《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩212Please respect copyright.PENANA39A9Fz09ip
詩意要較為薄弱212Please respect copyright.PENANAwi3LnuqLni
但仍是一首很棒的古詩212Please respect copyright.PENANA08sRNqfMCK
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分212Please respect copyright.PENANAfQ735VhI4i
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感212Please respect copyright.PENANAI4EW0SdsL9
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。212Please respect copyright.PENANAILTgsYaSg6
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。212Please respect copyright.PENANAK0DCO7CqKd
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。212Please respect copyright.PENANA0seoCdrlsb
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。212Please respect copyright.PENANAEMI6e6Lo5t
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。212Please respect copyright.PENANAS6hADvC2ch
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。212Please respect copyright.PENANAWrM0mSbQ64
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。212Please respect copyright.PENANANtnNki54e4
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。212Please respect copyright.PENANAyvgpHULQWK
每個人的角度皆為不同。212Please respect copyright.PENANAqZNNlK0lyn
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有人感受深刻,212Please respect copyright.PENANAONnwFJN2Lo
有人無感,212Please respect copyright.PENANAZ9jl6qvbue
各有差異。212Please respect copyright.PENANAerassCFbIY
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,212Please respect copyright.PENANAGdfWzGdLsN
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。