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主題走向(單看簡介):戰鬥、科幻類型。8964 copyright protection43PENANAcAIqH5qTwq 維尼
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目前看到第2章47Please respect copyright.PENANAPejj9SrBLx
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評語:整篇很短只有兩頁而已。這篇很明顯是中間的劇情,沒有頭跟尾。也許只是單純想讓我看這部分。47Please respect copyright.PENANAj10TEi7353
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優點:人物情感描寫有到位,文字也豐富。47Please respect copyright.PENANAi6t5r9t2wl
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吸引度:有表達出主角的特色,中間的劇情女主持那邊,光靠美貌來勸說就結束試題可能性不大,不足以說服讀者,因此沒有吸引到。8964 copyright protection43PENANAs9TJA5xyM1 維尼
遊戲?是指網遊類型嗎?我很少在看網遊。47Please respect copyright.PENANAJVznrxgEmL
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