#1 片名,清晨30Please respect copyright.PENANAFlkTf4frlu
輕快緩和的配樂。灰藍色的天空、灰色的雲,地平線處慢慢出現白中帶黃的陽光,渲染般使天空和雲朵愈來愈亮。一一出現片名名單,頂、樓、的、週、末,清爽的手寫字體。30Please respect copyright.PENANAXb0So4P2I6
鏡頭下移。30Please respect copyright.PENANAWHZsj0Idfw
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#2 公寓頂樓陽台,清晨30Please respect copyright.PENANAlYJMNSen4q
品威(男,28歲)從紅磚水泥儲藏室裡搬出一張100號的油畫畫布,靠著儲藏室外牆放置,又搬出一把木凳坐下,從地上的背包拿出炭筆、軟橡皮、草稿畫冊,品威仔細挑選著畫冊裡無數黑白色的草稿,閉上一隻眼睛,遠遠地拿著炭筆朝著空白畫布比劃,打算正式打稿。30Please respect copyright.PENANAl5IDE1NeSI
鏡頭遠離,下移,沿著公寓外牆來到公寓頂樓套房,由窗戶進入。30Please respect copyright.PENANAK5Rtz7PiCW
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#3 套房內,清晨30Please respect copyright.PENANAhp5hAw4t8I
背景傳來微乎其微的隆隆馬達運轉聲。美雪沖泡了一馬克杯的即溶咖啡,坐到餐桌前,將筆電開機,啜飲一口咖啡後放下,滑鼠點開「長篇小說」資料夾,檔案密密麻麻,點開最下方的WORD檔「劣質品.docx」,搜尋之前留下的記號「※※※」,隨即開始打字,接續之前的小說創作。30Please respect copyright.PENANAxwl6t2PAYg
天愈來愈亮,馬達運轉聲停止,傳來「嗶嗶」的電子提示聲。美雪打完一個段落,打下「※※※」,存檔,起身走浴室,從洗衣機裡拿出洗好的衣服裝進洗衣籃。30Please respect copyright.PENANAW98H647esq
鏡頭遠離出窗戶,上移,沿著公寓外牆來到公寓頂樓陽台。30Please respect copyright.PENANAf60AYpmrxT
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#4 公寓頂樓陽台,白天30Please respect copyright.PENANAivoM4vWWZB
品威剛吃完自製的三明治,喝了一口水,畫布只有寥寥幾筆,看見美雪提洗衣籃與曬衣架走上來,立刻上前接手,提到公用的曬衣場,把衣服一一套上衣架,掛在鋼管曬衣桿上。30Please respect copyright.PENANAdiY1wQGWaa
美雪看了看品威的畫布,聊了兩句進度,朱大嬸(女,50歲)抱著兩件毯子也上到頂樓,美雪隨即下樓。30Please respect copyright.PENANAJ2lBEBTyfG
大嬸看到最好位置被佔去,忍不住皺眉,並向品威抱怨了兩句,把毯子披在水塔角落邊的老舊電纜線上。30Please respect copyright.PENANACa3NA53xY3
鏡頭遠離,下移,沿著公寓外牆來到公寓頂樓的套房,由窗戶進入。30Please respect copyright.PENANA3KsG8ssTcl
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#5 套房內,中午30Please respect copyright.PENANAp4ssZmXTSj
美雪一進門就走向餐桌,坐下來繼續打字,鏡頭不斷調近,特寫美雪全神貫注的神情,一口一口喝著咖啡,直到馬克杯見底,發出咕嚕聲,鏡頭拉遠,美雪不禁摸摸肚皮,是肚子餓了。一轉頭,品威已經做好午餐端了上來:一大碗公的肉絲蛋炒飯配一大鍋青菜豆腐貢丸湯。30Please respect copyright.PENANAij9dYTUsLy
美雪立刻收起筆電、鍵盤,張羅餐具,兩人坐定後,美雪等不及先吃了一口炒飯,立刻吐吐舌頭,露出太鹹的表情。品威趕緊也吃了一大口,舔舔嘴唇,滿臉疑問聳聳肩,彷彿沒嘗出味道。美雪輕笑,用筷子把整鍋炒重新攪拌均勻,吃沒兩口,窗外有個男人的聲音大喊。品威探頭去看,是對面公寓陽台的林大哥(男,40),他正收著衣服,指了指著天上的烏雲,說快要下雨了。30Please respect copyright.PENANADcCaDTTqs2
