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夜臨的書評區（不開放報名，我想寫才寫）
ISSUE #46
Author: 夜臨 Yalin Hayami
Published:
Aug 10, 2024
夜臨的書評區（不開放報名，我想寫才寫）
Author: 夜臨 Yalin Hayami
Published:
Aug 10, 2024
ISSUE #46
【番外】資源統整區──小說檢討
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小說檢討　　　　　　　　　　　　製作者：夜臨

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作品名稱：　　　　　　　　　　　原作：

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一、企畫

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1.企畫過程（紀錄點子的發想過程）：

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2.想挑戰的地方、可能會有的障礙：

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二、實際撰寫後

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1.寫完作品後，覺得自己做得好的地方：

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2.覺得自己沒做好的地方：

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3.沒做好的地方能如何調整，可用什麼方法加強：

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4.自己很喜歡本作的什麼地方（提示：劇情、角色、結構、行文，或什麼都可以）

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三、回想撰寫時的心情（可提升自我理解）

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1.紀錄寫各個章節或段落時的感受（想到什麼就直接寫什麼）：

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四、未來的課題與想挑戰的事物

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1.可以是重新整理自己的問題、本次寫作的收穫與學到的東西，以及對什麼有興趣，或未來需要面對的課題，自己如何規劃：

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──分隔線──

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後記：

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基本上，這東西是讓自己能察覺寫作時的感受，紀錄自己體會到的東西，同時弄清楚當下的優點和能提升的地方，並且能促使自己訂下下一部作品的課題。

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有紀錄的習慣就能搞清楚自己之後該怎麼做，也能明白自己當時在想什麼、喜歡什麼，而就算很懶惰，也會重新回想整個故事，寫這東西的過程中會意外地感到有趣，因為你會誠實面對自己和這部作品。

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因此，我會建議想提升自己寫作能力的人，每當寫完一部作品後，就稍微記錄一下，這樣能更明確自己當下在什麼樣的位置，接下來能往怎樣的方向提升，並想想該怎麼達成。

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大概是這種感覺。可以自行參考。

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