排版舒適度：２０％

　　流暢度：６０％

　　標點符號：５０％

　　文字美感：８０％

　　跳脫：４０％

　　深度：７０％

　　完整性：６０％

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　　評語：好黏，對話中間有一大段完全不知道誰在說話，只有：。

　　優點：人物情感跟細節有到位。

　　吸引度：整體太黏了，為了自殺而自殺沒有明確的主線，沒有吸引到。

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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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