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煉氣士
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Author: 宅真人
煉氣士
Author: 宅真人
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No Plagiarism!Jylert9Jc1Vyj1PuFFzWposted on PＥNAＮＡ

暫停更新。363Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV8TVeYdCyb

一直以來想避免解釋性對話，但對於不知道故事背景的讀者來說反而會很痛苦，所以要加入更多事件來帶出背景。

煉氣士最初想以單主角作為主要方向，但目前發展會更偏向群像劇，這樣的話夜塵雨作為主角之一不管是個性還是未來成長都過於單薄

需要重新設定和理清新的道路。

最近看了很多關於故事堆疊和角色發展的相關書籍，考慮到故事發展還是決定暫停更新，先重新對角色設計。

感謝曾花時間看這篇故事的讀者，未來再見。

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煉氣士
Fantasy
Xuanhuan
Humor
Last updated: Mar 26, 2024
Total word count: 35,191
Total reading time: 117 Minutes
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宅真人
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