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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #88
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #88
諸天漫行錄　作者：車理小龜
No Plagiarism!0k9I78rpgJvsoNUjhJ4Jposted on PＥNAＮＡ

　

　　主題走向（單看簡介）：奇幻魔法、戰鬥類型。前往夢想之地，不知位於何方，身在夢想之地，不知此為何處。

　　究竟什麼才是正確的選擇？216Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpVgTbGFtX0

216Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzyYptXqQ6A

　　目前看到第３章　

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：１００％

　　對話：０％

　　排版舒適度：７０％

　　流暢度：９０％

　　標點符號：８０％

　　文字美感：８０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：８０％

　　完整性：８０％

216Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTpLZImRixT

216Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBDkfdJm0NL

　　評語：前三章完全沒有對話，屬於慢熟型。

　　優點：動作流暢，節奏感佳，整體看下來有點科幻偏血腥。

216Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLNoICnep1y

　　吸引度：雖然前三章完全沒有對話，已經體現出主角優秀的作戰能力，有吸引到。

216Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaI2Wfvt3x1

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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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