《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩214Please respect copyright.PENANAQd7vB5JyqJ
詩意要較為薄弱214Please respect copyright.PENANAQIWXSduLox
但仍是一首很棒的古詩214Please respect copyright.PENANAs9W3Fewdmb
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分214Please respect copyright.PENANAgOY5287vhu
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感214Please respect copyright.PENANArKEYBnyBUD
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。214Please respect copyright.PENANArKWgagR3no
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。214Please respect copyright.PENANApm887l3FIS
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。214Please respect copyright.PENANA2BlRH8vLi4
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。214Please respect copyright.PENANAY1DV1ylIX9
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。214Please respect copyright.PENANAB90FTMz2AN
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。214Please respect copyright.PENANAbZ2ihhW6G7
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。214Please respect copyright.PENANArNm4erT88h
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。214Please respect copyright.PENANAd4HbTAOEl0
每個人的角度皆為不同。214Please respect copyright.PENANAPVfW3RtM98
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有人感受深刻,214Please respect copyright.PENANA1pDaizeKdL
有人無感,214Please respect copyright.PENANAB28S4JUzBB
各有差異。214Please respect copyright.PENANAjWe3ZtZtyW
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,214Please respect copyright.PENANAEQiMDNxxVb
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。