《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩100Please respect copyright.PENANA1JfKWPKuvd
詩意要較為薄弱100Please respect copyright.PENANALscOrexTr4
但仍是一首很棒的古詩100Please respect copyright.PENANAbU4QNOweiA
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分100Please respect copyright.PENANAy3SfcIdC16
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感100Please respect copyright.PENANAlxZ62ILj8n
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。100Please respect copyright.PENANAAvatFf2sip
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。100Please respect copyright.PENANA8a9loX8lzT
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。100Please respect copyright.PENANABs2S7q7OV3
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。100Please respect copyright.PENANAPdeY7eLyDH
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。100Please respect copyright.PENANA5JO2uvbfMl
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。100Please respect copyright.PENANAuO87siFYtw
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。100Please respect copyright.PENANAkcVo79A2RM
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。100Please respect copyright.PENANAL9LZOf4nMP
每個人的角度皆為不同。100Please respect copyright.PENANAqfF67KDFuQ
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有人感受深刻,100Please respect copyright.PENANAGkK7K4MgGI
有人無感,100Please respect copyright.PENANAfEfojrhS5o
各有差異。100Please respect copyright.PENANADqXk6mNyR2
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,100Please respect copyright.PENANA9m68ViOG6t
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。