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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #77
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #77
OZ-破碎相依的雙星　作者：靈貍莊缺看板娘
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　　主題走向（單看簡介）：奇幻冒險、校園魔法類型。主角為了參加可以實現一切願望的祭典來到了學院。她的出現造成了一團混亂。222Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyCNGNeB3kX

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　　目前看到第四章

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：８０％

　　流暢度：８０％

　　標點符號：８０％

　　文字美感：７０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：７０％

　　完整性：８０％

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　　優點：劇情意外的有趣和流暢，人物情感刻畫佳，排版舒服。角色情感強烈，不會太悶。

　　吸引度：整體尚可，劇情也偏有趣，因此有吸引到。

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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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