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我和許多人一樣,寫作時也會冥想畫面,再依據冥想,將畫面寫下。422Please respect copyright.PENANADUj3ACUwRq
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但是用文字復刻畫面這件事,其實不是件容易的事。422Please respect copyright.PENANASrogLRybYi
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它的難度往往不是來自於靈感飛掠太快來不及抓住,就是思緒打結,所有感覺像塞車一樣堵在胸口,無法抒發,因此卡關。422Please respect copyright.PENANAeCVgTPtp3p
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以前遇到這些狀況,我的拖延症就會立馬出現,開始為寫不出來找藉口,比如:可能今天天氣不好,心情不好,導致氣血鬱結,腦子不靈光,所以應該要好好的休息一下,等狀況好了再寫!422Please respect copyright.PENANAc1o1oaIGrm
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因此,每天都在為自己寫不出來找藉口,像陷入循環一樣,日復一日、年復一年地過。422Please respect copyright.PENANAx9xmP0n2Kg
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一天別說五百個字,我能擠出五十個字就已經非常了不起了!422Please respect copyright.PENANAvpFnkk70rg
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直到有天,我認知「拖延症」的可怕,才開始強迫自己將所有休閒時間拿來寫作,即使只是在電腦前呆坐,我也不再用休息是為了走更長遠的路來離棄我的鍵盤。422Please respect copyright.PENANAVAJBSHo8Iu
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因此,慢慢地發現寫作這件事有點像停水多時的水龍頭一樣,打開那刻跑出來的可能只有轟轟嗡嗡的聲音而已,接著才會是一滴、兩滴,然後才有大一點的水量,而且很容易忽大忽小,非常不穩定!線路愈長、荒廢愈久的管路,出水或穩定的時間就愈緩慢!422Please respect copyright.PENANArr5GxSnLrH
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只有時常開啟它,才能愈快恢復水準!422Please respect copyright.PENANAeTkSXaqDU5
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所以只能寫出隻字片語的時候,我就拿這些斷續畫心智圖,慢慢地它就長出枝節,然後結實纍纍!有了心智圖,把心底的感覺或者畫面寫出來就容易多了!422Please respect copyright.PENANAbn0jH1Be8h
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我開始想到什麼就寫什麼,以自己最直白的語法、最常使用的文字將畫面寫下,寫下之後再補足語詞處理修辭後續。422Please respect copyright.PENANAyywthS3nJ6
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詩詞、散文或者小說,任何文體要到達出版境界,其實都是需要重新修整過的。422Please respect copyright.PENANAFp3xrYybUs
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如果您不是天才型寫手,無法一開始就導入意象、隱喻、伏筆等技巧,在這個重新修整的階段會是補上的最好時機。422Please respect copyright.PENANA0KtnxVak8w
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然而,在修辭階段我會盡量以精簡樸實的語詞進行文字替換,保留原始的靈感。422Please respect copyright.PENANAYj5acqzl6Q
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因為相信許多人都體會過靈感飛掠那瞬的感動,不管靈感來自哪裡,它可能是當下看到的畫面、聽到的音樂、嘗到的味道,或者是電光火石中的無中生有!422Please respect copyright.PENANAbM3OoooNy0
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但無論如何,它都是以最直接簡單的方式觸動您的官感,就像赤裸引發的刺激一樣!所以其實不需要過度包裝它,它才能完美地再去感動人。422Please respect copyright.PENANAXszdJr3GHt
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因此要努力去寫,寫不出來的時候就畫心智圖,一點一點地將靈感串聯成一條線、一張網,只要不放棄,一定可以把心中的畫面描述出來,寫出心底的那個故事!422Please respect copyright.PENANAmElACRWfCY
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這就是今天與大家分享的寫作心得,希望能幫助到畫面轉譯有困難或者跟我一樣有拖延症的朋友。感謝大家今天的收聽與收看。謝謝大家。422Please respect copyright.PENANAxEoXiXk7sV
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