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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #61
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #61
《書籍間的約定》　作者：洛卡
No Plagiarism!6kjexbDw1n8XYPhk0IGIposted on PＥNAＮＡ

285Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7pj4uK2WEl

　　主題走向：小說作家愛上漫畫家的校園戀愛故事，本以為是普通的校園，結果是異能力，好，這的確有驚豔到我。

　　目前看到第四章

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：５０％

　　流暢度：７０％

　　標點符號：６０％

　　文字美感：８０％

　　跳脫：６０％

　　深度：７０％

　　完整性：７０％

285Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBDacIr1nBo

　　

　　評語：

　　標籤主打輕小說，文筆不太像，卡在簡潔與細節之間。

　　神明出現過於突然，前面看不出來會有神明出現的預兆，看得有點問號。

　　優點：人物刻畫細，文字美感佳，想必下了苦功。

285Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBjkqqYk6gl

　　吸引度：文筆跟簡介有吸引到，流暢度不高因此沒有。

285Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJEpoTiSYyj

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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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