/story/154086/溫水天荷另類書評-創挑放置區/issue/64
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區 - 邊城妓　作者：吒姬赤 | Penana
arrow_back
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
more_vert
  • info_outline Info
  • toc Table of Contents
  • share Share
  • format_color_text Display Settings
  • exposure_plus_1 Recommend
  • coins Sponsor
  • report_problem Report
  • account_circle Login
share bookmark_border file_download
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
comment 0
exposure_plus_1
coins
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #64
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #64
邊城妓　作者：吒姬赤
No Plagiarism!cx0fOqDJsmN8D7HUmVAhposted on PＥNAＮＡ

228Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaxAlcp8J59

　　故事走向（單看簡介）：古風、架空歷史類型。228Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiKv3piDcbe

　　講述國家紛爭，還有一群赤膽忠心的官員盡力幫助帝國。228Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBGHzXY5gva

　　在將軍們的奮勇抗敵之下，國家迎來的長達十年多的安穩。並且還幸運地在老年時得到了一名掌上明珠。

　　但是隨著敵國的壯大，他們的生活逐漸受到威脅。

228Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7xcqoo0fDk

　　目前看到第四章。

　　以比例來標示整體。

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：９０％

　　流暢度：８０％

　　標點符號：８０％

　　文字美感：８０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：９０％

　　完整性：９０％

228Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl04cnBqHtB

228Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHvKmPH0fKk

　　評語：228Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUvShscCHdj

　　動作部分跟人物刻畫之間有時候希望有句點。

　　優點：整體旁白跟對話處於平均，人物情感、外觀刻畫用心，排版舒服，整體性高。前面章節用地圖來表示，並非長篇多字很加分。

　　用詞很成熟，看得出來有特別去研究中國歷史。

228Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPitbTKt59g

　　吸引點：整體性高，閱讀下來劇情感覺是很典型的國家與人民，因此處於觀望中。

228Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVIcTOpFgCL

216.73.216.37

ns216.73.216.37da2
Comments
BOOKMARK
+RECOMMEND
LIKES 2
READS 224
BOOKMARKS 8
campaign Request update 1
Sponsor
Suggest Edits
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to comment or bookmark!
< Prev Issue
Next Issue >
Click to load the next chapter
子不語
溫水天荷
X
X
Login first to show your name as a sponsor.

Pena Coins Credit Card

×
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
General
Short Story
Fantasy
Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
Writer:
溫水天荷
黑暗 創挑 （ˊ＊ˋ）） 小故事等
Report this story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.