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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區 - 我們曾經在這個世界上竭盡全力地生存下去！　作者：Happy喵 | Penana
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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #69
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #69
我們曾經在這個世界上竭盡全力地生存下去！　作者：Happy喵
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　　主題走向（單看簡介）：奇幻穿越、輕小說、異世界類型。整體跟標籤看下來感覺劇情很穩定，看似可愛的異世界其實連生存都非常的困難。

　　先給自己小小的期待，雖然感覺簡介都把驚喜給寫光完了。

　　目前看到第五章

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：１００％

　　流暢度：９０％

　　標點符號：９０％

　　文字美感：８０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：９０％

　　完整性：９０％

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　　優點：人物情感、外觀刻畫細，整體流暢度高看得很舒服。內心話跟咒語等都有分開。

　　吸引度：設定很用心，希望劇情有驚喜，有吸引到。

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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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