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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #87
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #87
神侍軍：贖罪者　作者：旁觀者
No Plagiarism!WnbdZ09LEADWIyTgs4HOposted on PＥNAＮＡ

　

　　主題走向（單看簡介）：黑暗戰爭、軍事宗教類型。描述６歲女孩被教團認定為死刑犯。在她的前方會是什麼樣的刑罰，是否能找到屬於她的救贖？

　　作品名字很吸引。226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfQCbRa2cr9

　　目前看到第４章　

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：７０％

　　流暢度：９０％

　　標點符號：８０％

　　文字美感：８０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：８０％

　　完整性：８０％

226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWzZ3IgmU8P

226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNeW6xhEiW4

　　優點：人物描述豐富，背景很清楚，有把女主角的處境表達出來而不是只用旁白交代。

226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHExVWLvE2N

　　吸引度：整體很流暢很舒服，因此有吸引到。

226Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡASGrkRfx0b

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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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