零星雨珠落下,美雪和品威趕緊跑出大門。30Please respect copyright.PENANAcT8505DcRL
鏡頭遠離出窗戶,上移,沿著公寓外牆來到公寓頂樓陽台。30Please respect copyright.PENANAX5ms9Tu517
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#6 公寓頂樓陽台,午後30Please respect copyright.PENANAUUmKxM0VCw
品威和美雪衝上頂樓陽台,美雪忙著把畫布收進儲藏室,品威迅速收起衣服,順便把阿姨的毯子也收了,大雨隨即落下。阿姨趕到後,接過毯子,連連道謝。30Please respect copyright.PENANAvi0lLIciXS
鏡頭遠離,下移,沿著公寓外牆來到公寓頂樓套房,由窗戶進入。30Please respect copyright.PENANAGOHV7wCquj
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#7 套房內,午後30Please respect copyright.PENANAyOu4SY4RYM
品威和美雪吃完午餐,品威洗碗,美雪摺衣服。品威看了一眼雨還沒停,正要拿出PlayStation 530Please respect copyright.PENANAvDVe1Sm63r
遊戲機,鈴聲響起,美雪接了一通手機,談話間提到要挑戰寫影評。品威收起遊戲機,打開電視的NETFLIX,兩人一起看瑞典電影《戮鹿北國》,劇情緩慢又壓抑,品威撐沒多久便打起瞌睡,美雪很認真作筆記,並看了第二次……突然電影中發出爆炸斑的聲響,品威嚇了一跳,愣了愣,突然面露驚訝表情站了起來,飛奔出大門。30Please respect copyright.PENANAG8PuJjBEdq
鏡頭遠離出窗戶,雨漸漸停了,上移,沿著公寓外牆來到公寓頂樓陽台。30Please respect copyright.PENANAUivyB6d7Du
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#8 公寓頂樓陽台,傍晚30Please respect copyright.PENANAU92GmhhYCX
品威從儲藏室搬出畫布,拿著炭筆大筆揮灑,彷彿爆炸般,畫面愈來愈豐富且充滿熱情,四周變得愈來愈金黃發亮,傾斜的夕陽迅速落下。30Please respect copyright.PENANAPtnf2ZZPOC
鏡頭遠離,下移,沿著公寓外牆來到公寓頂樓套房,由窗戶進入。30Please respect copyright.PENANACA54iJHwNx
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#9 套房內,晚上30Please respect copyright.PENANA9w0njqB1Lt
美雪一邊煮麵,一邊整理筆記。天完全黑了,品威精神飽滿地回來,一起吃完湯麵,品威洗碗,美雪搬出筆電整理筆記。品威打開電視,拿出PlayStation 5,開啟「FIFA 22」踢了一場90分鐘的足球賽。30Please respect copyright.PENANAE0WNP2oGzo
美雪舒展脖子、轉轉手腕,看了一眼時鐘,已經十一點,抬頭看向窗外,站起身並招手讓品威過來。品威連忙跑來,與美雪一起站在窗邊,面露驚喜的神色。30Please respect copyright.PENANATLGB4dOXfd
鏡頭遠離出窗戶,上移,沿著公寓外牆來到公寓頂樓陽台。30Please respect copyright.PENANAnLqcUTp0eT
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#10 公寓頂樓陽台,深夜30Please respect copyright.PENANA2y8zkR8Lc1
品威與美雪走上公寓頂樓陽台,互相摟著取暖,滿臉笑容看向天空。30Please respect copyright.PENANAr3ELqC0Ftf
鏡頭上移,晴朗的黑夜,一輪明月又亮又大又圓。30Please respect copyright.PENANAzV9iMp83MW
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〈 三。 完 〉30Please respect copyright.PENANAmfY81IqU9d
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