《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩123Please respect copyright.PENANAxcmOG67PnU
詩意要較為薄弱123Please respect copyright.PENANAeRetXnVTQF
但仍是一首很棒的古詩123Please respect copyright.PENANAhJ1uvYedye
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分123Please respect copyright.PENANAhw8BhHOKKv
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感123Please respect copyright.PENANAQrO3uZyWy9
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。123Please respect copyright.PENANARvdhiJQJ4F
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。123Please respect copyright.PENANAy8qngpPXF5
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。123Please respect copyright.PENANAzo4s3QhxvL
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。123Please respect copyright.PENANAqlC7pUWnPy
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。123Please respect copyright.PENANAly3mfbiWYy
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。123Please respect copyright.PENANAvSadw2kF1D
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。123Please respect copyright.PENANAtzR0Udpo9v
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。123Please respect copyright.PENANAfpNoYcxuvq
每個人的角度皆為不同。123Please respect copyright.PENANA597baAXL86
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有人感受深刻,123Please respect copyright.PENANAODsX3N5hVM
有人無感,123Please respect copyright.PENANApUZt0N1wyg
各有差異。123Please respect copyright.PENANAxsfYtJqLAf
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,123Please respect copyright.PENANAG18mBjsydy
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。