No Plagiarism!ysFYukdBCkTXKNX1KCd6posted on PENANA 8964 copyright protection13PENANAGWvxrAjk72 維尼
主題走向(單看簡介):戀愛、恐怖、男男、無人島類型。光看文章內的簡介笑出來,以為是搞笑的40多歲大叔,結果封面是年輕的?17Please respect copyright.PENANAo3HPDhovjM
8964 copyright protection13PENANAdaNJ4eP6K6 維尼
17Please respect copyright.PENANA9zeRm2x9dq
8964 copyright protection13PENANAtY8qlRnG4M 維尼
目前看到第12章8964 copyright protection13PENANABhLV6n2hgw 維尼
以比例表示整體8964 copyright protection13PENANAK5U0XWgaZX 維尼
旁白:60%8964 copyright protection13PENANA6Qzmt1EfHT 維尼
對話:40%8964 copyright protection13PENANAkmEpvYQZBN 維尼
排版舒適度:60%8964 copyright protection13PENANAmEjGyRvLyQ 維尼
流暢度:60%8964 copyright protection13PENANAyZ9faPpY2w 維尼
標點符號:60%8964 copyright protection13PENANAwVtLfg6yEy 維尼
文字美感:60%8964 copyright protection13PENANAiCEZK4cOFL 維尼
跳脫:no8964 copyright protection13PENANABRwXZYMvHo 維尼
深度:60%8964 copyright protection13PENANAHS3Qk11WeR 維尼
完整性:70%8964 copyright protection13PENANApucljX8YdY 維尼
17Please respect copyright.PENANAPqB8FjQ8iK
8964 copyright protection13PENANAAfooaDgtd8 維尼
17Please respect copyright.PENANAQtAdReAxLt
8964 copyright protection13PENANAwN0z0upnwA 維尼
評語:有些地方跳太快,流暢度不高。看起來不太像是慢熟型的,劇情發展有點慢。17Please respect copyright.PENANAgAuzCvIKgF
8964 copyright protection13PENANAOpv0q3K0s4 維尼
優點:你發文的簡介比作品裡面的簡介還要有趣,本以為是搞笑的後面又偏恐怖?不知不覺看到12章。8964 copyright protection13PENANA4HXs9VwUuE 維尼
17Please respect copyright.PENANAjnn6iyK55m
8964 copyright protection13PENANA8ADVsA8V75 維尼
吸引度:作為搞笑類型也許可以閱讀,畢竟很短先放置觀望中。8964 copyright protection13PENANA5REOqpNWp4 維尼
17Please respect copyright.PENANAiRAqwhphOb
8964 copyright protection13PENANAYxMkH0BQQ3 維尼
216.73.216.10
ns216.73.216.10da2