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評語:雖然看了簡介劇情還不錯,只是作者全放出來沒有驚喜了。8964 copyright protection49PENANAylUSLAlYqW 維尼
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吸引度:簡介出賣了劇情,因此沒有吸引到。8964 copyright protection49PENANAqQsvNokTuh 維尼
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